白日梦英语作文

篇一：英语作文

六级写作试题概述

六级作文：一般要求分为3—5段，我们建议写3段，即引言部分，正文部分和结尾部分。（要求整篇作文结构连贯）

引言部分：一般为1段，偶尔也由2段组成。

作用：1）告诉读者文章写什么；

2）吸引读者读下去。

要求Informative(信息性)和Interesting(趣味性)

信息性：

1）文章写什么问题(What is the subject of your composition?), 是体育问题，还是广告、环境、就业、学习等问题

2）作者对这个问题的观点、态度是什么(Your attitude towards the subject?), 比较具体。

3） 要有主题句

由笼统到具体，最后到中心句。

Example 1:

Every society has its own way of taking care of the elderly. In many countries it is the custom for grandparents to live with their children. In this way families can express their gratefulness and show respect for the elderly. But in America, many of the old people are either put in nursing homes or live alone, as if they have no relatives.

每个社会的情况→许多国家情况→美国社会情况，最

后亮出观点：为什么会出现这种不合理的情况？

Example 2:

“Daydreaming again, Barb? You’ll never amount to anything if you spend your time that way! Can’t you find something useful to do?”

Many youngsters have heard words like those from their parents. And until recently this hostile attitude towards daydreaming was the most common one. Daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time. Or it was considered an unhealthy escape from real life and its duties. 由笼统到具体，最后一句话点明：做白日梦可能并不是一件坏事。 趣味性：

How to invite the reader’s attention and hold the reader’s interest?

1. 引语法 即使用谚语，名人名言，或是有代表性的话。

Eg. A proverb says, “You are only young once.”

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever

2. 问题法，即使用一个发人深思的问题来引起读者的注意。

Eg. In medicine as in law, government, and other lines of work, the requirements of honesty often seem dwarfed by greater needs: the need to shelter from brutal news or to

uphold a promise of secrecy; to expose corruption or to promote the public interest.

3. 对立法，即从反面的事实，反面的观点引出作者正面的观点。

Eg. Where and when and what you study are all important. the neatest desk and the best desk light, the world’s most regular schedule, the best leather-covered notebook and the most expensive textbooks you can buy

4. 对比法

Eg. From the wheel to the computers, labor-saving inventions have marked humanity’s progress in gaining freedom from physical demands. The push-button, drive-through, remote-control mentality 推荐句型：in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner(相似比较）

相反比较：on the other hand, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast,on the contrary, compared with

5. 事实法

To keep up with their work they must read letters, reports, trade publications, inter

office communications: a never-ending flood of words. In getting a job or advancing in one, the ability to read and comprehend quickly can mean the difference between success and failure. 6. 举例法

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible factor in making ads, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food.

7. 故事法

Six o'clock yesterday (June 20th, Friday) afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, 8. 数据法

Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Living off Campus:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，35%的学生不住宿

舍，而是在学校外面租房子住。

Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

The latest statistics show that …

由具体到笼统，把正文讨论的东西归纳一下，把读者送

出文章。

文章结尾形式：

1 结论性——通过对文章前面的讨论,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点。

2.后果性——揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重

后果.

3.号召性—— 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.

篇二：《白日梦》

《白日梦》

这几天在看《穆斯林的葬礼》，感觉挺震撼的，一个穆斯林家族，六十年间的兴衰，三代人命运的沉浮，两个发生在不同时代、有着不同内容却又交错扭结的爱情悲剧。很优秀的一部长篇小说，有优美从容的文笔，有曲折动人的情节，有令人心碎的爱情，还有动荡的年代中小人物的无常命运。与流行的言情小说最大的不同，就是这部书里的人物都是食人间烟火的，他们的性格和命运是与时代、民族等大背景分不开的。小说的几条线错中复杂，整篇通过了玉以及月贯穿起来，里头，霍达用她那细腻的情感，把小说中的人物刻画的有血有肉，好似我们身边就存在似的，是的，真正有血有肉的小说，应该是这样的，霍达说她花三年写小说，与小说的主人公一块生活的三年，我们在阅读的时候，有何尝不是跟他们生活在一起，小说的葬礼做为书名，一开始就为本书的悲剧情调铺下调子，霍达说她一开始想到这个题目的时候，就开始感动，不是吗，葬礼，是一个人的结束，但也是一个人的超脱。虽然我们也不知道另一个世界是什么样的，但是它给予我们的启示，就是好好生活，好好关爱身边所有爱你的人，真主遥远会保佑我们的，爱，应该不分民族、时间、地域的??我们尊重信仰，但是我们更要追随我们的心，我想这个世界最终会有一个制衡的！看看韩子林最后的遗言，我算穆斯林吗？我算回回吗，其实只要我们无愧于心，我们心中的信仰都是原谅我们的，这里我只能说信仰万岁

