英语作文专题

篇一：中考英语作文专题复习

中考英语专题复习：书面表达的考点讲解和训练2014-6-2

【考点扫描】

书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：

1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；

2、看图作文；

3、根据汉语提示作文。

无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。

【名师解难】

一. 训练方法

1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。

同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。

2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练

习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。

3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习

惯，考试时就能得心应手。

二. 应试策略

1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。

3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。

5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用

或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。

1）语态、时态要准确无误。

2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。

3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。

5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。

2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。

3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。

4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。

5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先

后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：

1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

6.改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：

1）格式是否有错。

2）拼写有无错误。

3）语言是否用错。

4）时态、语态错误。

5）标点错误。

6）人称是否用错。

三. 注意事项

书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。

【中考范例】

VII. 书面表达

假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。

2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。

Dear friend,

Hello！

I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York.

I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a

basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together.

After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I

hope I will visit your country one day.

Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours, Bob

Dear Bob,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Zhang Qiang

【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。

1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。

2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方的来信；2、愿意和对方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；4、自己的身份、特长和爱好； 5、自己的希望。

3、列提纲：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4. a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5. hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。

5、写全文：

Dear Bob,

I got your letter yesterday. I’m very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Zhang Qiang. I’m fifteen years old, too. I live in Shaanxi.

I’m a middle school student, too. I like English and physics very much. I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?

I hope we’ll meet in China some day. I’m sure we’ll have a good time toge(转载于:www.Zw2.cN 爱 作 文 网)ther.

Please write (to) me soon.

Yours,

Zhang Qiang

6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。

书面表达【解题指导】

中考书面表达主要考查学生初步的书面表达能力，要求学生能根据所给提示，用英语写一篇语言正确、内容完整、语句连贯的短文。情景一般贴近学生的学习和生活；提供情景的形式包括文字、图画、图表、提纲等。对于英语写作，同学们要注意：

1. 认真阅读提示，彻底理顺思路。

做中考书面表达题时要认真阅读提示，不仅要弄清试题提供的所有信息，还要考虑用哪种体裁。是记叙文、说明文、议论文？还是应用文？如果是应用文，还要考虑是书信、日记、通知、启事，还是便条等。然后还要考虑用哪一种人称和时态。这样就会思路明确，写出来的短文才能条理清晰。2·1·c·n·j·y

2. 紧扣要点，合理遣词造句。

根据试题内容，列出要表达的要点，找出能体现要点的词、短语和句型。如果是应用文体，还应特别注意各种应用文的格式。造句时应做到尽量使用考纲中要求的词汇，句子宜短不宜长，句型宜简不宜繁，同时也要适当用一些宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句等复合句，以增强短文的逻辑性。21世纪教育网 21*cnjy*com

3. 精心谋篇润色，仔细核对检查。

文章写好之后，还应注意句与句之间以及段与段之间的过渡。在需要的地方加上表示转折、因果、并列、时间等的过渡词或短语，如表示转折的词有：but, yet, however；表示因果的词有：so, since, because；表示并列的词或短语有：and, either...or..., neither...nor..., as well as, not only...but (also)...; 表示时间的词有：next, then, later, at last。适当使用这些词或短语能使文章更加自然、流畅。检查也是不可缺少的重要环节，可以起到及时纠正错误的作用，避免不必要的失分。具体做法是：通读全文，看行文是否通顺，要点是否齐全，词数是否符合要求，体裁是否恰当，单词拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确等。

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〖写作任务1〗

王老师想了解同学们中考后打算做些什么，于是他做了一份问卷调查。右面是三位同学的假期计划，请根据表格中的信息，介绍你们三个人在假期中的打算。关于你的计划需要补充完整，内容可适当拓展。词数：80-100。【来源：21·世纪·

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〖写作任务2〗

如今网上购物已经成为一种非常流行的消费方式，但是人们在网上通常会买些什么东西呢？请同学们参考下面的图片，以Shopping online为题写一篇100词左右的英语作文。

Shopping online

〖写作任务3〗

Simon分别测量了一天中六个不同时间点的温度，制成统计表。假如你是Simon, 请你根据所给图表写一篇80词左右的短文，简要说明图表的内容。21世纪教育网版权所有

参考答案：〖写作任务1〗

One possible version:

For the coming summer vacation, different students have different plans, and ours are all interesting and meaningful.www.21-cn-jy.com

Han Lin is going to do something meaningful for the neighbourhood because he is really fond of helping others. Wang Fang will do housework at home to make her parents less tired. I am going to help protect the environment by planting trees

around our city. Moreover, I will tell more people to care for the environment.21cnjy.com

In short, although we have different kinds of plans, we all want to try our best to do something meaningful.

