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英语四级作文120字体裁作文

篇一:优秀英语四级作文

一共三个嗯,要求只要 满120字就可以的~!

优点2点,缺点2点,自己的观点1点-2点,基本就120字了. 尽量用长句、动词、强调、分词、不定式等等,这样才能高分。

1. The Advantages and Disadvantages of using Phones?

When it comes to using Phones,the marjority of people think it makes life convenient .First and foremost , phone is a good tool for people whose life is on the go. What is more,We can connect with each other no matter where are you.

However ,the other people believe using phones is not very well.The radiation is the first thing need to consider,as a result of being radiated,it is do harm to our health.Besides,the young generation waste most of time using phones to play games or search the internet.

As far as I am concerned ,

2.The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private cars?

The growing number of people would like to buy Private cars.in their opion,owning Private cars makes life convenient, they can go anywhere no matter when it is. What is more,it is a symbol of weath and status at some extent.

At the same time,the other people refuse to buy

Private cars.they reckon the more Private cars in the street,the more traffic jams will be happened(这里不是被动,是BE动词加形容词表状态).besides ,the emission of carbons pollute environment profound.

As for me,

3How to be a Qualified college students?

There is no doubt being a qualified college students is our responsibility .In recent years,many students do not know how to do when they face up to colourful campus life.

Studing is the first and foremost duty of students,we should spare no effect to work hard.meanwhile,taking activeties is also nessissary.it is a beneficial way to enhance our knowledge and broden our minds .we need to improve our ability though balancing studing and activities.

Howerve,there are something should not be done.Being accident in computer games can not be allowed, it is a waste of time so as to reduce our learning time. besides,we must not cheat in the examination,please remember “honesty is the first policy”

All in all,in my mind,just do as follows, we can easily implement our duty of being a Qualified college students .

篇二:四级作文范文2014

四级作文指导

第一节 四级作文的写作要求

一 《大学英语课程教学要求》对四级考试的写作要求

《大学英语课程教学要求》列出对高等院校非英语专业本科生英语书面表达能力的一般要求是:“能用一般常见的应用文体完成一般的写作任务,能描述个人经历、事件、观感、情感等,能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120词的短文,内容基本完整,用词恰当,语意连贯。能掌握基本写作技能。

二、四级作文的写作标准

一般说来,考生在四级作文写作中应做到:

1. 评写、语法、标点正确,用词恰当

2.遵循文章的特定文体格式;

3.合理组织文章结构,使内容统一、连贯

4.根据写作目的和特定读者,恰当选用语言。

第二节 四级作文评分

一、 评分透视

(一)评分原则:采用总体评分方法,阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评分。

二、作文等级

作文占总分的15%,分值为142分。按照卷面分为15分计算,阅卷标准公分五个等级:2分,5分,8分,11分和14分。

阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷进行分析,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣与该分数,则可以加一分(即9分)或减有一分(9分)。但不得加或减半分。各分数档的评分标准是:

1. 2分:条理不清,思路紊乱;语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。

2. 5分:基本切题;表达思想不清楚,连贯性差;有较多的严重语言错误。

3. 8分:基本切题;有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多。其中有一些是严重错误。

4.11分:切题;表达思想清楚,文字连贯;但有少量语言错误。

5.14分:切题;表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好;基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错误。

三、 字数要求

不少于120字。字数不足要酌情扣分,扣分标准如下:

字数 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 <69

扣分 1 2 3 5 7 9

关于字数要求,需注意以下两点:

1.若题目中给出主题句、起始句、结尾句,均不得计入所写字数。

2.若只写一段,得分为0~4分;只写两段,得分为0~9 (针对明确要求写三段的作文而言)。

四、 高分作文特点

四级作文评分强调五个标准,即内容切题,表达清楚,文字连贯,句式多变和语言规范。根据这五个标准,一篇高分作文应该具有以下几个特点:

1.内容切题。文章要结构完整、内容充实(包含提纲、图表和题目要求的所有信息)、主题突出、前后文内容统一。

2.表达清楚。文章要具有清晰的层次和充分有利的论证。中西方文化差异造成思维方式和文字表述方式截然不同;中文中多出现概括描述,而英文表述更注重事实论证。所以,写英文作文不要过多地进行心理描述、环境描写,而是要用理由和实例来说明问题。

