这真是一场及时雨作文

篇一：及时雨作文

题目：正干旱时，下了一场大雨，这是“及时雨”；正寒冷时，有人送来棉衣，这是“及时雨”；正苦闷时，来了一位善解人意的朋友，也可以说是“及时雨”。在你的生活中有这样的经历吗？以“及时雨”为题写一篇文章。

及时雨

朋友就像一堆篝火，在寒冷时给你送来温暖；朋友就像一把伞，为你遮风避雨；朋友就像一场“及时雨”，在干旱时给你送来甘露……

还记得那次期中考试过后，我的成绩不堪入目。我失望了，不知道该怎么办，这么残酷现实令我无法接受。我失去了往日活泼的一面，开始变得孤僻起来，不愿与人接触。我的天空好像失去了多彩的颜色。 正当我不知所措的时候，我的死党----小红，过来了，拽着我说：“你不觉得你变了吗？你往日是永远不会被失败吓倒的，难道这小小的挫折就把你击垮了吗？我会帮助你的!”“我可以吗？”“可以的，一定行的！”小红的一番话让我重拾了信心。那天过后，我们两个形影不离。每天夜晚，小红都帮我复习

到很晚，有时还会被她的父母骂，我觉得不好意思了，可小红还硬着头皮跟我一起复习，我感动得热泪盈眶。我有不懂的题目就向她请教，然而小红呢？也是耐心地跟我分析每一道题，详细地讲给我听。讲一遍不会就讲第二遍，第二遍不会就再讲，直到我弄懂为止！

在第二次的考试中，不出我的意料，我取得了优异的成绩。我高兴万分，正在这时，小红蹦蹦跳跳地跑过来，说：“怎么样？我说过你一定会行的！”我们都笑了！这就是我的好朋友小红给我的支持，使我取得优秀的成绩！

朋友之间应该互相帮助，互相关心，互相学习，朋友之间不就应该这样吗！（80分）

当你伤心时，朋友会想办法给你快乐；当你遇到困难时，朋友会及时给你帮助；当你取得成绩时，朋友会为你高兴，并且鼓励你继续努力；当你……

什么是及时雨？及时雨是在干旱时的一场大雨，在炎炎夏日里的一杯冰水，在寒冬里的一件毛衣〃〃〃〃〃〃这些都是及时雨。在我的生活里，也曾有过那“及时雨”。

那是个炎热的下午，阳光炙烤着大地，知了叫个不停，天气又闷又热。没带水的我滴水未进、口干舌燥。我正有气无力地整理书包回家。“29号，这瓶牛奶给你喝。”老师正笑眯眯地对我说。我猛地一愣，抬头看见老师正满脸笑容把牛奶递给我。一摸到冰凉的牛奶，我一下子神清气爽。牛奶像炎热夏日里的丝丝凉风，凉透心扉，真是“及时雨”呀！我的嘴里顿时流出了口水。捧着这瓶牛奶，我似乎瞬间充满了力量。尝一小口，顷刻间清凉的甜液贯流身体的每个角落，似乎来到了仙境一般。老师和颜悦色地对我说：“怎么样，没那么口渴了吧？”我疑惑地问老师：“老师，您怎么知道我今天没带水呢？”老师说：“你瞧你，都满头大汗了，平日你肯定会猛地喝水，可今天怎么会不喝呢？瞧瞧你的饭盒袋就知道了！”我傻笑了一下。回到家后，我回味着牛奶的美味。打开冰箱，我又接连喝了好几瓶牛奶，奇怪，味道没什么特别呀？原来，“及时雨”没有大小，没有贵贱，当一个人需要帮助时，及时给予他帮助，就是世界上最美好的、最珍贵的、独一无二的东西。

这件事虽然过去了，可我仍记得清清楚楚。它将继续留在我心中，它让我感受到人间的真情。我会把这种真情继续传递下去，在别人需要时，化作人见人爱的“及时雨”。

名师点评：短文写得非常深刻细致，从一件“小事”体会到了事物没有高低贵贱，只有“及时”二字最为难得，这也印证了“锦上添花易，雪中送炭难”的道理。短文的描写手法，也正体现了“因小见大”的道理。并且，短文在描写老师“雪中送炭”，给小作者一瓶牛奶，小作者一饮而尽，牛奶的丝丝甘甜“贯流身体的每个角落”时，非常传神，也非常生动，使人感觉这真是一瓶“雪中炭”牛奶呢！