〖写作任务2〗

One possible version:

Shopping online

Nowadays shopping online is becoming more and more popular. People can buy whatever they want on the Internet. We can know from the picture that 30% of the people spend their money on clothes and shoes. The number is the biggest of all. 8% of them like buying movie tickets online. The number of people who buy food and books is almost the same. 15% buy books and 16% buy food. And it’s also a good way for people to buy electrical products online, because they can receive their products at home. 18% of people choose this way. There’re also 13% of the people buying other things online.

〖写作任务3〗

One possible version:

I measured some temperatures on October 10th. At four in the morning, the temperature was 5℃. Then it rose gradually. At eight in the morning, it reached 10℃. At noon, the temperature rose to 14℃. It was the highest temperature of the day. Later, the temperature began to drop. At 4 pm, it dropped to 11℃. At 8:00 pm, the temperature fell to 7℃. At midnight, the temperature was only 3℃. It was the lowest temperature of the day. 2-1

泰安市2014年中考英语书面表达预测一

一、时事新闻、国家政策、家乡变化：

（一）马航MH370

飞往北京的马航MH370飞机于2014年3月8日凌晨与地面失去联系，世界各国参与搜寻，但仍下落不明，飞机上的大部分乘客（passengers）是中国人，全国人民都很担心，全世界的人们都很关注。

对于马航的下落，世人对此有着各种不同的猜测，请将下面的几种推测整理成文，并阐述自己的观点，请以Where has the flight gone ?为题写一篇词数为80——100的文章，开头已给出。以下所有信息都要包含在文章里面。

(1) 很多人说MH370一定坠入了大海，机上无人生还；

(2) 但也有人说MH370可能坠毁在沙漠（desert）无人区,可能还有人活着；

(3) 甚至有人说MH370被外星人袭击（attack）,飞机上的人被带到了另一个星球，所有的人都还活着。

（一）One Possible Version:

The flight from Malaysia to Beijing lost information and disappeared at about 2 o’clock March 8th2014.People all over China are worried about it. People around the world care about it. Where has the flight gone? Different people have different ideas about the question. Many people said MH370 must fall into the sea and all of the passengers had died. However, some people said MH370 might land in a dessert where there isn’t a person but some passengers might be alive. Some people even said MH370 might be attacked by the aliens and all of the passengers had been taken to another planet and they are all alive now.I think something strange has happened to MH370. I hope that all of the passengers are still alive. And I hope that all of them will come back home some day. Where has the flight gone? Do you know?

(二) 禁烟

据世界卫生组织(WHO)统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定，从今年5月1 日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合图片和下面所给要点，以“Saying No to Smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。

1. 吸烟有害;

2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病;

3. 吸烟影响青少年成长;

4. 二手烟同样有害;

5. 你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办?

注意：

1. 词数：80词左右;标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数;

2. 应覆盖所有要点;可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

3. 参考词汇：lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手烟。

篇二：英语作文专题

英语作文专题

一、简单句

1主语+谓语

I sleep.

主语+谓语+宾语

I play basketball.

2主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语

I tell him a story.

3主语+谓语+宾语+宾补。

I make them happy.

4主语+系动词+表语

I am busy.

5含情态动词的句子

主语+情态动词+动词原形+其他

We should clean our classroom .

二、时态

1、一般现在时（1、表经常和习惯性的动作。2、表主语具备的能力及性格爱好等。标志词：often usually always sometimes never )

句式：主语（非三单）+动词原形+其他。

I often get up at 5:30.

主语（三单）+动词+s或es+其他。

My father often get up at 5.

