英语作文北京

篇一：北京中考英语作文范文分类精华篇

中考作文集锦

1. 作文写作思路

中考常考问题及形式：

1. 中考作文常见文体：夹叙夹议

2. 中考作文常见形式：写回信；中英提示写作，话题类作文。

写作原则：1231原则（1句问候，2句概括来信中的问题，3条建议及建议原因，1句祝福）

3. 写作能力之外的得分因素：字迹、分段

4. 写作注意以下几点：避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板长短句交错使用（注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）。

【阅卷关注】

阅卷关注哪几点——

一、要点：全部图片或问题（要点决定分/语言准确）；

二、单词：提示词语全用上+单词拼写（字数达标/标点符号和大小写/ fourteen等数字）；

三、语法：高级（多用句型/适当加点谚语）+语法出错（三单、时态、避免Chinglish）；

四、卷面：书写规范（过渡词可使上下文连贯）+不要求漂亮但要求工整。

作文分类击破

【一、写人记事类】

（感恩/感谢朋友老师父母、难忘经历、微笑、鼓励、毕业感想、暑期计划等）

【01参考范文----适用于感恩/感谢、难忘经历、最喜欢的老师/朋友等：】

My life in middle school will come to the end soon. During the past three years, my English teacher gave me so much help that I will never forget her.

I was not good at English, I tried my best to learn it but I couldn?t get good grades, so I decided to give it up. My English teacher knew that, she not only encouraged me to go on learning but also helped me with my English after class. With her help, I made great progress.

I was moved by her and I was really thankful to her. Now I feel more confident than before. I?m sure I can learn English very well in the future.

【02参考范文----适用于难忘的学校活动, 、鼓励、合作、坚持不懈的精神等：】

During the three years, our school has held various activities, among which the activity of climbing Xiangshan leaves me the deepest memory.

Last term, my classmates and I had a school trip to Xiangshan Park. There, we were divided into groups and the first group that topped the mountain would win a big prize. Our group tried our best to climb as quickly as possible. But soon I felt dizzy and was out of breath. Noticing this, my teammates came to me immediately. Some of them gave me candies so that I could get more energy. Others carried the bag for me so that I could climb the mountain easily… “You can do it!” everyone encouraged me. At that moment, I felt deeply moved and really powerful. At last, we were the first to top the mountain.

This activity not only gave us a chance to keep our body fit and enjoy the beautiful scenery, but also let me feel the power of teamwork. A united group can bring us warmth and strength and can lead us to success.

【03参考范文----感恩父母 ：】

There?s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.

Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.

I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.

【04参考范文----帮助他人、 志愿活动：】 I think helping others is important and necessary. Taking part in volunteer work is one of the greatest ways to give a hand to those who need help. And I like it very much.

I remember I helped the old people in the old people?s home last Saturday. First, I cleaned the room and the windows for them because it was not convienient for them to do such thins. What?s more, I told them some interesting stories, sang some English songs for them and they moved to tears. When it was time to say goodbye, I hugged them and promised to see them again.

Everyone may have trouble in life and our little kind act can make a big difference in their life. In fact, helping others is helping ourselves. I will do the same in the future because it can bring me and other people happiness.

【05 参考范文----喜欢的hobby、活动：】

It is good to learn about your school activities. Now I?ll tell you about mine.

At my school we have many fun activities to take part in. We have swimming, basketball, badminton, and ping pong. My favorite activity is basketball. I play with my friends every day after school. Basketball is a team sport where team-mates pass the ball to each other to throw it into a hoop for points. The team with the most points at the end of the game wins. In basketball it is good to be tall because it is easier to score points.

I like to play basketball because it is a team sport and it is also a good way to get exercise. Basketball is also a good game to learn how to work well with others.

【06参考范文----Hobby、读书类：】

I have great interest in reading magazines because I like reading many kinds of articles in them, such stories, news, science, jokes and so on. The stories give me life lessons, the jokes make me laugh and the news keep me knowing what hapens around me. I can get lots of information as well as enjoy a lot of beautiful pictures in the magazines.

I enjoy reading magazines because they can not only help me study better and

but also make me relaxed and happy every day.

【二、给予建议类】

建议类作文写作思路（1231）

（一句问候 、两句问题）

第一段：很高兴收到来信

针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受

主动提出给别人建议

第二段：3条具体建议及原因

第三段：提出希望和祝愿

开头句：表达同情理解+主动提建议

I understand your feelings because I once had the similar problem as you do now. It?s very common for students to do sth. and many students have the same problem like you.

Let me offer you some useful advice.

Here?s my advice.

My suggestions are as follows.

建议类句型：

? You are supposed to do....

? You'd better do ....

? Why not/ don't you do....

? It's a good idea to do....

? If I were you, I would do...

结尾句：

? I hope what I said can be of some help to you.

? Just have a try. I?m looking forward to hearing good news from you!

? Try your best, and you'll make great progress!

