g类小作文

篇一：雅思G类小作文备考策略

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雅思考试包括两类：G类(General Training )目前较多适用于移民; 学术类(Academic)多用于留学。这篇文章主要介绍一下G类小作文。

不同于A类的图表题或流程提，G类小作文中要求考生根据题目中的问题或者事件写一封私人信件，形式可为非正式、半正式或正式。文章字数不能少于150字。

书信的主要结构，即称呼，主体部分和署名。

称呼----开头段(2句)

主体部分----(8-10句)

信末礼貌语和署名----结尾段(2句)

关于不同的称呼和问候，取决于写作的对象，如谁是接收人、写作人与接收人的关系等。考生应根据写作对象的不同而选择适合的写作形式，以实现写作目的，如写给朋友应用非正式的形式、写给上司应用正式的形式。

虽然语句上有所变化，但是在大体的结构上是不变的。

关于书信的书写内容上，考生需要：

? 咨询和/或提供一般性的事实性信息;

? 表达需求、要求、喜恶等;

? 表达看法或投诉;

? 提出要求、建议等。

因此，我们将它分为八大类：1.投诉行 2.咨询信 3.求助信 4.道歉信 5.建议信/提供信息信 6.邀请信 7.感谢信 8.求职信

最后同学们在完成G类小作文的时候需要注意的几点：1. 字数如果达不到最低要求将被扣分。2. 文章内容如果偏题或者跑题将被扣分;3.任何抄袭(如抄袭其他来源的内容)的作文将被重扣;4.文章如果不完整、内容相互没有关联将被扣分(如在任何部分使用点句或笔记形式)。

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篇二：G类小作文

G类小作文

书信九大类：投诉信、道歉信、感谢信、求职信、咨询信、建议信、求助信、邀请信、挂失信。

一．投诉信

解题关键

投诉信是雅思考试中最常见的一种，一般分为三大部分：

第一部分包括自我介绍、投诉事由、自己的感受等；

第二部分为投诉的事实与理由；具体描述当时的情形，如人物、时间、地点和原因等。指出具体问题及其所产生的后果。

第三部分可分为提出个人要求建议，清晰说明读信人可以做的补救措施，希望有关部门和人士做出相应改进，以及提出愿望，希望早日得到答复。

例子：剑桥雅思四 Test 1

You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.

Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter

? say who you are

? give details about the accident

? suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.

Dear Sir or Madam,

讲述自己是谁：可以使用定语从句

I’ （ 上面是结果，后面讲述事情来龙去脉。）

交待写作目的：

I am writing this letter to you to express my dissatisfaction with your services I’ve experienced.

故事需要自己编写：

时间，地点，人物

事情的起因，经过，造成的后果

第一句：I was walking in the dried-fruits area

第二句：突然发生：When suddenly a parcel of walnuts dropped off from the upper shelf and fell right on my head.

第三句：瞬间后果严重 I didn’t realize that until it was too late and I lost my consciousness immediately.

第四句：幸运时刻

Luckily one customer saw me and informed your staff about it; I was sent to hospital without awareness.

下一段（后果）：

The doctor said I would have to stay at the hospital at least for two months. I am a self-employed carpenter and I will not lose my earnings. Your insurance will only cover my medical costs. The dangerous walnuts must have been caused by your employee’s negligence, so I trust you will compensate me with an amount equal to my salary for the time I am unable to work.

第四段：建议

第一句：Is it possible for your stuff to check the shelf every five minutes to make sure all parcels are neatly displayed? I highly suggest that for the good of customers. I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.

第五段：期待回复

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Sincerely yours，

Smith

例子：剑六 P113

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.

Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter

? introduce yourself

? explain what is wrong with the furniture

? say what action you would like the landlord to take

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篇三：雅思G类小作文范文及翻译

5.1.2 范例5-1 投诉信

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to you to complain about the CD Player which I bought in your store in January．After only two days，things started to go wrong．我正写信给你投诉一月份在你们店里买的CD播放机。仅仅两天后，东西就出问题了。

The first problem was the CD drawer，which opened and closed too quickly．I nearly trapped my fingers in it．The next day，I recorded a CD onto a cassette．Everything worked，but the sound quality was very poor．On the following day，the CD Pause button stopped working太快了。我差点把手指卡进去。第二天，我将一张CD刻录到磁带上。一切都正常，但声音质量很差劲。第二天，CD暂停键停止工作。

Naturally，I returned the player to you for repair．Your assistant said I would have to wait only a

week．After two weeks，the necessary spare parts had still not arrived．Eventually，nine weeks later，I collected the stereo．The CD player worked properly，but there was no improvement in the recording quality．自然而然地，我将播放器还给你们返修。你们的助理说我只需要等一个礼拜。两周后，必要的配件部分仍然未到。最后，九周后，我将音响组装起来。CD播放器工作正常，但刻录质量没有得到改善。 I am not satisfied with the equipment nor with the service I have received．I am therefore writing to ask for a full refund．I will return the player to your shop on Monday and I expect to receive a cheque for $250退给我$250。

Yours faithfullyJohns 琼斯

(181 words)

范例5-2 道歉信

Dear Mr./Ms.,亲爱的xxx女士/先生，

I received your letter yesterday complaining that the central heating system in your new house had not been completed by the date promised．I feel awfully sorry that the problem has been caused by my mistake about the date for completion on referring to our earlier correspondence．我昨天收到关于您新房中央供暖系统到期未完工的投诉。对此我感到非常抱歉，这个问题是由于我参照原来的合同弄错了完工时间。

I mistook your date of completion for next week due to my inattention，so the working team installed the system according to the wrong date．I realize the inconvenience that our oversight must be causing you and will do everything possible to avoid any further delay．I have already given instructions for the work to have priority and the engineers working on the job to be placed on overtime记错成下周，所以工程队根据错误的时间安装系统。我意识到我们的疏忽给您带来的不变，我们会尽可能地加快进程。我已经下令将您的事宜优先处理，工程师们会加班完成工作。

I assure you that these arrangements should see the installation completed by next weekend．I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes意。

The fault is entirely mine and I deeply regret that it happened．(159 words)这个错误完全在我，我对该事深感抱歉。

Yours faithfully, 您忠诚的，

Johns

Dear Mr. and Mrs. JohnsI have arrived home safely．I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality to me during my recent stay in your beautiful home.我已安全到家。我写信来感谢近期在你家这段时间对我的款待。 During my stay，I was overwhelmed by the enthusiasm expressed by you and your family．We had interesting discussions on my training program．I have found these discussions very informative and useful．I sincerely hope we could have more exchanges like this one later人所展现的热情，我受宠若惊。我们曾经就培训计划有过愉快的讨论。我觉得讨论非常有意义。我真心的希望以后还能像上次一样彼此交换意见。

Moreover，there is one thing I need your help．I left my laptop computer in the bedroom I lived in your home．It is a silver one with the black keyboard. I wonder if you could send it back to me．Enclosed please find a cheque of 25 dollars．I hope it will cover the postage我把笔记本电脑落在你们家卧室了。是银色镶黑色键盘的。能不能请你们将它寄给我。请附上一张25美元的支票。我希望这够支付邮费。

I am looking forward to your early visit to China when I will be able to pay back some of the hospitality I received during my memorable stay in your beautiful country．我希望您们能早点来中国，好让我稍微报答在你们国家的美丽之旅期间受到的款待。

With kind personal regardsFaithfully yours, Mary

Dear Sir／Madam，亲爱的先生/小姐，

Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the April 10 Student Daily interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking．你们4月10号在学生日报上发布的网络维护工程师这一职位吸引了我，因为你们描述的职位听起来正是我在寻找的。