3.文字连贯。语言表达要流畅,要使用恰当的连接词使前后语句连贯,逻辑性强,不相互矛盾,不东拉西扯。

4.句式多变。为了避免文章平淡、呆板,可使用不同的句式:强调句、到装句、否定句。长短句合理相间:短句表达有力的结论,用长句体现严密的逻辑关系。

5.语言规范。用词要准确,并能表现出足够大的词汇;所用语言符合英语的习惯并且语法错误较少;不出现有语法错误的句子和不合理的断句;正确使用平衡结构。

五、阅卷老师的忠告

1.卷面整洁

2.字数达标

3.文体统一: 不宜使用非正式用语。

如:OK?Do you agree me ? That’s all, thank you 。

4.主题突出

文章中的段落主题句应紧紧围绕文章主题来写,段落中的扩展句都应围绕段落主题句来组织。

5.文字连贯

好的文章要注意文字连贯,连贯性主要体现在句子与句子、段落与段落的衔接上,这种衔接主要通过衔接词来实现,如such as, but , because of等。这些词把句子或段落从语义上连接起来,使文章语言流畅、内容通顺,形成一个有机整体。

6.内容一致

与主题无关或联系不紧密的句子或词语尽量不要涉及。

7.语句多样

在举例说明的段落中尤其要注意语句的多样性。

8.符合试题要求

动笔前一定要注意看清楚写作内容上的要求。

9.首尾呼应

10.检查到位

注意以下三个方面内容:

(1)拼写错误

(2)语法错误:时态、语态、语气、单复数、主胃一致、拼写、大小写等。

(3)句子是否完整

第三节 四级作文试题分析

一 四级作文的题材与体裁

(一)题材

四级作文题材可分为两大类:贴近大学生的学习和课余生活的校园话题;有关社会变化、发展和进步的热点话题。

(二)体裁

四级作文真题共有三种体裁:说明议论文、叙事议论文和应用文。其中说明议论文占的比例比较大。

二、 四级作文的三大题型

近年来的四级作文试题往往不是单一类型的,而是表现为结合两种或三种命题形式的综合提纲式作文。

(一)图表命题作文

此题型一般为“图表+写作要求(提纲)式命题。信息图表的形式出现,隐含在图表中。该作文就是要求考生在看完图表后,在理解的基础上,通过自己的分析判断,用英语来描述图表,通过量与量的关系,以及某一变量的发展趋势含义,概括或揭示每一张图表所要传达的信息。

(二)文字命题作文

要求考生根据所给的文章标题和提纲,确定文章的体裁和中心思想,之后紧扣已经确定的中心思想,遵循文章体裁的写作规则展开思路。文章的提纲不仅表明了文章的段落层次,同时也揭示了每一个段落的主要内容。命题+提纲式作文通过题目要求便知道文章的主旨。

三、 四级作文命题趋势分析

1.与考生的日常生活息息相关,是考生比较容易发挥的题目。

2.题目仍然属于“大众话题”

3.作文并不在题目的理解上过多地为难考生,而是更注重考生的写作功底。

4.命题+提纲式作文代表着今后四级作文命题的基本趋势。

※ 常用写作句型

现象解释型

模板一

⑴According to the chart/graph/ table/ picture, it is clear that 图表/画内容总概括. ⑵The chart/graph/ table/picture shows 具体描述图表/图画内容一, while 具体描述图表/图画内容二. ⑶Many reasons contribute to 现象概括.

⑷To begin with, 原因一. ⑸进一步阐述原因一. ⑹Moreover, 原因二. ⑺In addition, 原因三. ⑻As a result, 段落总结句.

⑼As to me, I think 我的观点/态度/建议. ⑽ First of all, 理由一. ⑾ Besides, 理由二. ⑿To conclude, 段落总结句.

模板二

Topic

⑴From the chart/graph/ table/picture, we learn that nowadays, 总述社会现象/事实现象, which has aroused the great /common concern. ⑵what impresses me most is 现象突出表现. ⑶That are many reasons accounting for 现象或变化.

⑷First of all, 原因一. ⑸进一步阐述原因一. ⑹ What is more, 原因二. ⑺ For example, 举例说明原因二. ⑻ In addition, 原因三.