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篇二：及时雨

及时雨

持续很多天的高温，每天都是晴空万里。相对来说今天要好的多。今天没有太阳，给人一种忧郁的感觉。

下午，天渐渐暗下来，远处隐隐传出几声闷雷，乌云一朵朵。蚂蚁忙着将食物运往高处。狂风也来凑热闹，瞬间，乌云密布，黄沙漫天。接着，黄豆般大的雨点从天而降，霹霹啪啪地打在地上，树上，房上。空气中的温度一下子降了下来。

开始，雨就像有人拿苞米喂鸡那样撒了一大把，地面上留下铜钱大的齿轮印。片刻，这齿轮印也无影无踪。一时间，只觉得雾蒙蒙一片。屋外，已积了一层水。雨点落下的地方，溅起朵朵水花。树被雨水冲刷得一尘不染。雨还唤醒了沉睡好久的蜗牛，他们争先恐后地探出脑袋，在雨中散步。

雨渐渐得小了，停了，人们都出来透气了。空气是那么得清新，使人心情愉快。孩子们打水仗，在水中打滚。叫着，笑着，闹着。老人们则谈论着这场雨，说这场雨是及时雨。

是啊！真是一场及时雨。它不仅带走了夏日的炎热，还为我们带来了秋天的讯息。无私的雨啊，我赞美你！

篇三：500字小学生作文及时雨

及时雨

在这个多姿多彩的世界上，“及时雨”无处不在，而将“及时雨”带到我们身边的，可能是与我们朝夕相处的同学；可能是整天为我们操劳的老师；可能是日日夜夜为我们着想的妈妈；可能是为了我们在外工作的爸爸......但现在在我看来，那一次，同学送给我的“及时雨”，比任何一刻都温暖，都感人。

我们期末考试结束，要放寒假了。朝夕相处的同学们眼看就要分开了，我们这些小伙伴们依依不舍，有的跟父母借手机合影，留作纪念；有的一起相聚最后一次晚餐；有的手牵着手一起玩完最后一场游戏......而我，却是一个人，呆呆地望着天空，等待爸爸妈妈来接我回家。我看了看手表,“5点13分”，时间还早。我又看了看那些在一起玩耍的同学们，心里有些失落——因为他们都有伙伴陪着，而我却只是自己孤独地在那。“嘿！”有只手拍在我的肩上，我猛地回头一看——是卓欣！心想：她不是和同学道别离吗？怎么在这儿？想到这，我问到：“你怎么在这？”她似乎听了我这句话不是很高兴，用不高兴的语气对我说：“我想来找你玩嘛！”我猛地一下，只想哭，因为我本以为我在这最后一天会孤零零地，可没想到......

我与卓欣一起去图书馆看书，我们一起去操场慢跑，一起去捡小石子，一起去......后来，我们玩累了，便在操场上散步，而就在这时，我发现寂寞时朋友的关心是一场及时雨。

卓欣带给了我一场“及时雨”，能让我也像其他同学一样，过最后在一起开心的几小时！

教师的评语：

老师从习作中看出了云妮同学文笔的清新，习作中布局新颖，叙述用词简达，娓娓细说，真情流露，首尾呼应，是一篇结构严谨的习作。

篇四：及时雨

及时雨

一天中午，火辣辣的太阳公公高高的挂在天空，人们在树下乘凉，可是汗水不停向下流。小树苗无精打采的说：“好渴，好渴，我真想和点水”突然，乌云从四面八方聚拢，乌云慢慢变厚，天也慢慢变暗了，狂风呼啸，闪电像利剑一样快速从天而降。

过了一会儿，小雨打在了人们的身上，好凉快，好舒服，终于下雨了！雨慢慢的开始下大了，雨水砸到屋顶和窗户，乒乒乓乓??居然奏出了美妙的音乐。雨水顺着水管流到水坑里面了，。田里，大雨在浇灌稻子、玉米、大豆等农作物，积了一层雨水，淹没了可恶又讨厌的害虫。小树苗高兴地说：”好喝，好喝，真好喝”

雨终于停了下来，太阳公公又出来了。彩虹像桥一样连接在天空，白云和动物们高高兴兴的出来跳舞和唱歌。

这真是一场及时雨！它不仅带走了夏日的炎热，还为我们带来了秋天的讯息。

四年级:黑夜之雨

篇五：及时雨18-29

1．在考试中越是冷静，就越少出错。( the more?the more?)