2、一般过去时（表示过去发生的动作和存在的状态。标志词：yesterday last year just now two days ago )

句式：主语+动词的过去式+其他。

I got up at 6 yesterday.

3、一般将来时（将来发生的动作或存在的状态。标志词：tomorrow next year in two days)

句式：主语+will +动词原形+其他

I will get up at 4 tomorrow.

主语+be going to+动词原形+其他。

I am going to play football after school.

4、现在进行时（现在正在发生的动作或存在的状态。标志词：now ) 句式：主语+be +现在分词 +其他

I am reading English .

、5过去进行时（过去某一时刻或某一段时间正在发生的动作或存在的状态。标志词：from one to three yesterday at10 yesterday)

I was writing a letter when he came in.

6、现在完成时（1、过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响或结果。2、从过去某时开始一直持续到现在的动作或状态。标志词：just ever yet already for+一段时间 since+时间点）

句式：主语+have\has+过去分词+其他

篇三：小升初英语作文专题

作文专题

审题过程

1. 时态：主要考虑四种时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时，现在进行时。

要根据题意判断正确的时态。

注意：一篇作文可以不止一种时态。

2. 人称：主要有第一人称和第三人称。审题时根据题意用正确的人称写。

1） 如使用第三人称， 需注意三单在一般现在时的用法，动词后需加s或es。如：She likes playing ping-pong.

2） 写作过程中注意代词的格式。

如： He (主格) feels tired. I like him. (宾格)

This is his (形代) bike. That’s not your book, It’s mine. (名代)

复数形式：Their English teacher is very funny. They often play football together.

3. 结构：使文章有条理的方法

1） 使用时间词语衔接：如写过去时的作文：Last Sunday; Last Weekend; My

2) 总起句和结尾句前后呼应。

4. 容易出错的句型： 1） be动词和行为动词： 同一个句子只能出现一种（现在进行时除外）

错误： I was went to the park last Sunday. (把was去掉) 2） like + 动词ing形式。

I like going shopping. (注意like 后面紧跟的动词一定要加ing)

3） 三单句子： She goes to school on foot every day. 动词后加s(或es)!

4） There be句型

There is a bird and two monkeys in the tree. (用there is 而不是there are)

范文：

1. 过去时：(动词用过去式)

Last Weekend

I was busy last weekend. I went to the park with my

grandparents. We went fishing there. I played ping-pong with my friends. It was funny! I read books and did my homework at with my father. I was very happy last weekend.

2. 将来时: （be going to +动词原形 或 will + 动词原形）be going to=will

Sunday Plan

I am going to have a busy Sunday. I am going to the park with my grandparents. We will go fishing there. , I am going to play ping-pong with my friends. we will go to the cinema. I am going to read books and do my homework at home. I will play chess with my father. It will be a funny day!

3. 一般现在时： （第一人称：动词用原形）

My Sunday

I have a busy Sunday. I often go the park with my grandparents. Sometimes we go fishing there. , I often play ping-pong with my friends. Then we go to the cinema. I often read books and do my homework at home.

4. 一般现在时： （三单：注意人称、动词+S）

My family

There are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. He likes playing football. He is very kind. My mother is a teacher. She often reads books in the evening. I am a student. I like playing computer games and do sports with my friends. I often go hiking with my parents on the weekend. I love my family very much.

小升初英语作文范文

1、我的书包My Backpack

I have a backpack. It is large and it is blue. It is a birthday gift from my parents. I love it very much. It is very "hard-working", because I keep all my school things in it. It is very heavy. It is with all the time during school days. It is a good friend of mine.

2、我的铅笔盒My Pencil-box

I have a good friend. Her name is Pencil-box. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! There is a picture on her face. It’s a picture of flowers. Her coat is blue and yellow. There are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. When I want to copy or write the new words, I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.

3、我的房子My House

I have a house. It is big and new. There are eight rooms in it. They are a living-room, a kitchen, three bedroom, one study and two bathrooms. I watch TV in the living-room. I do my homework in the study. I have dinner in the kitchen. This is my house. I like it.