⑼As far as I am concerned, 我的观点. ⑽For one thing/On one hand 理由一. ⑾ For another/ On the other hand, 理由二. ⑿Thus/In brief/Taking above mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that?段落总结句.

常用句型

⑴As is described in the chart/graph/table/picture, in the past few decades, there have arisen sharp increase in?如图中所示, 在过去的几十年中, ??急剧增长。

⑵The chart/graph/table/picture describes that the figure declines/falls smoothly/markedly, it indicates that?

图表显示数字下降平缓/明显, 这表明??

⑶In the chart/graph/table/picture, we can seen that there was a slight/ marked fluctuation. It reveals that?

在图表中,我们可以看到有细微/很明显的波动,这表明?

⑷Recently, the problems of ?has become the focus of the public concern.

近来,?问题引起公众极大的关注。

⑸There may be a combination of factors which contribute to/ are responsible for/ explain?

?可能是好几个因素造成的结果。

⑹There may be several possible reasons for which will be demonstrated below.可能有几个原因导致了我们下面所要阐述的问题。

⑺It’s no easy /simple task to offer the reasons for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factors.

要解释该现象产生的原因并不容易,因为其中涉及到很多复杂的因素。

⑻ Among all the important/convincing reasons for?,one should be emphasized?

在所有重要/有力的原因中, 我们应当重点关注?

问题解决型

模板一

Topic

⑴It is well-known that 相关背景, but nowadays 总述不良现象或问题. ⑵现象具体表现一.⑶现象的具体表现二.

⑷It should be paid attention to that 该现象 is causing great harm/该现象 is caused for many reasons. ⑸On one hand, 危害一/原因一. ⑹On the other hand, 危害二/原因二. ⑺Therefore, it is high time that 解决问题.

⑻First of all, 解决方法一. ⑼进一步阐述方法一. ⑽Secondly/In addition, 解决方法二. ⑾Thirdly/Besides/Morever. 解决方法三. ⑿Only in this way can we解决问题.

模板二

Topic

⑴There has been a discussion recently about 事实现象. ⑵ It is obvious that 危害一/作用一. ⑶ Additionally, 危害二/作用二. ⑷So how to 解决问题 is worth paying attention to.

⑸On one hand/ Firstly, 解决方法一.⑹进一步阐述方法二⑺On the other hand/Secondly,解决方法

二.⑻For example,支持该方法的例子. ⑼In addition/ Thirdly, 解决方法三.

篇三:英语四级作文

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(1)

1. 现在很多家长和老师都认为网络游戏一无是处,但也有人并不认同这种观点。

2.你对此的看法是??

参考范文:

名师释题:通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段指出一些人对待网络游戏的否定态度并简章说明理由;第二段指出一些人对待网络游戏的肯定态度并简章说明理由;第三段阐述“我”对网络游戏的看法并说明理由。

Online Games

When it comes to online games, there is no complete agreement among people. Parents and teachers tend to think online games do noting but be harmful to the students. Their opinions, as long as a student begins to play online games, his academic performance must become worse. Besides, they say that sitting before the computer screen for a long time will bring negative effects on the health of young people.

However, there are many others who argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respon to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and interest in computer science. More important, it does bring young students much pleasure.

From my point of view, it depends on how we use it whether an online game is harmful or beneficial. It will be a wonderful entertainment if we play it it a clever way. Young people should have enough self-control ability. Besides, parents and teachers should give students necessary instructions on how to take advantage of online games.

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(2)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 现在有很多青少年出国留学。

2. 有些人认为这种做法是有益的,有些人则认为这样做是不对的。

3. 我的看法。

参考范文

名师释题:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段指出人们对青少年出国留学现象的不同看法,继而表明“我”的态度;第二段先指出青少年出国留学有一定好处,然后转折表明“我”的相反观点;第三段陈述理由论证“我”的观点的正确性。

Teenagers' Studying Abroad

Nowadays it seems that there are more and more teenagers who choose to study abroad. Some people think it will certainly do good to the children, while others insist it may not be a good choice. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.

Of course, some children might benefit from studying abroad. For example, the independent life might make them learn confidence and perseverance. But it doesn't mean that it’s a right thing to send a teenager to study abroad. From my point of view, it has a great risk to do this.

