英语作文上海

篇一：2014上海中考英语作文范文和点评

中考作文点评

今年的中考英语作文题是“明年此时”(This Time Next Year )，黄浦区初中英语教研员周加有分析，这道题比较抽象，给予了考生一定的想象空间，可以说是在“意料之外，又在情理之中”。周加有表示，前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受，或者对一些事情进行评论，比较容易套题。但今年的这道题不是很具体，加上时态是将来式，因此对学生来说不太容易套题，要写好必须有自己的想法，所以有一定难度。不过，今年的这道作文题依然延续前几年的特点——以“我”为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便了学生有话可说、有情可抒。 2014年中考英语作文：

题目：This time next year

This time next year I will be enjoying my senior school life 1.which I have expected for a long time. The life then will be 2.as colorful as flowers.I will take an active part in all kinds of activities in high school 3.because the saying goes ”All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. In addition, making friends 4.will be on top of the list since a real friendship5.is of great importance to me. As for me, I will be definitely6.turning a new leaf of my future life this time next year, and I’m really looking forward to it. ? 精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：定语从句修饰对高中生活的向往

亮点二：用as...as的比较级结构，抓人眼球

亮点三： 用到了idiom，而且用的极为恰当

亮点四： on top of the list永远放在第一位

亮点五：be of great importance 名词结构更高端

亮点六： turn a new leaf of my future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章

? 写作小Tip：

今年中考是篇看似记叙却要叙中带议的文章。全文的时态应全部运用一般将来时，对未来生活进行展望。全文应表达积极阳光的信念。

2014年上海中考英语范文1 This Time Next Year

It's exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.

At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.

Life will be totally different, but I'm really looking forward to it.

【解析】

这篇作文需要涉及三个方面：变化、期望和自己的作为，因此文章中需要涵盖着三点。

第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化，第二句是期望及第一个作为，紧接其后的是第二个作为，而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态度。

2014年上海中考英语范文2

This Time Next Year

Life is changeable, and that's why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.

Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Then, I will benefit from reading

English books. What is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English endlessly.

Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.

(110 words)

文章的标题告诉我们文章内容应该是与未来的生活相关的，生活在变化，一年后我将进入高中，但是学习还在继续，所以我仍有自己的目标。文章主要立足于两点，我对未来的计划或者期待，以及我要如何去实现。作为一名英语学习者，我会从三点去提高自己的英语。英语学习是一个持续的过程，只有不断努力才会有收获

篇二：2013-1999年上海高考英语作文范文欣赏

高考英语开放性作文的典范

——1999—2013年上海高考英语作文及范例

1999年上海高考作文及范例

一些学生认为学英语很重要；一些学生则认为不必学英语；我认为……（观点、理由）

Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the

struggle of life”. Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.

In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best.

There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages

of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly，it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.

For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words)

2000年上海高考作文及范例

1、我最难忘的一课2、具体说明为何难忘3、感想

An Unforgettable Lesson

In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident.

One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.

She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her.

A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my

opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words)

2001年上海高考作文及范例

请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。

Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both

favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.

First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and

safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application.

Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces.

Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged. (199 words)

2002年上海高考作文及范例

简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。

Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the

treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over indulge the child.

We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.

We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in the future?

For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent.

The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. (219

words)

2003年上海高考作文及范例

你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信，谈谈你的看法和建议。

受信人：徐海青寄信人：黄平 写信日期：2003年六月八日

June 8, 2003

Dear Xu Haiqing,

You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.

Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.

A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.

I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.(205 words)

2004年上海高考作文及范例

老师要求你负责班级墙报（wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。

Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was so glad at that. But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not.

Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing. The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.

However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies as well. Perhaps…

No! No! No! I should believe my ability. I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper… It will be an hour for me to do something for my class. I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself.

Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job. I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow. (187)

2005年上海高考作文及范例

古人云：“天生我材必有用”（There must be a use for my talent）。 通过描述你

生活中一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。

There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years.

From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.

When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.

To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.

From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. (200 words)

2006年上海高考作文及范例

下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。

I dream to become an astronaut. Two universities in China can make my dream become true. They are both very good, but I can only choose one.

From the Internet, I learned that there are more advantages offered by the northern university than the ones by the southern one. For example, the fee charged by the northern one is lower. And it will add 20 marks while the southern university will not. In contrast, the southern university’s good point is that it eolls more students.

After comparing the above information, I think I will choose the northern university for the following reasons. Firstly, my parents may not be able to afford my study and living expenses. Secondly, an addition of twenty marks is certainly an irresistible attraction. More importantly, four years of independent life in the north will obviously help develop my personality required as an astronaut.

2007年上海高考作文及范例

以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容：

1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物；

2、 该礼物对他（她）可能产生的影响或带来的变化。

A Present for Father’s Day

The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.

Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club

and make more friends.

2008年上海高考作文及范例

你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing cooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。

你的文章必须包括以下内容：

·你是否会参加比赛

·你做出该决定的具体理由

Version 1:

A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.

Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.

For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.

Version 2:

Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.

There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.

For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.

2009年：

Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening）、烹饪（cooking）、防身术（self-defence）、护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信地内容必须包括：

? 你感兴趣的课程

? 你期望从这门课程中学到什么

? 为什么想学这些内容

It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am

篇三：凯文老师,2015年上海高考英语作文题目(作文解析和范文)

2015年上海高考英语作文解析，及，作文范文

II. Guided Writing (25分)

Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：

1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；

2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。

作文解析：

今年的英语作文题目同样重点考察了主观理由型作文的写作手法，这篇文章要求学生在三幅学校读书节宣传图片当中选出自己最喜欢的一幅，对图片进行描述并说明原因。这也是继2013年和2014年连续两年考察书信体与主观理由型文章的结合体之后出现的第三篇主观理由型文章。

整体来看，今年的作文题目似乎与往年没有什么区别，但细细分析，我们会发现今年英语作文的难度，不管是在文章内容、还是在形式上面，都有了大幅提升。因为考生需要同时兼顾三个难点：1、书信体正确的的书写格式；2、对图片内容进行细节的描述；3、找出恰当的理由(2-3点)进行论证，说理充分，同时注意论点和论据相结合，以及文章语句之间的逻辑严密性。可以说，近三年来英语作文虽然都在考察主观理由这个大的方向，但是考察的难度确实是在逐年递增。

对于考生来说，要想在短短的20分钟之内写好这篇作文，首先需要拿捏好这篇文章的结构。一般来说，文章第一段用来引出话题，第二段可以对所选择的图片进行描写，描写时要格外注意的地方是对细节的详细描述，基本内容讲清楚就可以开始第三段的理由阐述了。

写好重头戏理由之后，在尾段我们无需过多笔墨，基本上通过三句话就可以收尾了。也就是总结加升华，由于这是一篇征集建议的书信体文章，所以需要最后有一句客套话，考生可以通过Looking forward to your reply或者I will appreciate it very much if you can take my suggestions into consideration进行文章自然收尾。这样整篇文章便达到了内容统一，结构完整，说理充分了

作文范文：

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.

In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiam about the story will explode which c

I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Pan Yang