The calmer you are in the exam, the fewer mistakes you will make.

2．你不必为此感到沮丧。(There．．．)

There is no need for you to feel depressed aboutit.

3．犯了这么严重的错误，你再狡辩也无济于事。(now that)

Now that you have made such a serious mistake, it's no use finding excuses.

4．中看的鞋子不一定耐穿。(necessarily)

Good-looking shoes do not necessarily last long.

5．我们的祖国从来没有像今大这样强大。(Never?)

Never before has our country been so powerful as itis today.

6．经理今天情绪不好，我刚才被他平白无故骂了一顿。(mood)

The manager is in a bad mood today, and just now I was scolded by him for no reason.

7．如果不满足身体对维生素的需求，我们就会缺乏足够的营养。(need)

If we don't meet our bodies' needs for vitamins, we will lack enough nutrition.

8．显而易见，他不愿意按吩咐去做。(obvious)

It is obvious that he is unwilling to do as he is asked to.

9．她被那部电影深深感动了，禁不住流下了泪水。(move)

She was deeply moved to tears by the film.

10．他很少意识到与别人交流的重要性。(seldom.)

Seldom does he realize the importance of communicating with others.

11．啤酒瓶可以循环再利用，但需要彻底清洗。(need)

Beer bottles can be recycled, but they need cleaning thoroughly.

12．你一收到这封信，就知道事情的来龙去脉了。( The moment?)

The moment you receive the letter, you'll know the whole story of the incident.

13．我们不能对他的所作所为熟视无睹。(notice)

We can't take no notice of what he has done.

14．彼得与队里的其他队员相比，既不够年轻也不够健壮。( neither?nor?)

Peter is neither as young nor as strong as the other members of the team.

15．我大可不必今天完成任务，但我还是完成了。(need)

I needn't have finished the task today, but I did anyway.

16．这张新专辑是以歌手母亲的名字命名的。(name)

The new album is named after the singer's mother.

17．我们没人反对周末去野营。(object)

None of us objects to going camping at the weekend.

18．在任何地方都找不到比瑞士更迷人的景色。( Nowhere?)

Nowhere else can we find more charming scenery than in Switzerland.

19．那个考试不及格的男孩与其说他笨不如说他马虎。(more?than)

The boy who failed the exam is more careless than stupid.

20．我现在急需一台电脑，可是我买不起。(need)

I'm badly in need of a computer now, but I can't afford one.

1．我突然想起雨伞忘在电影院了。(occur)

It occurred to me thatI had left my umbrella inthe cinema.

2．他不仅学习努力，而且积极参加各项活动。(part)

He not only studies hard but also takes an active part in various activities.

3．你根本不用愁眉不展，一切看起来都有条不紊。(order)

You don't need to worry at all as everything seems to be in good order.

4．只有持之以恒的锻炼才能使人延年益寿。(Only?)

Only by keeping doing exercise can human beings live a longer life.

5．这句谚语已代代相传。(pass)

The proverb has been passed down from generation to generation.

6．那位工程师平易近人，总是将自己的成功归功于同事们的帮助。(owe)

The engineer is easy to get along with and always owes his success to his colleagues' help.

7．这些天，杰克正忙于筹备他的婚礼。(occupy)

These days Jack is occupied in preparing for his wedding.

8．单单参加田径项目的就达到了50人。(participate)

Those who participate in track and field events alone add up to 50.

9．世博会将给上海一个机会来向世界展示其独特风韵。(opportunity)

The World Expo will give Shanghai an opportunity to show its unique charm to the world.

10．那位年轻教师对不太聪明的学生没有耐心。(patient)

The young teacher is not patient with less intelligent students.

11．他建议我们应该向学生开设更多的课程？(offer)

He suggested that we(should) offer more courses to the students.

12．出于好奇，年幼的他走上了魔术生涯。(out of)

Out of curiosity he began to follow a magic career at an early age.

13．只有当停电的时候我们才意识到电有多么重要。(Only?)

Only when there is a power cut will we realize how important electricity is.

