珍藏作文100

篇一：2014年珍藏作文大合集-整理版

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篇二：作文100篇

100 Sample English Compositions

1. My Opinion On Having a Part-time Job

2. Work and Play

3. My Opinion on the Band 4 English Test

4. The Value of Time

5. On Friendship

6. Youth

7. Is Money Everything?

8. The Importance of Confidence

9. Computers

10. The 21st Century

11. My Opinion of Today’s Education

12. Advertising

13. Traffic Problems in Our City

14. A Letter to a Roommate

15. Why a Sense of Humor Is Important

16. The Lecture Method & the Group Learning

Method

17. How People Spent Their Holidays

18.Getting to Know the World Outside the

Campus

19. Advantages of a Job Interview

20. What Would Happen if There Were No Power

21. Generation Gap

22. Friendship

23. Relationship Between Teachers and Students

24. Should Men and Women Be Equal?

25. Water Pollution

26. The Problem of Human Pollution

27. Nature and Man

28. Rural Life

29. Reading Classics

30. Unemployment in China

31. The Hope Project

32. The Heavy Bags of School Children

33. Traveling

34. Reading

35. The Role of Computer

36.The Place of Science and Technology in life

37. Fighting Against Smoking

38. Learn English by English Songs

39. Protection of Environment

40. Honesty

41. Re-employment of Laid-off Workers

42. The Grain Crisis

43. Looking Backward and Looking Forward

44. Video Games

45. Changes in Student Enrollment in China 46. Beliefs 47. Should Private Cars Be Encouraged in China? 48. The Importance of Education 49. Smoking 50. My First Job 51. Birth control 52. Advertisements 53. Fighting Criminals 54. Opportunity and Success 55. Private Car 56. On Developing Tourism 57. The Value of Time 58. Are Prizes a Good Thing? 59. On Keeping a Diary in English 60. On University Tuition System in China 61. The Fight Against Crime 62. My opinion on Keeping One’s Word 63. The Rush to Cities 64. On Developing Listening Ability 65. My Favorite Program 66. Water 67. How to Spend the Weekend 68. Hope 69. Treasure Water 70. How to Solve Housing Problem in Big Cities 71. Is failure a Bad Thing? 72. Is Stress a Bad Thing? 73. Fresh Ways to Spend Spring Festival 74. Donating Blood Is a Glorious Thing 75. Competition 76. On Diet 77. How to Learn a Foreign Language Well? 78. Application for a Job 79. Resume 80. A Letter of Recommendation 81. Harmfulness of the fake commodities 82. Green Olympics 83. What Will Happen If China Enters WTO? 84. Fast Food 85. Preserving Natural Resources 86. Global Shortage of Fresh Water 87. Advantages of Five-Day week 88. Application Form 89. Cars and Air Pollution 90. A Matter of Approach

100 Sample English Compositions

91.Choosing a Teacher for Certain Courses

92. Traveling Abroad

93. The Problem Of Piracy

94. A Campaign Speech

95. Your Help Needed

96. A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction

97. Calls for Much Higher Standard for Service

Industry

98. A Suggestion to a Friend

99. Reduce Waste on Campus

100. The Day My Classmate Fell Ill

1. My Opinion On Having a Part-Time Job

Some students maintain that holding a part time job, unless one is serious difficult financial difficulties, is not worthwhile. It is a waste of one’s precious time, and is therefore not favorable to one’s studies. Indeed, some students receive poorer marks after they take up temporary jobs. Moreover, doing part time jobs may lead to closer contacts with the dark side of society and to the degeneration of the students’ moral standards.

On the other hand, many people believe that a part time job does more good than harm. First, students can become financially independent, or at least partly so. This is especially important to student from poor families. Second, this helps them to cultivate a spirit of independence. Third, early contacts with the various aspects of the community, bright or dark, will enhance student’s abilities to work in future.

On the whole the advantage of a part time job seems to outweigh its disadvantages. Therefore, it is necessary to encourage students to plunge into the community as early as possible so long as they know how to resist evil temptations.

2. Work and Play

People of the older generations tend to advocate more work and less play. My father, for example, is a workaholic. He sits up reading scientific literature every night. He seldom watches TV or goes to a cinema. In his opinion, recreational activities are just a waste of time. One should devote most, if not all, of his time to study and work.

Many contemporary youngsters, however, think otherwise. They believe that they should enjoy themselves while they are still young, or they will regret it when they get old. It is not uncommon to see many young people spend too much time playing video games, watching TV, playing football. Whenever there is a holiday, many students, instead of engaging in studies, rush to scenic spots or historical sites to enjoy themselves.

In my view, we should not go to either of the extremes. While too much recreation ruins study and work, ―all and no play makes Jack a dull boy‖. A poorer arrangement of work and play is obviously the best solution.

3. My Opinion on the Band 4 English Test

Since the Band 4 English Test was initiated ten years ago, it has displayed its superiority in many aspects. With a clear, definite objective in mind, students have worked harder than before. In order to pass the Band 4 test, many students work late into the night, or even until small hours in the morning. Teachers, of course, also contribute their share by improving methods, showing more concern for their students.

