2016年大学英语作文写作议论文专题训练

篇一：2016高考英语写作分类专题_文档

备考高考写作专题1记叙文

重点诠释：

1． 记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。

2． 在记叙文体的高考书面表达中，命题形式主要是提纲式或图表式。

3． 通常要求考生以第一人称或第三人称来写作，第一人称主要是写自己的经历，第三人称主要是写他人的经历或事迹。

4． 由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去，因而，其时态主要用一般过去时。

5． 记叙文通常是按照事情发展的先后顺序来表达内容的。

写作典例：

请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节：

假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。

注意：1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好

剖析：本题图文结合，审题时要重视细节。

1 明确写作要求： 本题要求写一篇目击者的报告，用第一人称写；

①图中的环境条件； ②人物位置（此点对完成本题十分重要）； ③人物活动； ④人物表情； ⑤空间结构； ⑥图中的全部附加文字（英语和汉语）。

①时间：2000年2月8日早晨7点15分； ②地点：公园路公园门前； ③我正沿公园路向东走；

④一辆汽车从第3街向右拐，驶入公园路时撞倒了一位过街的老人；

⑤汽车未停，沿公园路向西开走；

⑥汽车是黄色的，车牌号是AC864，司机是一位女性。

One Possible version:

It was 7 : 15 on the morning of February 8, 2000.

I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. ．高考是全社会关注的大事，学校和家庭表现尤为突出。家庭成员对考生从学习到生活给予无微不至的"关怀"，结果却给考生带来负面影响。根据图画所描述的内容写一篇文章,并发表自己的观点(夹叙夹议)。词数120左右。

As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near，________________________ 。

As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is "studying hard". There are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him.

Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they don’t realize what they have become a heavy burden or a great pressure. It is the hard work or the great pressure that changes their children that much.

So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children. Only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last!

本文是夹叙夹议类的文章，主要反映家庭对考生的特别"关注"给他们带来负面影响。在写作过程中，对主题要审准、审清，对发展过程和结果进行叙述。

备考高考写作专题2 三段式作文法

重点诠释：

所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言，如何把握较大的写作空间，三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为：

1． 第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间，地点，人物和主要事件及时点出。

2． 第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。

3． 最后一段，得出结论或理由。

注意：要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有：

递进型： also, (and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only …but also等；

解释型：that is (to say), in other words, or，namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等；

转折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等；

列举型：firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等 举例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等；

因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so… that, so that等；

让步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等；

顺序型：first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等；

并列型：and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等

时间型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly…when, no sooner…than 等 总结型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等

见解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，I’m sure 等

条件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等

写作典例：

假设你是李越，你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说，他和他的一些同学正在学中文，请你推荐两本学中文

注意：1。词数：100左右；

2．参考词汇：推荐recommend; 英汉词典The English-Chinese Dictionary (ECE);

新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD)

分析：此篇书面表达属于实物说明文，其篇章结构可按三段式进行写作。本文的第一段，可用直接的叙述“I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese”.正文即可作为第二段，其主要内容是对两本词典的一些介绍。结束语即可作为第三段。应将两本词典的特点表达准确，以便加拿大笔友Steve作出合理选择。表达时，文章的基本时态可考虑用一般现在时。

范文：

Dear Steve,

I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.

I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many

notes telling you how to use a word. Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECD is more expensive. It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.

Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.

Yours,

Li Yue

倡议书——低碳生活

在积极倡导低碳环保的大环境下，今天的校园内，浪费现象还很普遍，许多学生没有意识到节能的重要性。请你根据下图所展示的一些现象，以学生会的名义，就这些现象起草一份倡议书，向全校师生发出倡议，节约能源。

注意：（1）开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

（2）词数不少于100；

（3）可根据需要补充与文章有关的信息；

【猜题理由】本话题属于热点话题，既为学生熟知又与生活实际贴近，也可以在语言教学中加强对学生进行环境保护教育。

【构思点拨】仔细观察图画，结合图画内容捋顺要点，确定立意。行文时要注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯，并且还要关注应用文文体特点。

【参考范文】

Dear teachers and students,

Nowadays it’s common to see students wasting thing in our school. Many students haven’t realized the importance of energy-saving. For example, sometimes we can see that lights and computers are still on after class, or some students even leave water running after using it. Besides, our paper is printed on only one side, causing much waste.

It’s time that we did something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the lights and other electric facilities are switched off when we leave the rooms. Try to form the habit of turning off the tap immediately after using it. What’s more, paper should be printed on both sides and reused if possible.

In a word, if everybody has the awareness of energy-saving and start with ourselves to reduce the waste, we can contribute to society.