14．这种场合不适合穿随便的衣服。(occasion)

Informal clothes are not suitable on this occasion.

15．那个漂亮女孩酷爱赶时髦。(passion)

The pretty girl has a passion for following fashion.

16．我的家人强烈反对我独自生活的计划。(oppose)

① My family is strongly opposed to my plan to live by myself.

② My family strongly opposes my plan to live by myself.

17．周围的邻居在听到了“救命”的尖叫声后，马上给警方打了电话。(On?)

On hearing the cry for help, the neighbours immediately called the police.

18．你可以将自己待会儿想说的话列个提纲。(outline)

You can draw an outline of what you want to say later.

19．医生坚持要这个病人立即动手术。(operate)

The doctor insisted that the patient (should) be operated on at once.

20．电子邮件和电话一样，在日常交流中起着重要作用。(role)

E-mail, as well as the telephone, plays an important role in daily communication.

1．他答应六点来接我，但到现在还没有出现。(pick)

He promised to pick me up at 6 o'clock, but he hasn't turned up yet.

2．你今晚能来参加我的生日聚会吗？(possible)

Is it possible for you to attend my birthday party this evening?

3．专家指出，医疗不能代替均衡饮食在保健中的作用。(point)

Experts point out that medical care can't replace a well-balanced diet in keeping healthy.

4．我宁愿去看电影而不愿待在家里。(prefer)

I prefer to go to the movies rather than stay home.

5．这种烹调风格是这个国家西南部特有的。(peculiar)

This style of cooking is peculiar to the southwest of the country.

6．这一建议是否能付诸实施仍然是个问题。(practice)

It remains a question whether the suggestion can be put into practice.

7．中国制造的鞋子价廉物美，深受当地顾客的欢迎。(popular)

Shoes made in China are cheap but good, so they are very popular with the local customers.

8．真可惜，在我离开这里之前你回不来！(pity)

It is a pity that you won't be back before I leave here.

9．比起历史，我的学生更喜欢小说，因为小说更吸引人。(prefer)

My students prefer fiction to history because the former is more attractive.

10．无论家人怎样劝说，她仍然执意要和那个外国人结婚。(persist)

No matter how her family tried to persuade her, she persisted in marrying the foreigner.

11．没有远大目标的人是不可能取得成功的。(possibility)

① There is no possibility that a person without an ambition will achieve success.

② There is no possibility of a person without an ambition achieving success.

12．埋怨也没用，人家根本不理睬。(point)

There is no point in complaining as they take no notice at all.

13．我们目前面临的问题是如何为明天的面试做好充分的准备。(preparation)

The problem facing us now is how to make full preparations for the interview tomorrow.

14．上海在最近十年发生了巨大的变化。(place)

Great changes have taken place in Shanghai in the past ten years.

15．那位母亲因儿子打坏玻璃而赔了邻居10美元。(pay)

The mother paid her neighbor 10 dollars for her son's breaking the window.

16．我为你拍照时，请站好别动。(photo)

Please stand still while I'm taking a photo of you.

17．那个女孩因在这次灾难中的勇敢表现而受到高度赞扬。(praise)

The girl is highly praised for her brave behavior in the disaster.

18．他太年轻，不适合担任校长职位。(position)

He is too young to hold the position as headmaster.

19．我正计划今年暑假去游览一些名胜古迹。(plan)

I'm planning to visit some places of interest and historical sites during this summer holiday.

20．我竭力劝说他不要赌博，但他根本听不进去。(persuade)

1 tried hard to persuade him not to gamble, but he didn't listen at all.

1．必须采取严厉措施以阻止对苏州河的进一步污染。(prevent)

Severe action must be taken to prevent the Suzhou River being further polluted,

2．这份工作要求太高，没几个人能胜任。(qualified)

The job is so demanding that few people are qualified for it.

3．许多书籍和杂志能给我们提供精神食粮。(provide)

Many books and magazines can provide us with spiritual food.

4．戴太阳眼镜可以保护眼睛免受强烈阳光的灼伤。(protect)

Wearing sun glasses can protect your eyes from the strong sunlight.

5．你认为这学期谁在物理方面进步很大？(progress)

Who do you think has made great progress in physics this term?

6．这本小说是专门写给年龄在7至12岁之间的孩子们的。(range)

The novel is specially written for the children ranging in age from 7 to 12.