However, the test is not without its problems. At least three serious drawbacks can be readily identified. First, since the English composition account for only 15 percent of the total mark, this is not enough to motivate students to invest enough time in writing practice. Second, as oral proficiency is not measured by the test, students and teachers tend to ignore oral practice in class. Third, some students do not continue their English studies after they have passed the Band 4 Test.

To solve the problems, it is necessary to increase the proportion of writing in the test. The new test forms like dictation and short answer questions are helpful. Oral tests can be organized by each university. So students will learn English in a more balanced way.

4. The Value of Time

Time is precious. A famous Chinese saying goes like this: ―A second of time cannot be purchased with an ounce of gold.‖ Time is so valuable that nothing can buy it. The lost time will never come back; therefore, we should cherish time.

Waste of time can mean disasters. Many people have been wasting their time all the time, some high school students squander almost all the time watching TV, playing video games, singing pop songs, idolizing pop stars. As a result, they fail to pass the university entrance examinations or the job interviews. Apparently, we should devote most of out time to useful activities. For example, students can use the early morning for physical exercises or academic studies. In class, we should concentrate on what the

teachers present and take notes. In short, if we spend our time wisely, we shall benefit a great deal.

5. On Friendship

Friendship means being friendly to each other or making friends with one another. Human beings are social animals. They do not live in isolation. They need each other both physically and emotionally.

However, some people distort friendship by forming small groups that are harmful to others or even to the whole community. In the university some students from the same city or province form an association to help each other. But such associations often exclude students from other parts of the country, and thus do not promote friendship in a broad sense.

True and lasting friendship is based on a more solid foundation. Real friends share the same ideal. While marching toward their common objective, they held each other. If one makes a mistake, his friend will not hesitate to point it out for him, because he knows the frank criticism will help him. What we need is this type of genuine friendship

6. Youth

Youth is a golden age in our lives, often compared to the rising sun. Young people are full of vigor and vitality, which arouse the most pleasurable emotions, such as first love. Youth is also an age of awakening, when the world looks new and feels mysteriously alive.

We should try to accomplish something when young. Youth is a good time for learning, especially for acquiring more knowledge. We are sensitive to everything and we should make full use of out youth to lay a good foundation for the future, which can then be truly successful.

Sometimes we hear our elders remark about our young people, ―Youth is always wasted on the young.‖ What they principally refer to is youth’s lack of awareness of the passage of time. What wise advice! If we treasure it, we can say when we become old, the days of our youth have been living to their fullest.

7. Is Money Everything?

In a modern society money plays a very important role. We need money to buy what we want. In this case, money is important, but it is not everything.

With money we can buy whatever material goods we need. Sometimes money is such a magic thing that it can help us make our dream come true and make our life comfortable. On the other hand, money can also bring some trouble to us. Once we are rich, someone may confess to our friend, but he will desert us if we lose prosperity. Though we have a lot of money, we can not buy real friendship.

In a word, money is important but not everything.

8. The Importance of Confidence

Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one would ever achieve anything, especially when one is faced with drawbacks or hardships. This truth seems to be self-evident. However, in reality we do see a lot of people who complain that they lack the ability to do something or that their difficulties are too great to overcome. For some, this might be true. But for many others, this only shows that they have lost heart.

Why do people often feel frustrated even though they are capable of doing something: there are, among others, two main reasons. First, these people do not have a correct estimate of themselves. Second, they overestimate the difficulties.

It is possible to build up faith in oneself by having the right attitude toward one’s own abilities. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: ―Where there is a will, there is a way.‖ Confidence is the premise for fulfilling a task successfully.

9. Computers

The computer is a wonderful machine. It is the most important invention in many years. Today it is used widely. By the year 2000 the computer will probably touch the lives of everyone, even people in remote villages.

Computers can do many kinds of work. For example, in a big shop, information about a sale is put

into a computer. During the night the computer works on the information from all the sales that day. The next morning the manager has a report on everything that was sold and also on everything that will soon be sold out. In scientific researches, a scientist can ―ask‖ the computer questions, and the computer ―answers‖ on the screen. It is almost like talking to another scientist.

In the last few years there have been great changes in computers. They now can do most of the things people can do, though most scientists agree that computers cannot take the place of humans. Who knows what the computers of tomorrow will be like? Will they make life better, or will they bring suffering to people? People of today will have to decide how to use the computer tomorrow.

10. The 21st Century

Life in the 21st century must be very interesting. Perhaps we can go on holiday to the moon, and some scientists will live under the sea. Maybe we will have video telephones in every home. When we talk on the phone, we’ll be able to see the person at the other end of the phone.

Perhaps we can have a computer in every classroom. And it can help us do lot s of things such as solving difficult mathematical problems, reviewing our lessons and doing our homework. Perhaps some children won’t need to go to school everyday. They can study at home because there will be more educational programs on radio and television.