Students’ Union

纵观近几年高考，英语书面表达大致分为材料作文、图表作文和开放作文。且材料作文逐渐被图表

作文取代，图表分析作文就是将数据、图像所包含的信息，转化为表意的说明文字。图表分析作文通常比较复杂，学生不仅要弄清提示，还要看懂所给的图表和数据。由于这类试题提示内容少，信息点分散，审题时一定要领会作者的出题意图，弄清主题再动笔：1.单纯描述解释图表信息，按图表所示内容如实表达，不加评论。2.通过叙述图表(或图画)中的内容和数字变化来分析原因，发表议论。

(一) 柱状图(BAR CHART)

人们日常生活中事物的变化情况通常可以用宽度相等的柱状图形来表示，柱状图的高度差别用来说明事物的动态发展趋势，同时要注意图例说明和坐标刻度所提示的信息。

例：你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗？”请你根据下面图表及汉语提示，写一篇短文，并阐述你的个人观点。

提示：1.增长学识，提高素养，利于择业。

2.成功的路不只一条。

3.学费高，就业难。

要求：1.词数：100～120左右。

2.开头语已为你写好(不计入词数)。

3.参考词汇： tuition n.学费 qualities n.素养

【解题分析】

柱状图是高中英语课本中常见的图形，要求学生通过柱状图图中数据和提示内容写一短文，属于比较、对照类。也可根据提示写为议论文。通常我们采取三段式写法：

第一段：描述图表，得出结论。

第二段：紧扣主题，根据图表比较分析原因，论证结论。

第三段：发表议论，提出自己的看法。

【提炼要点】

分析柱状图数据信息。从图中可看出，黑色代表想上大学，占大多数，约60%；浅黑色代表无所谓，占约30%；白色代表不想上大学，占约10%。

One possible version

Is It The Only Way Out To Go To College？

The majority of us consider it very necessary to go to college.They think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualities.Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation.Very few students， that is about ten percent of the students， think it no use going university， because the tuition is too high for their family to afford.What's more， it's rather hard for college graduates to seek satisfactory jobs.Thirty percent of the students， however， believe “All roads lead to Rome.” Therefore it doesn't make any difference whether they go to college or not.

In my opinion， we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland.

【语言亮点】

篇二：中国人民大学2016考研英语作文写作经典句

2016考研英语作文写作经典句

考研英语作文的提高，一方面靠多识记一些优秀作文，积累一些高端句子，但往往这样会导致另一个极端，使得阅卷老师很反感这样内容上大范围的模板化;另一方面，作文的提高也是需要多加以练习的，只有在练习中才能发现自己的语法错误以及段落安排上的问题，还有自己到底是词汇上还是句子上的欠缺。下面分享一些考研英语作文能力提升必背美句，希望大家从中有所收获。

1.Claiming something is true misses thepoint, while presenting verifiable fact proves its correctness.

声称某样东西是正确的没有什么意义，而提出可以证实的事实能证明它的正确性。

2.Suggesting that one thing …… is better than another thing …… bears no more significance than insinuating that black is betterthan white.

暗示一件东西比另一件东西更好比旁敲侧击地说黑比白好并没有更大的意义。

3.Ignoring cause and effect is exactly thesame thing as failing to look both ways when crossing a busy intersection.

忽略因果就相当于横穿繁忙的十字路口时没有朝两边看。

4.One who advocates the rights of homosexualsshould not be surprised by the belligerent stance of opposition forces.

主张同性恋者的权利的人对反对力量的好战姿态不应感到奇怪。

5.The greatest problem with political andreligious zealots is their total inability to consider the views of others.

政治和宗教狂热者的最大问题在于他们完全不能考虑别人的观点

6.The basic stumbling block to global peacerests with the self-serving ambitions of many nations.

全世界和平的基本障碍物在于许多国家谋私利的野心。

7.The overemphasis on one particular aspectof a problem often obscures the relevance of other issues.

过分强调问题的一个方面经常掩盖了其他方面的相关性。

8.Any presumption that smoking is in anywaybeneficial is totally preposterous.

任何对抽烟不管怎样是有益的假设都是完全荒谬的。

9.The fallacies of many arguments are quiteobvious.

许多论证的推论错误是相当明显的。

10.Arbitrarily dismissing the direct linkbetween increasing sexual promiscuity and the rapid spread of sexuallytransmitted diseases would be foolhardy. An even more foolish mistake wouldcenter on denying the need for extensive sex education programs worldwide.

武断地无视性乱行为的增多和性传播疾病的迅速蔓延之间的直接联系是鲁莽的。一个更愚蠢的错误是否认在世界范围内开展广泛的性教育项目的必要性。

11.Chances are that man will eventuallyland on Mars.

人类有可能最终登陆火星。

12.The likelihood for peace in the MiddleEast remains questionable.