4、我的卧室I love my bedroom

I have a bedroom .It is not big, but it is nice .There is a bed in my bedroom. A yellow dog is on the bed .Every night I sleep with it . Next to the bed, there is a desk. A bear lamp is on the desk .I like the bear lamp. It’s cute. I like to do homework under the lamp every evening. I have a new computer in my bedroom .It is my best friend . Because I study at it, play at it . There are also several beautiful pictures on the wall.

I like my bedroom. Do you like it?

5、我的新学校

I have moved to my new school since September. It is a modern and nice school which is in Beijing. It has a playground, a library, several labs, classrooms with electronic equipment and so on. It's quite different from my old school. It's larger, much more modern. This is why I love my new school. If you are free, you are warmly welcomed to come to our school to have a look.

6、开学见闻

It's the first day of school once again. Stepping into the gate of the school always reminds me of the responsibility I carry as a student. Being a student is not just about attending classes and showing up during examinations. I’m here to be empowered. To gain knowledge is all about empowerment. And wish that someday, I could use that knowledge to make a significant contribution to the society.

7、今年暑假(This vacations/)

In this vacations I am going to go to travel in some famous places and I am going to go to visit my grandparents in the village. I am going to learn something different. like example: I know people work in the village it is so hard and so tired, they are grow the vegetable, rice and something else it is very difficult.

8、小学的最后一个暑假(the last summer in my elementary school)

The last summer in my elementary school is very unforgettable. I remember I will go to another school and have to leave my friends and teachers, I feel sad , but I learned to get together with them to remember the friendship between us, we have a good time and swear to study hard in order to have a bright future.

9、今天的经历(Today’s experience)

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.

The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them . When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I ran to him and said ,” Animals are our good friends and we must take good care of them .”

10、有趣的一天A Wonderful Day

Last November 24 was my birthday. I had a party at my home. My friends came to my home in the afternoon and I got a lot of presents from them. At the party, we ate a big cake, sang songs, watched TV and listened to music. We were very happy. But all good things must come to an end. We said goodbye at about ten o'clock. We had a very good time on November 24.

11、生日（Birthday）

My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.

At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture books, pens.They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out. we sing and dance.

We have a good time at the party.

12、我的理想。 我想成为校长(I want to be a headmaster)

I want to be a headmaster when I grow up. I think that’s a good job. My school is in the forest. It’s very beautiful. I go to work by Benz at eight o’clock in the morning. The teachers in my school are kind and patient. They are all hardworking so they get good salary. The children in my school have three classes in the morning. In the afternoon, they play and pick up mushrooms or strawberries in the forest. They have no homework. They are very happy! At four o’clock in the afternoon, I go home with kinds of mushrooms and fruits in my Benz. They are for my dinner.

动物

13、我的狗（My Dog）

I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?

14、猫(A cat) Who am I?

Hello! My name is Feifei. My mother is very beautiful. My father is very handsome.

So I’m very lovely. Look! My coat is white. My eyes are blue. I have a long tail. Fish is my favorite food. I like mice too. Guess! Who am I?

15、我喜欢的动物（Animals）

I like animals very much. I have a dog, It’s my favourite animal. It’s white, It looks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears. But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.

It often stares at my food when I have a meal. When I’m home it follows me all the time.

When I do my homework, it often sits beside quietly, but sometimes runs around me and shouts: Woof! Wood!.

I like my dog very much.

16、动物自我介绍：兔子 Do you like me?

Hello! Everyone. I’m a little rabbit. My name is Hanhan. Look! I’m very lovely. My eyes are red. My ears are long. My hair is white. My tail is short. I like carrots very much. I have a good friend. She’s my little master. Her name is Zhou Xun. We always play games together. I like her very much and she likes me, too.

人物

17、自我介绍

Hi! I am a happy and quiet girl. I am from China. I am twelve years old. I am a pupil. I am in Class Three Grade Four. I have many good friends. I like many pets: the peacock, panda, rabbit and bird. They are lovely. I am tall. I have around face, there are big eyes, small mouth, small nose on my face. I have a black long hair. I like eating apples, bananas, chicken and...I like music, singing, running, pinting...I often say: Book is my good friend. I like it! Who am I? Yes, my name is Lv Enhui.Do you like me?

18、我的好朋友（My Good Friend）

Zhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts , music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We