Maybe at that time every family will have a robot, and it can do all kinds of housework for them. Then what shall we do at that time? I think we may have more time to study and learn how to use and control these machines. Well, let’s wait till the 21st century.

11. My Opinion of Today’s Education

I think one of the main problems with today’s education is that too much emphasis is placed on test score. It has become the most important criterion for college enrollment. A student, however creative and intelligent, will not be admitted into a college if his total scores are just one point less than required. It is also one of the crucial factors either in job assignment or in employment competitions.

The competition for high scores among students becomes intense. Students find themselves concentrating more on strategies to achieve high scores than on requiring knowledge. They will play truant of some subsidiary courses, skip over the substance which will not be tested on, even pump teachers for hints on upcoming exams.

Teachers are apt to give their students high scores. As their job is judged mainly by the students’ performance in terms of scores, some teachers tend to set easy papers to test their students on or narrow down the scope of the exam. Some teachers even leak ―accidentally‖ the exam questions or lower their criterion of scoring.

As a result, the competition for high scores becomes so intense that it actually defeats the academic goals of education.

12. Advertising

Nowadays advertisements are found everywhere. They smile to us from the television screen, shout to us from the radio loudspeakers, wave invitingly to us from every page of the newspaper and magazine, pluck at our sleeves on the bus and escalator, signal to us from roadside billboards all day and flash messages to us in colored lights all night.

Advertisements fill almost every minute of a day. You will be waked up by the ad. songs from outside in the early morning. The newspapers you pick up after lunch are full of ads, from clothes, cosmetics to Coca Cola, virtually anything that can be purchased. The films shown on TV in the evening are often interrupted by commercials.

No one can avoid being influenced by ads. Is it possible for us to sit indifferent to a certain beautiful, convenient, versatile vacuum cleaner show on TV when you are considering to buy one? Is it possible for us not to be attracted to a certain heating device, which claims its wonderful effect of curing chronic diseases and even of helping toward one’s longevity?

As a matter of fact, advertisement has become one of the most authoritative voice speaking to us today:

篇三：珍藏作文

珍藏作文

珍藏作文（一）

童年的记忆总是模模糊糊，而那一次。铭记在心，那是我珍藏已久的记忆。

**年的夏季，我刚满7岁多一点。酷暑难耐，父母带我和哥哥到游泳馆去戏水避暑。我看见一群大哥哥、大姐姐像鱼儿一样在泳池里遨游、嬉戏打闹，十分羡慕。而我从小就对水很恐惧，去到泳池边，却迟迟不敢下水，爸爸一下就看出了我的心思，他把我扶下水里，咦？不像我想象中的那么恐怖，我慢慢的开始在水里蹬腿。我看见哥哥游得那么快，心想：我都可以下到水里了，为什么要在原地蹬腿呢！可就是这个想法，让我悲剧了一场。我学着哥哥的样子，把手抬起来，往下，可就是游不起来。我气馁的坐在泳池边，哥哥上来对我说：“做什么事情都要有耐心，就像你的游泳，要慢慢来，不能急。”我听到这句话，脑子开窍了似的：对哦，什么事都要慢慢来！之后那几天，我一直泡在泳池里，夏天要过去了，我终于学会了游泳。其实，我真的很棒！

现在的我，已经上中学了，在这高手云集的班级，在我拿到第一次的月考成绩时，我受刺激了，挫折让眼泪涌上眼眶。我的心情一下从巅峰跌到了低谷。而当我知道我拖了班级的后腿，在那之后，我不敢面对我的老师，我的同学，甚至我的朋友。我开始努力学习，复习！终于功夫不负有心人！在段考之中，我取得的算是比较好的成绩！其实，我真的很棒！

想起我摔倒时，爬起来，不哭不闹，还笑呵呵的对父母说没事时。其实，我真的很棒！想起我第一次自己洗衣服时，而不用父母帮忙。其实，我真的很棒！当我第一次给妈妈洗脚时，她摸摸我的头，欣慰地说：“孩子长大了，真乖！”那一刻！其实，我真的很棒！

其实！我真的很棒！

珍藏作文（二）

回忆是一点一点积累起来的，就如一个>剧本，每个人都是>故事里的主角，不同的是每个主角的生活遭遇却千差万别。

其实生活也是回忆，因为生活的每个细节都将会变为回忆。在《生活》栏目主持人文清广告里不就有一句：“用心体会，生活原来有滋有味。”生活就是一本书，收藏生活就如同收藏千万种不同的书籍，经常翻阅它，便有许多不同的感悟，令人百看不厌。 回忆童年，让你沉醉于甜蜜快乐中，想想小时候的可爱贪玩吧。记得小时候，我是个倔强的孩子，不但倔强还很调皮，爱玩“刺激”的游戏。记得那时我曾和家人玩“捉迷藏”，害得家人翻天覆地的找我。还记得我小时候最爱玩石头，爸爸告诉我，我喜欢玩石头是因为别人经常说，石头里有许多不同的纹路，不同的图案，十分漂亮。我听了之后好奇心不由而来，我经常去捡石头，四处乱扔。想把石头砸烂了，看看里面是怎样的，好像是从那时起，我对石头有了一种奇妙的感觉，也许就因为这种感觉，把我们紧紧联系在一起，直到现在我仍在收藏着不同的石头。“人们说‘玩物丧志’，而玩石头可不一样，玩的石头都是奇石，归于发现的艺术，不是谁都有心性来玩的，谁都玩得出的。它需要雪澡情操，澹泊的态度，天真，美好，这就是缘分。”这就是收藏石头的爱好者贾平凹说的。