至于书中的爱情，感觉其实与《一帘幽梦》有点相似，（小说中，似乎妹妹永远要比姐姐幸运。）而《一帘幽梦》太梦幻，这也许就是琼瑶小说中最大的特点也是缺点，书的章节很有心意，使我总在三代的时光中穿梭，在爱与被爱中来回，我认为，真正爱过的，是子奇，冰玉，新月和雁潮。而全文都围绕着爱，但结局，不是分离天涯，就是阴阳相隔，这种即使死也幸福的心情的梁君璧永远也不能体会的。

放下书，想的全是那些感触的画面，韩新月的“无常”使我的心似针扎，似乎从心里抽走了什么，有许多感伤，她是幸运的，在她短暂的一生中，拥有过让人心疼的真爱，她又是悲惨的，在真爱真正来临时，她却带着所有人的痛苦离开了，霍达告诉了我很多我从不过问的穆斯林的生活方式，信仰，习俗。感叹，他们对主的信仰之深。她开了个玩笑，到头来，韩君璧嫁的终究不是回回，可笑，可悲，她又把我们的眼泪戏弄了，让我们为她的故事哭的一塌糊涂，她很懂的迂回，一个回回家族的三代被爱纠葛，而我们也跟着她穿梭在细长胡同，走到尽头是，胸中还是一股荡气回肠。

这一阵子湖南卫视在演《绿光森林》，最让我印象深刻的是苏菲说的一句话：每个人都是平等的，谁的没有权利俯视任何一个人。的确，回回也是中华民族的一部分，在爱恨纠缠中，我们跟着子奇，冰玉，新月和雁潮等一起爱了，恨了，愤怒了，然后，超脱了。

篇三：英语四级作文

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（1）

1. 现在很多家长和老师都认为网络游戏一无是处，但也有人并不认同这种观点。

2.你对此的看法是??

参考范文：

名师释题：通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段指出一些人对待网络游戏的否定态度并简章说明理由；第二段指出一些人对待网络游戏的肯定态度并简章说明理由；第三段阐述“我”对网络游戏的看法并说明理由。

Online Games

When it comes to online games, there is no complete agreement among people. Parents and teachers tend to think online games do noting but be harmful to the students. Their opinions, as long as a student begins to play online games, his academic performance must become worse. Besides, they say that sitting before the computer screen for a long time will bring negative effects on the health of young people.

However, there are many others who argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respon to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and interest in computer science. More important, it does bring young students much pleasure.

From my point of view, it depends on how we use it whether an online game is harmful or beneficial. It will be a wonderful entertainment if we play it it a clever way. Young people should have enough self-control ability. Besides, parents and teachers should give students necessary instructions on how to take advantage of online games.

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（2）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 现在有很多青少年出国留学。

2. 有些人认为这种做法是有益的，有些人则认为这样做是不对的。

3. 我的看法。

参考范文

名师释题：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段指出人们对青少年出国留学现象的不同看法，继而表明“我”的态度;第二段先指出青少年出国留学有一定好处，然后转折表明“我”的相反观点;第三段陈述理由论证“我”的观点的正确性。

Teenagers' Studying Abroad

Nowadays it seems that there are more and more teenagers who choose to study abroad. Some people think it will certainly do good to the children, while others insist it may not be a good choice. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.

Of course, some children might benefit from studying abroad. For example, the independent life might make them learn confidence and perseverance. But it doesn't mean that it’s a right thing to send a teenager to study abroad. From my point of view, it has a great risk to do this.