The following reasons can support my argument. First, the quality of overseas education is not necessary higher than of our education. Indeed, some foreign schools aim at earning money. Second, early independent life may be harmful to the child, if he cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. To conclude, I think it is necessary for young students to make a careful consideration before going abroad.

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(3)

1. 很多公司利用明星效应来宣传自己的产品。

2. 分析明星效应产生的原因。

3. 谈谈“我”的看法。

参考范文:

框架搭建: 由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇说明现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段指出明星效应这一现象并描述其主要表现;第二段分析明星效应产生的主要原因;第三段谈谈“我”对明星效应的看法。

Celebrity Effect

Nowadays, more and more companies use celebrity effect to promote their products. Every day we are exposed to a large number of star advertisements on television, newspapers and other media. In addition, it has become a very common phenomenon that entertainment celebrities and sports stars are employed as spokesmen for the products.

There are many different factors contributing to this phenomenon. Among all these factors, the great profits celebrity effect brings play a critical role. Those stars images familiar to the public make the products become popularized in short time. Moreover, celebrity endorsement may enhance the products' images, and thus win the consumers' trust. Besides, celebrities can not only make a lot of money but have more exposure and popularity.

No doubt, celebrities increase the charm of the products, and win-win result in achieved between companies and celebrities. However, it worth noting that some celebrities are not responsible enough. They might become the marketing tool of some dishonest companies. Therefore, I suggest celebrities improve their responsibilities and make efforts to achieve an all-win of consumers, celebrities and companies.

如今,越来越多的公司利用名人效应来促进他们的产品。我们每天都接触到大量的明星广告在电视、报纸和其他媒体。此外,它已成为一个非常常见的现象,娱乐明星和体育明星是受雇为产品的发言人。

有许多不同的因素导致了这种现象。在所有这些因素,名人效应带来的巨大利润起着至关重要的作用。那些明星图片熟悉的公共使产品在短时间内变得普及。此外,名人代言可以提高产品的形象,从而赢得消费者的信任。此外,名人不仅可以赚很多钱,但是有更多的曝光和知名度。

毫无疑问,名人增加魅力的产品,双赢的结果在实现企业和名人之间。然而,值得注意的是,有些名人不是足够的责任心。他们可能会成为营销工具的一些不诚实的公司。因此,我建议改善他们的职责,让名人努力实现一个多赢的消费者,名人和公司。

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(4)

1. 很多大学都实行上课出勤点名制度,大多数人都认为这样做很有必要。

2. 但也有一些人认为这样做弊大于利。

3. 你如何看待?理由是??

参考范文:

框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述大学里采取的点名制度,说明这种制度的作用;第二段指出对待该制度的不同态度并说明理由;第三段表明“我”对点名制度的看法和“我”的理由。

Should Class Attendance Be Required?

Nowadays required class attendance is very common at colleges and universities. Most people accept it as a necessary policy to ensure the normal teaching order and create a good study atmosphere. Besides, they think it is a good urge for those students who lack self-discipline.

However, still some others do not agree this argument. In their opinion, rigid attendance policies do not benefit students' studies. A student may have to give up a lecture which he finds vital to his studies simply because he dare not run the risk of being penalized for this absence of his course. Besides, they say there is no proven correlation between attendance and performance.

As for me, I am in favor of the latter opinion. Required class attendance may secure one hundred percent attendance for a course, but it does not make much sense. A student may never be absent in a course, but who knows whether or not he is just sitting there daydreaming all the time. Therefore, a student should be allowed to decide for himself whether an in-class experience is worthwhile. 应该需要上课吗?

现在需要上课是非常常见的在学院和大学。大多数人接受它作为一种必要的策略,以确保正常的教学秩序,创造一个良好的学习氛围。此外,他们认为这是一个很好的督促对那些缺乏自律的学生。

然而,也有一些人不同意这个观点。在他们看来,严格考勤政策不有利于学生的学习。一个学生可能不得不放弃一个讲座,他发现他的研究至关重要,因为他不敢冒着被处罚,这没有他的课程。此外,他们说没有证明出勤

和性能之间的相关性。

就我而言,我赞成后者的意见。要求上课可能获得百分之一百的出勤率对于一个课程,但是它没有多大意义。一个学生可能永远不会缺席在一门课程,但谁知道他是否只是坐在那里做白日梦的所有时间。因此,学生应该被允许为自己决定是否一个课堂上的经验是有价值的。

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(5)

1. 现在很多大学生没有节制,不懂得节俭。

2. 造成这种现象的原因有哪些?