回忆童年，每一次都有一种不同的感觉，珍藏回忆，让你的生活更充实，更美好。 珍藏作文（三）

每个人在自己的心中，都有一些难以忘怀的珍藏。每当我看到那一副羽毛球拍，就

能激起我那久违了的尘封的记忆。那就像一颗颗璀璨的珍珠，永远令人难忘。

我收藏的极品是那副羽毛球拍。虽然它已经陈旧了，有些地方掉漆了，但在我看来，它仍是无价之宝。他保存着我最珍贵的友情。直到现在，看到那副羽毛球拍，那段刻骨铭心的友谊，恍如昨天。

那是我小学六年级时候的事情，我们学校当时流行打羽毛球。无论高年级学生，还是低年级学生，都在打羽毛球。我和好朋友小刚也非常喜欢打羽毛球，可是我们没有球拍，向其他同学借，无奈他们不借给我们，我们下决心自己买。

我们决定从父母给的早餐和零花钱中节省。经过一个月的省吃俭用，我们两人攒的钱合起来买了一副羽毛球拍。那时，别提我们心里有多高兴了，感到自己是天下最幸福的人了，而小刚是我最好的兄弟。我们发誓，今后我们两人有福同享，有难同当。 到了初中，小刚被父母带到打工的城市上学，就再也没有回来。而羽毛球也不那么流行了，当我还是爱打羽毛球。

小刚，不知你现在还打羽毛球吗？等你回来的那一天，我们再一决高下！可是，我实在不知道，那又是何年那月？

望着眼前的羽毛球拍，我拿起它，把它放在柜子里，珍藏好它。

因为珍藏它，就是要让那段纯真的友情永远留在我的记忆里。

篇四：童年趣事作文100字

童年趣事作文100字

篇一：童年趣事作文100字

我小时候的趣事很多，唯独那一件事令我难以忘怀，让我给你介绍一下吧。

还记得那时我三岁的时候，经常看见外婆在厨房里忙来忙去，于是就对做菜产生了兴趣，一天，趁外公和外婆不在家，我拿起一个大盆，往里面毫不犹豫地放进了一大把面粉，水，盐，醋精，酵母，大米，味精等等调料，对了还有酱油，然后用勺子搅来搅去，看着这摊烂泥，我想，为什么外婆的能成型呢。想着想着，外婆已经回来了，哭笑不得的对我说，你放了这么多的水，当然不能成型了??

每当我想起这件事，都可以笑出声来。

篇二：童年趣事作文100字

每个人都有童年的趣事，每当我想起童年的趣事，就会情不自禁的笑出来。

那年我才5岁，还不懂事。那时我总是分不清小鸡和小鸟的区别，因此闹出了笑话。

那时我在鸡圈里抓到了一只小鸡，我以为它是鸟，于是就把鸡翅膀上的羽毛给剪了。还把它拴在了桌腿上。这时奶奶回来了，奶奶问我在干什么？我回答：“我抓到了一只小鸟儿玩。”奶奶见了哭笑不得地说：“这是鸟？”

每当我想起这件事，我就会情不自禁的笑出来，因为这太搞笑了！

篇三：童年趣事作文100字

童年多么美好，童年多么有趣，只可惜时光飞逝，我即将告别我的童年，但在童年里发生的一件件趣事却被我深深的印在了我的脑海之中。 那是在我六岁的时候，妈妈上街了，只剩下我一个人在家看电视，电视上的淘气王正拿着妈妈的口红给自己化装呢！我觉得很有趣，于是也拿着妈妈的化妆品给自己“美容”了一番。 我首先挤出妈妈的口红，再自己的嘴唇上随便抹了两道，再照照镜子，“呀，抹多了”我无奈的对镜子笑了笑。原来，口红本应该抹到嘴角，而我不但在嘴唇上抹了口红，连周围我都抹成了红色。 “这是什么？红铅笔？”我拿出一支如同我的彩铅笔一样的东西自言自语到。我用它把眉毛涂红了。 最后，我拿出妈妈的小刷子，沾些红粉化脸蛋；沾些绿粉化手背?? 二十分钟的巨大工程终于完成了！ “叮咚”妈妈回来了，当她看到我时差点晕过去，也难怪，因为这时的我已是一个通红的脸蛋、绿色的手背、红色的嘴唇的人了，似乎一个张牙舞爪的怪物了。 童年多么美好，童年多么有趣，我要把童年里发生的一件件趣事永远的珍藏。