The following reasons can support my argument. First, the quality of overseas education is not necessary higher than of our education. Indeed, some foreign schools aim at earning money. Second, early independent life may be harmful to the child, if he cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. To conclude, I think it is necessary for young students to make a careful consideration before going abroad.

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（3）

1. 很多公司利用明星效应来宣传自己的产品。

2. 分析明星效应产生的原因。

3. 谈谈“我”的看法。

参考范文：

框架搭建： 由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇说明现象类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段指出明星效应这一现象并描述其主要表现；第二段分析明星效应产生的主要原因；第三段谈谈“我”对明星效应的看法。

Celebrity Effect

Nowadays, more and more companies use celebrity effect to promote their products. Every day we are exposed to a large number of star advertisements on television, newspapers and other media. In addition, it has become a very common phenomenon that entertainment celebrities and sports stars are employed as spokesmen for the products.

There are many different factors contributing to this phenomenon. Among all these factors, the great profits celebrity effect brings play a critical role. Those stars images familiar to the public make the products become popularized in short time. Moreover, celebrity endorsement may enhance the products' images, and thus win the consumers' trust. Besides, celebrities can not only make a lot of money but have more exposure and popularity.

No doubt, celebrities increase the charm of the products, and win-win result in achieved between companies and celebrities. However, it worth noting that some celebrities are not responsible enough. They might become the marketing tool of some dishonest companies. Therefore, I suggest celebrities improve their responsibilities and make efforts to achieve an all-win of consumers, celebrities and companies.

如今,越来越多的公司利用名人效应来促进他们的产品。我们每天都接触到大量的明星广告在电视、报纸和其他媒体。此外,它已成为一个非常常见的现象,娱乐明星和体育明星是受雇为产品的发言人。

有许多不同的因素导致了这种现象。在所有这些因素,名人效应带来的巨大利润起着至关重要的作用。那些明星图片熟悉的公共使产品在短时间内变得普及。此外,名人代言可以提高产品的形象,从而赢得消费者的信任。此外,名人不仅可以赚很多钱,但是有更多的曝光和知名度。

毫无疑问,名人增加魅力的产品,双赢的结果在实现企业和名人之间。然而,值得注意的是,有些名人不是足够的责任心。他们可能会成为营销工具的一些不诚实的公司。因此,我建议改善他们的职责,让名人努力实现一个多赢的消费者,名人和公司。

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（4）

1. 很多大学都实行上课出勤点名制度，大多数人都认为这样做很有必要。

2. 但也有一些人认为这样做弊大于利。

3. 你如何看待？理由是??

参考范文：

框架搭建：通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段概述大学里采取的点名制度，说明这种制度的作用；第二段指出对待该制度的不同态度并说明理由；第三段表明“我”对点名制度的看法和“我”的理由。

Should Class Attendance Be Required?

Nowadays required class attendance is very common at colleges and universities. Most people accept it as a necessary policy to ensure the normal teaching order and create a good

However, still some others do not agree this argument. In their opinion, rigid attendance policies do not benefit students' studies. A student may have to give up a lecture which he finds vital to his studies simply because he dare not run the risk of being penalized for this absence of his course. Besides, they say there is no proven correlation between attendance and performance.

As for me, I am in favor of the latter opinion. Required class attendance may secure one hundred percent attendance for a course, but it does not make much sense. A student may never be absent in a course, but who knows whether or not he is just sitting there daydreaming all the time. Therefore, a student should be allowed to decide for himself whether an in-class experience is worthwhile. 应该需要上课吗?

现在需要上课是非常常见的在学院和大学。大多数人接受它作为一种必要的策略,以确保正常的教学秩序,创造一个良好的学习氛围。此外,他们认为这是一个很好的督促对那些缺乏自律的学生。

然而,也有一些人不同意这个观点。在他们看来,严格考勤政策不有利于学生的学习。一个学生可能不得不放弃一个讲座,他发现他的研究至关重要,因为他不敢冒着被处罚,这没有他的课程。此外,他们说没有证明出勤

和性能之间的相关性。

就我而言,我赞成后者的意见。要求上课可能获得百分之一百的出勤率对于一个课程,但是它没有多大意义。一个学生可能永远不会缺席在一门课程,但谁知道他是否只是坐在那里做白日梦的所有时间。因此,学生应该被允许为自己决定是否一个课堂上的经验是有价值的。

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（5）

1. 现在很多大学生没有节制，不懂得节俭。

2. 造成这种现象的原因有哪些？

3.你怎样看待？

参考范文：

框架搭建：通过审题可知这是一篇说明现象类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段概述大学生花钱没有节制的现象；第二段说明造成大学生这种消费习惯的原因；第三段谈谈“我”对这种消费习惯的看法并给出相关建议。

High Expenditure of College Students

Recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college students spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in their mind. They buy whatever they like without considering the price and their families' financial ability.