3.你怎样看待?

参考范文:

框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇说明现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述大学生花钱没有节制的现象;第二段说明造成大学生这种消费习惯的原因;第三段谈谈“我”对这种消费习惯的看法并给出相关建议。

High Expenditure of College Students

Recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college students spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in their mind. They buy whatever they like without considering the price and their families' financial ability.

There are three main reasons behind this phenomenon. Firstly, some parents and grandparents spoil children so much that they think their spending money as they wish should get little cause for criticism. Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Finally, various fashionable goods have great attraction to young students. To buy them certainly needs more money.

From my point of view, it is unhealthy for us college students to have this kind of spending habit. Whether the financial condition of our family allows our extravagant spending or not, we should limit our expenditure on daily necessities. Learning to be thrifty can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.

最近几年每月开支是一个大学生一直在急剧上升。许多大学生花钱如流水,没有节俭的概念在他们的头脑。他们买他们喜欢的任何东西而不考虑价格和他们的家庭的经济能力。

有三个主要原因这一现象。首先,一些父母和爷爷奶奶溺爱孩子,以至于他们认为自己花钱当他们希望应该得到小理由批评。其次,生活水平的提高,父母可以承受更高的支出的孩子。最后,各种时尚商品有很大的吸引力,年轻的学生。买他们当然需要更多的钱。

从我的观点来看,它不健康对我们大学生有这种消费习惯。是否我们的家庭财务状况允许我们铺张浪费,我们应该限制我们的开支在日用品的。学会节俭可以帮助我们形成正确的价值观和有利于我们的未来发展。 过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(6)

1. 描述灾区的情况:人员伤亡惨重,经济损失巨大。

2. 目前的困难:维持人民基本生活、健康和卫生状况。

3. 希望社会各界捐助 ,并留下联系方式。

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审题:通过审题可知这是一封倡议书,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段点明写信的目的:倡议捐助,并简要介绍汶川地震灾区的情况;第二段说明需要大家关注解决的问题和困难;第三段倡议大家捐助,并提供联系方式。

Show Your Love to Victims in Wenchuan Earthquake

May 26, 2008

Dear students,

Now our fellow people are in urgent need for your donation and love. As we all know, on the 12 of May in 2008, an

earthquake suddenly hit Wenchuan in Sichuan province. The awful result and influence are beyond people's estimate.

Now people there are suffering from a poor living condition, the lack of clean water and food, as well as health problems. Moreover, they are putting up with the pains of losing their loved ones, their homes and everything. Despite many difficulties, the local people and striving to

reestablish their hometown out of the ruin. So it's high time that we should show our love to victims there, such as donating money and clothes.

If you are willing to give a hand, please contact us at the number 12597821 in the daytime and 56751457 at night. Join us in the action and extend our love into a spirit that dares any possible difficulties.

Thank you !

Sincerely yours,

The Students' Union

表达你的爱在汶川地震受害者

2008年5月26日

亲爱的学生,

现在我们的人都在迫切需要你的捐赠和爱。我们都知道,在2008年5月12日, ,一场突如其来的大地震在四川汶川击中。这可怕的结果和影响超出人们的估计。

现在人们有遭受恶劣的生活条件,缺乏干净的水和食物,以及健康问题。此外,他们正在忍受痛苦的失去他们的亲人、他们的家庭和一切。尽管有许多困难,当地的人们和努力重建家乡的毁灭。所以现在正是时候,我们应该给我们的爱的受害者,比如捐钱和衣服。

如果你愿意帮忙,请联系我们在12597821这个数字在白天,晚上56751457。加入我们的行动和扩展我们的爱变成一个精神,敢任何可能的困难。

谢谢你!

谨致问候, 学生会

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(7)

1. 近年来很多名牌大学都降低标准招收名人学生,有些人反对这种做法。

2. 但也有不少人认为这样做无可厚非。

3. 你对此的看法是??,为什么?