篇四：童年趣事作文100字

童年生活中，我们是多么快乐。冬天里，我们一起打雪仗；夏天，我们一起玩水。每个人都有有趣的童年，下面就给你讲讲我的童年吧 ！

小时候，我最喜欢和>小伙伴坐在家乡的一块大石头上轮流讲>故事。一次，我又和小伙伴们在石头上讲故事了，我们开心极了。我一下讲了好几个幽默故事，逗得伙伴们哈哈笑。突然，一只小青蛙在旁边呱呱叫，像是在鼓掌，我们听了，又笑起来。玩着到了深夜，爸爸把我们一个一个抱回家。

>这就是我的童年！

篇五：童年趣事作文100字

童年是一艘装满糖果的船，童年是一支画笔绘画着多彩的童年，童年装满了玩具，也装满了欢乐。

让我难忘的还是小时候的“傻事”。家里有一盆蝴蝶花，很漂亮可是美中不足的是—没有香味。这让我小小的心受到到了震撼。这样美丽的花竟然没有香味，我眼睛一转。嘻嘻。

趁今天妈妈不在家给妈妈一个惊喜，让妈妈今天能够闻到蝴蝶花的香气。于是我从妈妈的化妆台上，拿了三瓶香水挑了一瓶最好味的，浇到蝴碟花的根部，让它散发到花芯。

篇六：童年趣事作文100字

美丽的夜晚，忽闪忽闪的星星布满了神秘莫测的天空。一轮皎洁的明月，像一个银盘嵌在深蓝的空中，洒下一片银辉，月亮周围罩上了一层淡淡的圆晕。

记得五年前，也是这么宁静而又美丽的夜晚，我望着月亮出了神，想的可多哩！那时候常听老人说，用手指月亮，就会被割掉耳朵的。这种说法，在今天看来，当然是荒唐可笑的，可对那时的我来说，就不一样了。那是我还没跨进校门，作为一个天真幼稚的孩子，居然相信这是真的。不过我总有点怀疑！

篇七：童年趣事作文100字

现在，我轻松看到幼儿园就会想起一件事：以前，我很讨厌上幼儿园。因为在那里犯错要被老师骂，在家里就轻松多了。我发现日历是红的，我就不用上学，日历是黑的，我就要上学。我去问妈妈。妈妈说：“只有日历是红的，你就不用上学，妈妈也就不上班。”可是，我发现过了几个黑的，才一个红的。一天，我直接狂扯日历，妈妈急忙把我抱开。我一直喊：“我要红的，我要星期日。”现在，我是四年级的学生了，我可喜欢上学了，再也不关心日历是红的还是黑的。

篇五：100篇2011年中考满分作文带点评非常好

1.2011山东威海中考满分作文（1篇）

那令我感动目光

阳光掠过时间的长河，在记忆的贝壳上刻下道道印痕；波浪翻滚冲刷，真金慢慢沉下，阳光在长河里最终映照出一道道令人感动的目光。

专注的目光

“刘翔??刘翔??”赛场上的欢呼声一浪高过一浪，站在起跑线上的刘翔似乎并没有听到，他边凝神边做着准备工作。一位政府要员走上前去，拍拍他的肩膀说了些什么，刘翔竟毫无反应，更没有抬头看别人一眼。见此，电视机前的我不禁为他捏了一把汗：“难道刘翔今天的状态不好？”

发令枪响了，刘翔似离弦的箭一般冲出去，奋力跨越一道道栏杆，眼神似鹰一般专注。最终，“12秒88”，刘翔打破了世界纪录！

赛后，记者采访了刘翔：“你跨栏时知不知道有人就快要赶超上你了？”刘翔微笑：“比赛时，我只看到终点。”

锁定目标，专注于此，只有全神贯注，才能击败敌人。飞人刘翔的精神令我钦佩，他专注的眼神更令我感动。

坚定的目光

“背着妹妹上学”的洪战辉是个相貌普通、衣着平凡的青年。在他还是一个满脸稚气的孩子的时候，命运就让他失去温暖的家庭，一个稚气的孩子竟要承担起整个家庭的生活重担，可他没有泄气，咬紧牙关，微笑面对，他用稚嫩的双手撑起支离破碎的家庭，用坚定的目光告诉世人，好日子就在前头。当同龄人还在父母怀中嬉笑时，男子汉的气节已在他心间发芽。 类似的故事也许还有很多，或许更加令人感动，可是，洪战辉的眼神告诉所有的人，再苦再难我也会坚持的。这样执著的信念，如此坚定的目光，感到了中国所有的人。

避让的目光

萨科齐先生选法国总统后，曾来中国纺问，并来到中国最高学府清华大学与那里的学子亲切交谈。会上，萨科齐温文尔雅的气质与谦逊的态度让人难忘，尤其是他的睿智更让我想起了他成功的一个关键因素，就是他那睿智的避让。

竞选法国总统时，萨科齐面临的关键环节就是与另一位候选人罗琳女士进行电视辩论，这将最终决定两人的胜负。

开始时，萨科齐一改咄咄逼人的态度，而是一味避让，让罗琳的高雅形象尽失，于是，他获得了更多的选票。可以说，是他那睿智的避让，使其成功。

他的目光让我感动，因为避让的目光背后，隐蔽的是智慧。

思绪飞回，眼前家人的目光同样令我感动。当我有病时，有母亲温柔的目光；当我茫然时，有父亲鼓励的目光；当我无助时，有外公慈爱的目光??