There are three main reasons behind this phenomenon. Firstly, some parents and grandparents spoil children so much that they think their spending money as they wish should get little cause for criticism. Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Finally, various fashionable goods have great attraction to young students. To buy them certainly needs more money.

From my point of view, it is unhealthy for us college students to have this kind of spending habit. Whether the financial condition of our family allows our extravagant spending or not, we should limit our expenditure on daily necessities. Learning to be thrifty can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.

最近几年每月开支是一个大学生一直在急剧上升。许多大学生花钱如流水,没有节俭的概念在他们的头脑。他们买他们喜欢的任何东西而不考虑价格和他们的家庭的经济能力。

有三个主要原因这一现象。首先,一些父母和爷爷奶奶溺爱孩子,以至于他们认为自己花钱当他们希望应该得到小理由批评。其次,生活水平的提高,父母可以承受更高的支出的孩子。最后,各种时尚商品有很大的吸引力,年轻的学生。买他们当然需要更多的钱。

从我的观点来看,它不健康对我们大学生有这种消费习惯。是否我们的家庭财务状况允许我们铺张浪费,我们应该限制我们的开支在日用品的。学会节俭可以帮助我们形成正确的价值观和有利于我们的未来发展。 过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（6）

1. 描述灾区的情况：人员伤亡惨重，经济损失巨大。

2. 目前的困难：维持人民基本生活、健康和卫生状况。

3. 希望社会各界捐助 ，并留下联系方式。

参考范文：

审题：通过审题可知这是一封倡议书，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段点明写信的目的：倡议捐助，并简要介绍汶川地震灾区的情况；第二段说明需要大家关注解决的问题和困难；第三段倡议大家捐助，并提供联系方式。

Show Your Love to Victims in Wenchuan Earthquake

May 26, 2008

Dear students,

Now our fellow people are in urgent need for your donation and love. As we all know, on the 12 of May in 2008, an

earthquake suddenly hit Wenchuan in Sichuan province. The awful result and influence are beyond people's estimate.

Now people there are suffering from a poor living condition, the lack of clean water and food, as well as health problems. Moreover, they are putting up with the pains of losing their loved ones, their homes and everything. Despite many difficulties, the local people and striving to

reestablish their hometown out of the ruin. So it's high time that we should show our love to victims there, such as donating money and clothes.

If you are willing to give a hand, please contact us at the number 12597821 in the daytime and 56751457 at night. Join us in the action and extend our love into a spirit that dares any possible difficulties.

Thank you !

Sincerely yours,

The Students' Union

表达你的爱在汶川地震受害者

2008年5月26日

亲爱的学生,

现在我们的人都在迫切需要你的捐赠和爱。我们都知道,在2008年5月12日, ,一场突如其来的大地震在四川汶川击中。这可怕的结果和影响超出人们的估计。

现在人们有遭受恶劣的生活条件,缺乏干净的水和食物,以及健康问题。此外,他们正在忍受痛苦的失去他们的亲人、他们的家庭和一切。尽管有许多困难,当地的人们和努力重建家乡的毁灭。所以现在正是时候,我们应该给我们的爱的受害者,比如捐钱和衣服。

如果你愿意帮忙,请联系我们在12597821这个数字在白天,晚上56751457。加入我们的行动和扩展我们的爱变成一个精神,敢任何可能的困难。

谢谢你!

谨致问候, 学生会

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（7）

1. 近年来很多名牌大学都降低标准招收名人学生，有些人反对这种做法。

2. 但也有不少人认为这样做无可厚非。

3. 你对此的看法是??，为什么？

参考范文：

审题：通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段概述近半来名牌大学降低标准招收名人学生的现象；第二段指出关于该现象的两种不同观点并说明各自的理由；第三段表明“我”的看法并说明理由。

Should Universities Lower Admisssion Requirements for Celebrities?