【07学习类----参考范文：】

Dear Lucy,

I?m very happy to hear from you. Don?t worry too much. It?s very common for students to dislike memorizing and many students have the same problem like you. Here?s my advice.

First of all,(来自:WWw.zW2.CN 爱作文网) you had better preview the new lessons and write down the difficult points before lessons, which can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. What?s more (Besides), you should listen carefully and try to take part in the class activities. You?ll find that English and history are not as boring as you think. Last but not least, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. In this way, you can understand better and memorize more quickly. If you still feel unhappy, why not have a talk with your teacher and ask for help?

I really hope my advice can help you make great progress with your study.Yours,

Zhang Fang

【08解决与父母矛盾----参考范文：】

Dear Alice,

As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you. more, to solve the problems, you'd better make a schedule, set up a goal for each day and show them to your parents. Besides, your parents? Your teacher may have some good ideas.

I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

【09运动/健康类----参考范文：】

All of us want to be healthy. But some of the students/people often have a cold. We sometimes have a fever and feel tired. In order to have a healthy body, we can do

篇二：高考2012英语作文真题及其范文北京卷

2012年高考英语作文真题及其范文 北京卷

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节 情景作文（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。

注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。

2.词数不少于60。

Saturday，June2 Fine

This morning

(请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内)

第二节 开放作文（15分）

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.

(请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内)

答案：

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节 情景作文（20分）

一、内容要点：

1、发现

2、询问

3、告诉线路

4、分别

二、One possible version:

Saturday June 2

This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and

advised them to take Bus No. 20, the bus came. We waved good-bye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.

第二节 开放作文（15分）

One possible version:

I think the white pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the black pencil by saying "You're nearing the end!" The black pencil, on the other hand, remains calm. The white pencil's words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. It's true that he's approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.

In reality, we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.

篇三：2014年北京市中考英语作文范文

2014年北京市中考英语作文范文

一、文段表达（20分）

51. 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是Mike，远在美国的妈妈想了解你在中国最好的朋友的情况。请你给妈妈写封邮件，介绍你在中国最好的朋友。请你根据妈妈的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：interest, know each other, help, kind, friendly

Dear Mum,

How are you? Everything is fine in China. You want to get to know my best friend and I will tell you about him / her.

Best wishes

Mike

范文：Dear Mum,

How are you? Everything is fine in China. You want to get to know my best friend and I will tell you about him / her.

My best friend's name is Li Hao. He is tall and thin. He has short black hair with big eyes. He is a lovely, smart and helpful boy. He studies hard and has a good relationship with our

classmates.

We both take an interest in playing basketball and reading books. I think that is the reason why we have become good friends. Sometimes we talk about the novels that we read together and share our opinions. After school or at the weekend, we often play basketball with our classmates. I have a lot of fun with him. I enjoy my school life in China. I hope he is my best friend forever.

Best wishes

Mike

二、文段表达（15分）

74． 假如你是王平，你的英国笔友Cathy发来邮件说她在 “Cozy Reading Week（惬意阅读周）”时读了几本有趣的书，她想跟你交流一下，了解你的读书情况。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：books on , because, get, knowledge

范文：

As for me, I like reading the books on science. Because I like science and I want to be an inventor in the future. I hope to invent more things to help people live an easier life. Though I’m busy with my studies, I keep reading for about half an hour every day.

I think reading is very important and necessary for us. We can get not only knowledge but also happiness from the books.

三、文段表达 (15分)

74． 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李华，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的学校活动，他想了解你最喜欢的一项学校活动。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

范文：

We have quite a few after-school activities, but I like out goings best. Last month our class went to the Great Wall. While we stepped on the Wall, we saw it stretch far into the distance and also saw kinds of flowers on the mountains. Of course, we took a lot of nice pictures and sang and shouted on the way. We enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful scenes. It helped us learn more out of school, such as history, photograph, and so on. (84)

Yours,

Li Hua

四、文段表达。74. 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑，不少于50词的文段。目前，北京的车越来越多，对空气产生极大影响。某网站在开展出行方式大讨论。假如你是李华，你喜欢哪种出行方式？请根据提示词语和相关问题，给网站投稿。稿件的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入总词数。 提示词语：expensive, relax, easy, be good for, reduce, save energy

? How do you go to school, by car, by bus, by bike or on foot?

? Which way is the best? What are the advantages?

? Dear Editor,

I know you are organizing a discussion about the ways of going out. I’m a middle school student and I want to join the discussion.

_________________________________________________________________

Yours respectfully, Li Hua

Nowadays, you can see more and more people riding bikes on the road and I am one of them. I go to school by bike because I think it’s the best way. Why do I like riding a bike? Let me tell you the reasons.

First, it's not expensive to buy a bike and I can afford one or more. Second, I can relax myself while riding a bike. It’s good for my health and it’s easy to get a place for a bike. Third, the most important thing is that riding bikes can not only reduce pollution but also save energy. I hope everybody can ride a bike to go to school, go to work and travel to other places. Let's ride bikes from now on!