我知道，不论何时，这些令人感动的目光都会伴我成长，让我的人生常存感动。

【点评】

这是一篇从立意到结构、从语言到内容都能够彰显出作者的才情及实力的文章，其特点如下：

1.主题鲜明，结构严谨。全文抓住标题中的重点词语“那目光”，选取了生活中的名人和感到中国的人物作为描写对象，抓住其突出的特点，从“目光”的角度入手，写了刘翔那“专注的目光”，洪战辉那“坚定的目光”，萨科齐那“避让的目光”，以及使自己感动的原因。扣题紧凑，主题鲜明。采用总分总的结构的小标题的形式，叙事、说理层次分明，结构严谨，体现出理性的广度与深度。

2.语言简练，富有才气。全文的句式整散结合，行文自如潇洒，文章显得很大气，文化底蕴丰厚。特别是场面的描写形象逼真，把刘翔赛场上的动作、神态及赛后的语言活灵活现

地表现出来，人物形象鲜明。

携反省一起上路

反省是水，浇灌成功之树;反省是火，点燃希望之灯;反省是灯，照亮人生之路。

——题记

漫漫人生路，携反省一起上路，因为它是我一生的呵护。

茫茫人海中，携反省一起上路，因为它比金钱更珍贵。

悠悠求学路，携反省一起上路，因为它比荣誉更具时效性。

我驻足在历史的长廊里，回首那曾经的里程。我庆幸，我选择了反省，我微笑，因为我携反省一起上路。

携反省一起上路。因为它，我发现爱我的人无处不在;因为它，我明白了错误的过去;因为它，我明白了应当怎样去谱写辉煌的人生之路。

携反省一起上路。因为它，我把朋友的真情永藏;因为它，我把老师的教诲铭记于心;因为它，我把父母给我的真爱好好珍藏。

携反省一起上路。因为它，我把地球母亲的呼唤记下;因为它，我懂得了怎样去呵护每一棵草，每一朵花。

携反省一起上路。因为它，一个新的自我逐渐长大;因为它，我的人生更加绚丽缤纷。 携反省一起上路。因为它，才有理智之思、和谐之音、练达之举;因为它，才可能使过去的失误变成今后的成功，使过去的成功变为今后更大的成功，真正品尝到金秋的琼浆玉液，享受到大地赐予的丰收喜悦。

携反省一起上路。因为它，使人走向成熟，变得深邃，臻于完善;因为它，世界上将有一半的人可以成为伟人。

因为它??

携反省一起上路吧，你会发现——

反省如水，冲走了人与人之间矛盾的污垢;

反省如火，焚烧了人与人之间仇恨的根苗;

反省如灯，照亮了人间的和谐之路。

携反省一起上路吧，相信成功就在不远处!

后记：携反省一起上路，才能在上帝关上门后，发现他留出的另一扇窗。

【点评】

这是一篇语言运用娴熟并充满哲理和睿智的中考满分作文，字里行间流淌的是青年一代所具有的思想情感。阅读这样的文章，能够给读者诸多的启迪。

借诗化的语言，抒写对“反省”的感悟，是本文的亮点。文章措辞考究，语言流畅，音韵和谐，句式整齐，内涵丰富，淋漓酣畅，一气呵成，是一篇不可多得的散文诗。 题记和后记令人耳目一新，互为补充，相得益彰，画龙点睛，发人深省。

关于自由的自我反省

——破裂的“自由”

山东青岛一考生

天，渐渐暗了下来，像拉下了一块灰蓝色的帷幕。冬天的夜空让我轻易地寻到了北斗七星的踪迹。我漫无目的地行走在空荡荡的街，在一个卖氢气球的小贩前停住了脚步。

离开的时候，我手中攥着一根拴氢气球的细绳，它不停地想向上挣扎，逃离我的束缚，飞向那一片灰蓝的夜空，找寻它的自由，但我没有给它这个机会。

我差不多快忘记自己为何会在一个寒冷的冬季的夜晚独自游逛在街上了，只是看着街上

的行人，盲目地没有方向地行走。对了，我记得我离开家的时候吼了一句“我要去找寻我的自由”，我是在跟父母赌气，不想他们管我太多！那么，我现在是在找寻自由么？我仿佛有些失忆，又有些麻木了。

一阵寒冬的冷风吹来，我突然想到了三毛，这个用一生的时间在旅行中追求自由的女子。她从台北旅行到马德里，从阿尔卑斯到撤哈拉，从庞贝古城到墨西哥城，她在台北听雨，在缅因洲感受苍凉，在拉芭玛回忆荷西。