参考范文:

审题:通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述近半来名牌大学降低标准招收名人学生的现象;第二段指出关于该现象的两种不同观点并说明各自的理由;第三段表明“我”的看法并说明理由。

Should Universities Lower Admisssion Requirements for Celebrities?

In recent years, many famous universities lower admission requirements for celebrites. More and more celebrities, especially sports stars, have been admitted to famous universities even without an entry examination. This phenomenon has become a topic of widespread controversy.

Some people object to it strongly. They hold that this admission pattern does not comply with the basic fairness rule of education. And if a person who has no enough academic ability is admitted to the university, it will be an insult on college education. However, still other people think it acceptable. They say that these celebrities deserve this privilege because they have proved their abilities in their field.

Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the latter one. In my opinion, these celebrities have sacrificed much learning time for their work, so they should be provided a better chance for learning. Besides, if celebrities accept advanced education, they could serve the society better. Therefore, I suggest that people should pay more attention to these celebrities' efforts and contributions rather than the special treatment they enjoy.

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(8)

1. 现在很多大学生都热衷(来自:WwW.ZW2.CN 爱作文 网)于追求名牌。

2. 分析这种现象的原因。

3. 你如何看待该现象?

参考范文:

审题:通过审题可知这是一篇说明现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述大学生热衷名牌的现象;第二段说明导致大学生热衷名牌的原因;第三段谈谈“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并给出相关建议。

Craze in Famous Brands on Campus

In recent years there has been a craze in famous brands among college students. On campus we can see many students dressing in famous brands from head to toe. It is worth more attention that even some students from poor families also begin to join in the army following famous brands.

College students' preference for famous brands is caused mainly by the following factors. Above all, in many college students' eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of identity and position. They believe it can show their good taste. What's more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which has a great attraction to young college students. Besides, parents' spoiling their children helps form their unhealthy consumption habit.

As far as I am concerned , it is inational for our college students to be crazy about buying famous brands. After all, we have no income source. It is shameful to use our parents' money to satisfy our vanity. Threrfore, I suggest that we should follow the consumption principle of being practial and thrifty.

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(9)

1. 全球金融危机对各行业的影响直接导致了大学毕业生求职前景不容乐观。

2. 大学毕业生在这一时期应如何选择工作?

3. 给出你的建议。

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审题:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对策方法类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段提出金融危机导致大学毕业生求职前景不容乐观这一问题;第二段说明大学毕业生应如何应对这一情况;第三段谈谈“我”对大学生求职的看法。

How to Choose a Job in the Period of Financial Crisis?

Recently, the financial crisis is sweeping the whole world, and China can not escape it. Many companies are faced with the risk of bankruptcy or have been bankrupt in this crisis. This condition shadows the job market, which contributes directly to the face that it is becoming more and more difficult for college graduates to find a job. Therefore, it is high time that students learn the way of finding a job in this hard time.

The following advices could help college graduates to some extent. First, students should adjust their minds and reduce their expectations towards salary. Second, students should analyze the job market carefully to avoid applying for jobs in those companies which are easily affected by financial crisis. Third, students should not blindly enter those big and more developed cities to find jobs; instead, they should tend to those smaller cities for ways out.

Although these advices can not guarantee college students a satisfying job, it at least can help them. No matter how difficult the condition is at present, they should not get depressed. I believe they can conquer this difficulty as long as they have enough confidence.

过关必备:2013年英语四级写作考点演练(10)

1. 随着互联网的普及,很多人开始习惯在网上阅读电子报纸,于是有人认为传统的报纸很快将会被电子报纸取代。

2. 但也有人不赞同这种说法。

3. 你怎样看待?

参考范文:

审题:通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述目前电子报纸的流行,引出争议的话题——传统报纸是否会被电子报纸所取代;第二段分别阐述两种不同的观点及理由;第三段表明“我”的看法并说明理由。

Will Traditional Newspapers Be Replaced by Electronic Newspapers?

With the popularization of Internet, there are an increasing number of electronic newspapers for people to read in daily life. Instead of reading traditional nespapers, many people develop the habit of browsing news on Internet everyday. So some people propose such a question: Will traditional newspapers be replaced by electronic newspapers?

Quite a few people's answer is yes. They say electronic newspapers have many advantages over traditional newspapers. For example, they can be updated instantly. Moreover, they can provide

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