中东和平的可能性仍让人怀疑。

13.The necessity for nuclearnonproliferation seems clear.

防止核扩散的必要性似乎清清楚楚。

14.It is perhaps more accurate to considerthe family as a blanket of security, rather than a cloak of bondage.

把家庭看作保护安全的毯子可能比把它看做束缚的斗篷更确切。

15.While generalizations are dangerous, itis quite safe to present solid evidence.

抽象概括是危险的，但是，提供确凿的证据是万无一失的。

16.It seems almost certain that China willachieve this year's economic growth targets.

中国将完成今年经济增长的目标似乎是毫无疑问的。

17.Reaching this year's growth targets isalmost a certainty.

达到今年的增长目标几乎是必然的。

18.The urgency of the situation makes itnecessary to reiterate the monumental problemsof

population growth.

情况的紧迫性使我们有必要重申人口增长的重大问题。

19.A recent study revealed the surprisingfact that many students pass examinations by relying on nothing more than rotememorization. It is horrifying to think that students graduate without athorough understanding of the subject matter.

最近的一项研究显示了一个令人惊讶的事实：许多学生仅仅依靠死记硬背通过考试。想到学生对主题没有透彻地理解就毕业了是令人震惊的。

20.Needless to say, advertising sellsproducts. Where would we be without it? Shelves would be empty, consumers wouldhave few choices and products information would disappear.

毋庸讳言，广告推销产品。没有它，情况将会怎样?货架将空空如也，消费者的选择将减少，产品的信息将消失。

篇三：2016年6月英语四级作文预测

2015年12月英语四级作文评分标准

2015年12月四级考试来临，练习了作文却不知道自己究竟能拿多少分。今天小编为大家梳理了四级作文评分标准，大家可以对照着为自己的作文练习打个分，估摸一下自己本次的四级作文得分情况。

（一）四级作文评分标准

写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达正确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。

2015年12月英语四级作文评分标准

写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达正确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。

（二）其他评分标准：

1. 有关题目

题目写或不写，不会作为作文的评分依据。但是如果在写题目时就已离题万里，势必会影响阅卷人对作文的期待和判断。

2.有关跑题

由于图片或题目说明中均有主题的提示，考试除非完全没有看到题目，所以，在往年阅卷中，考生作文基本都和主题沾边，当然，相关的比例可能会有不同。只要基本切题，最低也可能获得四分。

3.有关字数

官方规定四级写作120-180词。阅卷老师不会也没有时间去数几个单词的差异。一般在正负20词内都可以接受。字数可以再超

一些，但是不可以再少。

4.有关字迹

评分标准中无关于字迹的说明，只要清晰可辨，就不会影响分数。但是更加美观的字迹在相同条件下一定会获得更好的分数。 大学英语四级作文评分标准

本题满分为15分

成绩分为六个档次：

13-15分、10-12分、

分、1-3分和0分。 7-9分、4-6

2015年12月英语四级作文预测

1. 钱能买来幸福嘛？

作文题目：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 有人认为金钱是幸福之本 (source of happiness)

2. 也有人认为金钱是万恶之源 (root of all evil)

3. 我的看法

参考范文：

Can money buy happiness? Various people have various answers. Some people think that money is the source of happiness. With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys. With money, one can do whatever he likes. So, in their minds, money can bring comfort, security, and so on. Money, as they think, is the source of happiness.

But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil. Money drives people to steal, to rob, and to break the law. A lot of people became criminals just because they were in search of money. And in the Western countries, there is nothing that can’t be bought by money. Many people lose their own lives when hunting it.

I think that money is essential to life and we cannot do without money. But even though money is necessary to life, it can’t buy happiness. Happiness is not something that can be measured by money. It is a state of mind. One can have plenty of money, with

which he can buy whatever he wants, and at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of problems. Therefore, although money is necessary for a happy life, it can’t buy happiness.

2.关于吸毒

继李代沫，柯震东等明星因吸毒入狱之后，被誉为“情歌王子”的毛宁也于上周五因吸食冰毒被抓，毒品问题又一次被提了上来。吸食毒品不仅严重损害身体健康，而且可能会感染艾滋，甚至会害的妻离子散，家破人亡。

作文题目：

你校将开展禁毒宣传， 请你根据下面的表格内容和饼状图写一篇短文。短文内容需包括青少年吸毒原因分析、毒品危害，并给同学们提出建议，以便让同学们懂得如何远离毒品。

1.毒品交易日益泛滥，每年浪费8000亿美元；

2.严重危害健康，加速死亡，导致和诱发犯罪。

3 远离毒品的建议

参考范文：

In modern society, drugs are becoming a more and more serious problem in the world. The trade of drugs is widespread, which costs up to $800 billion every year.

As we all know, drugs do great harm to our health, not only causing