她一生都似不羁的风，为追逐自由从不停下脚步。我曾幻想能和她一样的执著，追求每个人都渴望的自由，拥有坚持自我的勇气。那么，在这漆黑的夜，没有羁绊地行走，抛掉一切，也算我勇敢自由一回了么？

逆着风，我收回思绪，才发现自己的自由是那么廉价与卑微。寒风带走我最后一丝温暖，我除了手中摇摇欲坠的氢气球简直一无所有，我竟开始怨恨起自己的决定了。怎么会舍得丢弃那个温暖的家，在一个漆黑的夜晚寻找所谓的自由？我还没享受自由的资本，不能够用双手创造出一个真正的自由世界，又怎么会享受自由呢？

我拖着疲惫的步子，不知不觉竟来到家门口。望着楼上暖黄色的灯光，我无比渴望一个拥抱，渴望一碗热汤，渴望一个遮风避雨的港湾??这些，只有家能给我。

我看了看手中还在向上挣扎的氢气球，轻轻松开了手，就让它去追寻它的自由吧，而我宁愿放弃这种一无所获的自由，回到那所温暖的、有人正在等待我回去的充满爱的房子中。 我踏上台阶的一刻，听到“啪”的一声，是那只去追寻自由的氢气球被树枝刮住，破裂时所发出的声音，一声“啪”破裂了它的自由与追逐。我回过头，按响了门铃，想到那即将袭来的温暖，我幸福地微笑起来。

3.2011江西中考满分作文（1篇）

传递历史的清音

江西一考生

历史的长河不息，永远传递着千古帝王的悲哀。

——题记

滚滚长江，掀起了滔天巨浪。那是历史的怒吼，是帝王家族无限的惆怅。它的每一次翻滚，都卷起一场不平凡的命运。历史的清音，携着帝王们的血泪，永恒地传递下去。 奏响悠扬的清音，延伸到凄凉的远古。

荒淫，泯灭人性的乐趣

酒池肉林中，落花沾染着多少无辜生命的鲜血。

为了博红颜一笑，他甘心让自己的灵魂堕入了地狱。商纣王，一个用残暴诠释爱怜的人，他的爱，造就了无数的冤魂。上天赋予了他至高无上的权利，无人能比的才能，可他却用了一个错误的方式去回馈上苍。他的爱，害了他的臣民，同时也将一切的罪过推向了他爱的人。沧桑的历史中，妲己——红颜祸水成了不可分割的两个词。虿盆里，是怨灵们的哭诉；炮烙柱下，是厉鬼们的怒号。泱泱大商，被这个曾经的天人，拖到了历史的底层。

历史的清音，氤氲着血与泪的见证。

跨越千年的长河，这清音，传递到了另一个悲剧中。

无奈，沦为傀儡的命运

幽幽汉宫中，清风吹不散束缚于身的枷锁。

西汉初年，一个群雄割据的年代。自汉高祖刘邦逝世，大汉政权被太后吕雉收人囊中，

各分封国接连反抗。在吕雉的脚下，却还有一个被禁锢的帝王。汉惠帝刘盈，一个生错了年代的仁君，只有任凭母后在身上缠绕一根又一根的丝线。他的心中，只有一个愿望，那就是做一个平凡人，他不愿再看到自己的生母一次又一次的造孽。从小，他亲眼看见反抗者被制成人彘的惨剧，成人后，还要被迫迎娶自己的亲外甥女。他憎恨命运，憎恨母亲的残暴，却无法为身边的人做任何事，也许他最恨的是自己的优柔寡断。或许是上天的垂怜，使他及早地离开了这纷纷扰扰的红尘，永远闭上了只能见证悲剧的双眼。

历史的清音，散发着生与死的呼唤。

又是一个千年，这清音，缓缓飘人了华美的囚牢中。

失落，浪漫悲哀的词宗

独上西楼．剪不断的似水情愁。

云没孤鸿，泪泣琵琶，回首往事尽哀愁。南唐后主李煜，抚琴奏出了千古一帝的凄凉。他，迷醉在歌舞升平的浪漫中，挥霍着无尽的潇洒风流。这是一个千年难遇的词宗，却又是一个不称职的君主。以一个诗人的浪漫融人残酷的政治，让无辜的南唐随着他一起陨命。我看到，他彷徨的背影淹没在黑暗中，奏响了在孤寂的亭台中触摸悲凉的悼曲。这是历史的错孽，让一个文化天才埋没在帝王家族中。尘埃尽，硝烟散，他的悲哀将伴随着牵记而去。 历史的清音，传递着孤与愁的迷茫。

翩翩一叶扁舟，载不动许多愁，双肩扛起的，是数不尽的忧。让那一杯酒，喝尽千古曾经的承诺。传递历史的清音，让历史的沧桑在你我心中流淌。

2011山东潍坊中考满分作文2

2.我心中的太阳

世界不是缺少美，而是缺少发现美的眼睛。生活在繁华都市中，无数的美好等待我们探索。无数的磨难等待我们经历。直面人生，笑对磨难，升起心中的太阳，让生命绽放奇葩！ 升起心中的太阳，需要感悟可敬的生命。文天祥告诉我，当你跌落人生低谷时，没关系，“人生自古谁无死，留取丹心照汗青”。苏轼告诉我，当你内心充满阴霾时，无所谓，“会挽雕弓如满月，西北望，射天狼”。李白告诉我，当你满心惆怅时，笑一笑，“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”。漫漫人生路上，总有一束曙光照耀着你，如风如雨，让你升起心中的太阳，感悟自己可敬的生命。