According to the advertisement，your position requires a good university degree，Bachelor or above in Computer Science or equivalent field and proficiency in Windows NT 4.0 and Linux System．I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements．I will be graduating from XXX University this year with a MSC．My studies have included courses in computer control and management，and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual and SQL Server．根据广告，你们的职位要求有好的大学文凭，学士及以上的电脑科学或者相关专业，并且熟知Windows NT 4.0 和 Linux 操作系统。我觉得我满足这些要求。我今年会从xxx大学毕业拿到MSC学位。我的专业当中包含电脑控制管理课程，并且我用Microsoft Visual 和 SQL Server设计了一个控制模仿系统。

During my education，I have grasped the pinciples of my major subject area and gained practical

skills．Not only have I passed CET-6，but more importantly I can communicate fluently in English．My ability to write and speak English is a good standard．在学期间，我把握了我的专业领域并且获得了实践技巧。我不仅通过了大学六级，而且能用英语流利交流。我的英语口写能力优秀。

I would welcome an opportunity to attend you for an interview. Enclosed is my resume and if there is any additional information you require，please contact me．我希望能得到机会面试。附上我的简历，如果你们需要更多信息，请联系我。

Yours faithfully, 你忠诚的，

John 琼斯。

范例5-5咨询信

Dear Professor Moss, 亲爱的摩斯教授，

I am Sandy，a junior student of the Department of Electrical and Computer Engineering．I am writing to inquire about your African Literature and Culture course．我是珊蒂，一名电子计算机工程学院的大三学生。我写信来咨询您的非洲文学文化课程。

Just a few days ago，I found the course when we were asked to choose optional for next semester．The name of African Literature and Culture aroused my great interest．Because of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this course in next semester．Except the name，however，all I know about the course is that it is a two-hour one held on every Thursday afternoon．I want to get more details of the course．First of all，I would like to know the brief outline of the course．Moreover，I wonder if there are some relevant books that you can recommend for me to read before the course．几天前，当我们被要求选修下学期课程时，我看见了这门课。我对非洲文学文化非常感兴趣。由于您的声望和我对文学的热情，我希望下学期能学习这门课程。但是，除了名字，我只知道这门课程每周四下午上课2小时。我想知道更多的细节。首先，我想知道这门课程的大纲。还有，我想您能不能推荐基本参考书让我在开课之前阅读。

I also heard that another course of yours，Chinese Literature，is held every Friday afternoon．If the registration of this course hasn’t closed yet，I will be so glad to participate in your class．我还听说了您的另外一门课，每周五下午上课的中国文学。如果这门课的注册还未关闭，我也很想学习这门课。

Sorry to bother you．Your help will be greatly appreciated．(191 words) 打扰您了。承蒙您的帮助。 Sincerely yours, 您忠诚的，

范例5-6

Dear Mr. Clinton,

I hope that this unintended letter would not surprise you．I used to study in your school, and this

letter is basically concerned about some courses I had been through. It is too bad some problems

occurred. Otherwise, I was very satisfied with my learning ex(转 载 于:wWW.zw2.Cn 爱作文网)perience there.

The management course is generally satisfactory．I have been especially impressed with the books the

lecturer had recommended. However，it has come to my attention that some of your lecturers are so

young that they seem to have deficient experience in the field of management．They should connect

those theories with the real world．I trust that your school can manage to improve this situation．Those

lecturers are undoubtedly aspiring，but I personally suggest that they can undergo more practical

training，and learn more about the application of theories．

Thanks a lot for your concern．I am looking forward to improvement, although I am no longer your student．

Sincerely yours，

(192 words)

5-7

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am looking for a single-bedroom apartment in London．Please let me know if you have any suitable

vacancies．I would be happy to give you a deposit to hold it.

I am about to attend a training course in London during the months of July and August，and St．Atlas

Polytechnic College，the college where I will be studying, is at Queens Street．If possible，I would like to

have an apartment that is within two or three miles of the college．The apartment is preferably spacious，

air conditioned with a private bathroom，a telephone line and Internet access．I will appreciate it if it is

quiet，comfortably furnished，because I think it will help me focus on my studies．I am willing to pay up

to ￡500 a month．

I

would appreciate hearing from you within the next two weeks．My email address is

xiaoyan@xtra.co.cn.

Sincerely yours，

Johnson Lee