In recent years, many famous universities lower admission requirements for celebrites. More and more celebrities, especially sports stars, have been admitted to famous universities even without an entry examination. This phenomenon has become a topic of widespread controversy.

Some people object to it strongly. They hold that this admission pattern does not comply with the basic fairness rule of education. And if a person who has no enough academic ability is admitted to the university, it will be an insult on college education. However, still other people think it acceptable. They say that these celebrities deserve this privilege because they have proved their abilities in their field.

Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the latter one. In my opinion, these celebrities have sacrificed much learning time for their work, so they should be provided a better chance for learning. Besides, if celebrities accept advanced education, they could serve the society better. Therefore, I suggest that people should pay more attention to these celebrities' efforts and contributions rather than the special treatment they enjoy.

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（8）

1. 现在很多大学生都热衷于追求名牌。

2. 分析这种现象的原因。

3. 你如何看待该现象？

参考范文：

审题：通过审题可知这是一篇说明现象类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段概述大学生热衷名牌的现象；第二段说明导致大学生热衷名牌的原因；第三段谈谈“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并给出相关建议。

Craze in Famous Brands on Campus

In recent years there has been a craze in famous brands among college students. On campus we can see many students dressing in famous brands from head to toe. It is worth more attention that even some students from poor families also begin to join in the army following famous brands.

College students' preference for famous brands is caused mainly by the following factors. Above all, in many college students' eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of identity and position. They believe it can show their good taste. What's more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which has a great attraction to young college students. Besides, parents' spoiling their children helps form their unhealthy consumption habit.

As far as I am concerned , it is inational for our college students to be crazy about buying famous brands. After all, we have no income source. It is shameful to use our parents' money to satisfy our vanity. Threrfore, I suggest that we should follow the consumption principle of being practial and thrifty.

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（9）

1. 全球金融危机对各行业的影响直接导致了大学毕业生求职前景不容乐观。

2. 大学毕业生在这一时期应如何选择工作？

3. 给出你的建议。

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审题：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇对策方法类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段提出金融危机导致大学毕业生求职前景不容乐观这一问题；第二段说明大学毕业生应如何应对这一情况；第三段谈谈“我”对大学生求职的看法。

How to Choose a Job in the Period of Financial Crisis?

Recently, the financial crisis is sweeping the whole world, and China can not escape it. Many companies are faced with the risk of bankruptcy or have been bankrupt in this crisis. This condition shadows the job market, which contributes directly to the face that it is becoming more and more difficult for college graduates to find a job. Therefore, it is high time that students learn the way of finding a job in this hard time.

The following advices could help college graduates to some extent. First, students should adjust their minds and reduce their expectations towards salary. Second, students should analyze the job market carefully to avoid applying for jobs in those companies which are easily affected by financial crisis. Third, students should not blindly enter those big and more developed cities to find jobs; instead, they should tend to those smaller cities for ways out.

Although these advices can not guarantee college students a satisfying job, it at least can help them. No matter how difficult the condition is at present, they should not get depressed. I believe they can conquer this difficulty as long as they have enough confidence.

过关必备：2013年英语四级写作考点演练（10）

1. 随着互联网的普及，很多人开始习惯在网上阅读电子报纸，于是有人认为传统的报纸很快将会被电子报纸取代。

2. 但也有人不赞同这种说法。

3. 你怎样看待？

参考范文：

审题：通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段概述目前电子报纸的流行，引出争议的话题——传统报纸是否会被电子报纸所取代；第二段分别阐述两种不同的观点及理由；第三段表明“我”的看法并说明理由。

Will Traditional Newspapers Be Replaced by Electronic Newspapers?

With the popularization of Internet, there are an increasing number of electronic newspapers for people to read in daily life. Instead of reading traditional nespapers, many people develop the habit of browsing news on Internet everyday. So some people propose such a question: Will traditional newspapers be replaced by electronic newspapers?

Quite a few people's answer is yes. They say electronic newspapers have many advantages over traditional newspapers. For example, they can be updated instantly. Moreover, they can provide