7．他从不把今天的事拖到明天。(put)

He never puts off what must be done today till tomorrow.

8．结果证明这项任务比预想的要难得多。(prove)

The task proved to be much more difficult than expected.

9．她为这次求职面试做好了充分准备，一点也不紧张。(prepare)

She is well prepared for the job interview, so she isn't nervous at all.

10．你仅凭知识并非就有资格教书。(qualify)

Knowledge alone doesn't qualify you to teach/as a teacher.

11．他在工作中粗心大意，却被提升为经理。(promote)

He is careless in work, but was promoted to manager.

12．毫无疑问，他将因不遵守校规而受到严惩。(punish)

No doubt he will be severely punished for disobeying the school rules.

13．知道如何对突发事件作出适当的反应是十分明智的。(react)

It is very wise to know how to react properly to unexpected incidents.

14．令人费解的是，他总喜欢不懂装懂。(pretend)

What's puzzling is that he always pretends to know what he doesn't know.

15．持续了五个星期的森林大火终于被扑灭了。(put)

The big forest fire which had lasted five weeks was put out at last.

16．她儿子成了一名飞行员，为此她感到自豪。(proud)

Her son became a pilot, which she was proud of.

17．当他意识到自己的健康每况愈下时，他决定戒烟。(quit)

He decided to quitsmoking when he realized that his health was going from bad to worse.

18．保险公司已经承诺赔偿我们的损失。(promise)

The insurance company has promised to make up for our loss.

19．肇事司机故意隐瞒事实以逃避惩罚。( purpose)

The driver who had caused the accident hided the facts on purpose to escape punishment.

20．该医疗小组正准备明天飞往灾区。(prepare)

The medical team is preparing to fly to the disaster area tomorrow.

1．由于种种原因，我昨天彻夜难眠。(reason)

For a variety of reasons, I stayed awake all night yesterday.

2．高中生没必要事事靠父母。(rely)

High school students needn't rely on their parents for everything.

3．很遗憾地告诉你，你的提议在会上被拒绝了。(regret)

I regret to tell you that your proposal was turned down at the meeting.

4．由于飞行员罢工，所有航班不得不取消。(result)

As a result of the pilots' strike, all the flights have to be canceled.

5．如果你拒绝吃蔬菜，你只好继续饿着。(refuse)

If you refuse to eat the vegetables, you'll have to remain hungry.

6．在关闭计算机前，记得将文件储存起来。(remember)

Remember to save the document before you switch off the computer.

7．每个人都应学会面带微笑、乐于助人。(ready)

Everyone should learn to wear a smile and be ready to help others.

8．我们必须确保这些新产品符合环保要求。(requirement)

We must make sure that these new products meet the requirements of environmental protection.

9．人们常常把美丽单纯的女孩与天使联系在一起。(relate)

People often relate beautiful and innocent girls to angels.

10．因为缺少实践，他没有通过驾驶考试。(reason)

The reason why he didn't pass the driving test was that he lacked practice.

11．我们可以用机器人代替人类做一些有危险的工作。(replace)

We can replace man with robots to do some dangerous jobs.

12．工作环境的改善并没有带来高效率。(result)

The improvement of the working conditions didn't result in high efficiency.

13．刘翔为我们中国人赢得了巨大的荣誉，被认为是民族英雄。(regard)

Liu Xiang has won great honor for us Chinese, and is regarded as a national hero.

14．时间有限，这个问题留待下一次会议讨论。(remain)

The time is limited, so the problem remains to be discussed at the next meeting.

15．那个年轻人迟疑了一会儿才回答问题。(reply)

The young man hesitated for a while before he replied to the question.

16．开会前，秘书准备好了所有相关材料。(ready)

The secretary got all the related materials ready before the meeting.

17．这张照片使我想起了我们在夏令营里度过的日子。(remind)

This photo reminds me of the days we spent in the summer camp.

18．令他遗憾的是，那些原来支持他的人现在转而反对他。(regret)

To his regret, those who were once for him are against him now.

19．作为一个成年人，你应该对你的言行负责。(responsible)

As an adult, you should be responsible for what you say and do.

20．据报道，这个地区的禽流感已经得到控制。(report)

① It is reported that the bird flu has been brought under control in this area.

② The bird flu is reported to have been brought under control in this area.

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