升起心中的太阳，需要带着微笑扬帆起航。汨罗江边，屈原仰天长笑曰：“世人皆浊而我独清，举世皆醉而我独醒”后沉入江底，带走了尘世的哀怨，将自己心中的太阳留在了人间。延安脚下，毛泽东浩然长叹曰：“独立寒秋，橘子洲头，看万山红遍，层林尽染”。毛泽东心中的太阳是亿万人民。当新中国成立时，他笑了，因为自己心中的太阳升起来了。任何人的成功都不是一帆风顺的，升起自己心中的太阳，带着微笑出发，成功的曙光将会环绕在你身边。

升起心中的太阳，我们会发现每个人心中的太阳都是不同的。小至一个鼓励、一次表扬、一个握手、一个微笑，大到一次成功、一次获奖，抑或是终生的幸福。所以，找寻适合自己的那轮太阳，让充满生机的阳光播种在心间。

涓涓细流因为心存阳光，才得以汇成江海;寥寥树丛因为心存感激阳光，才得以棵棵成林;点点基石因为心存阳光，才得以座座成山。

升起心中的太阳，使前途光明无限;升起心中的太阳，使沿路生机盎然;升起心中的太阳，使生如夏花之灿烂，死如秋叶之静美。

【点评】读这篇文章，我们仿佛和作者一起穿越时光，幸会了许多自信刚强的智者。文

中整齐的结构安排与排比句式，跌宕跳跃，技巧性很强。更为可喜的是文章散发出的浓浓的书卷气。许多诗句信手拈来，如数家珍，显现出作者深厚的语文功底，也给文章增色不少。

2011山东潍坊中考满分作文3

3.升起心中的太阳

山东潍坊一考生

人生如画，浓墨泼洒，淡泊与浓烈交相辉映；人生如歌，高低迷离，噪杂与清脆皆成曲目；人生如酒，婉转悠长，醇厚与平淡均沉醉。行走于漫漫人生路，前途迷茫而危险。而我们只有升起心中的太阳，才能不被痛苦击倒，被无助嘲笑，因艰险哭泣，从而达到成功的彼岸。

明月皎洁——李白

你前有《楚辞》的磅礴，后有宋词的婉转；你左有杜子美的沉郁，右有白乐天的质朴。然而这些都不能遮盖你的光芒。你尽管有机会做官，但官场的腐朽与皇帝的无能刺痛了你的心，于是你升起了心中的太阳，喊着“安能摧眉折腰事权贵，使我不得开心颜”狂笑而去。你将自己的豪情在山间泼洒，在水中流淌。李白，你是诗中之仙！

你升起了心中的太阳，照耀于青史之上，永耀后代。

南山秋菊——陶潜

你本也是十年寒窗盼望一朝得意的才子，你本也热衷于做官，梦想着位极人臣。然而，在看到百姓的贫苦与官员的腐朽后，你怀疑了。因为你却无力改变，于是你升起心中的太阳，着一身布衣，穿一双芒鞋，柱一根竹杖飘然离去，在山间与秋菊为伴，赠给世人一个坚毅的背影。

你升起了心中的太阳，于是，泛黄的史册中透出隐约的菊香，流芳千古。

渌水亭旁——纳兰容若

你是真正的八旗子弟，却留恋于宋词之间；你有别人艳羡的家世，却不热衷于官场仕途；你也曾迷茫过、怀疑过、无助过，不过你最终升起心中的太阳，驱散了前方迷雾，使清词在文学史上占有一席之地。

你升起了心中的太阳，让清词散发出了夺目光彩，万人景仰。

也许人生有时更像熙熙攘攘的人群，更像灰黑色的胶卷，但只要你升起心中的太阳，便可驱散黑暗，驱逐寒冷，便可听到烈风的呢喃，看到溪水的清澈，触到云的温柔，嗅到四月一树一树的花开。

【点评】卷首的一番寓意深刻的话语，紧扣主题，导入自然。行文中，作者手法娴熟地将李白、陶潜、纳兰容若等文学巨匠之成就才情融于笔下，突出了主题，汇成了这样一篇不可多得的考场精品。其中电影蒙太奇手法的运用，让场景切换自如，文气顺畅自然，极富表现力。而文末的点染，更是诗意盎然，升华了文章的审美境界。

7.2011江苏苏州中考满分作文（6篇）

1.熟悉的地方也有风景

江苏苏州一考生

一声渺远却嘹亮的鸡啼中，熟睡的小镇打个哈欠，揉揉惺忪的睡眼，渐渐地苏醒过来。小镇繁忙而又安适的一天开始了！

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