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篇一:英语作文 说明利弊型论说文

第三节 说明利弊型论说文

说明利弊型论说文是四、六级作文中另一常见命题形式,它一般要求作者针对某一事物或某一现象从正反两方面辨证地分析它的优缺点,然后表明自己对该事物或现象的看法。由此可见,此类作文一般可写成“三段式”或“四段式”的文章。

描述某一现象(事物) → 分析其优点 → 分析其缺点 → 我的态度或看法。

在分别说明某一现象(事物)的优点或缺点时,切忌凌乱,一定要有条理。可以使用一些过渡词或词组,如:firstly, secondly, finally; For one thing,… For another, …

在文章最后一段表明自己的态度或看法时,考生最好给出相应的理由或者提出更好的方法以减少某现象(事物)可能带来的副面效应。

范文 (一) (CET4 1992.12)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic

Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports. You should write at least 120 words, and

base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 运动的积极因素

2. 运动的消极因素

3. 我的体会

Sports are conducive to health. First, they stimulate blood circulation. As a Chinese saying goes, “Running water is never stale and a door-hinge never gets worm-eaten.” Good blood circulation can prevent diseases. Besides, sports help digestion. If one often takes exercise, he will not suffer dyspepsia. Most important of all, sports make one energetic. One who takes exercise everyday is always full of vigor and will never be languid.

However, there are also disadvantages for taking exercise. First, if one takes exercise in the morning, he will sweat but he will have to go to work with wet underwear in a hurry, which is harmful to health. Besides, it is also time-consuming to take exercise. If one takes exercise at regular intervals, he can keep fit but most probably he will lag behind in other fields. Worst of all, if one takes exercise without taking in enough nutrition, his health will run down for malnutrition, which is just the opposite to what he wishes.

Admittedly, I find it beneficial to health to take exercise. However, I seldom take exercise all my life. When I was young, I refused to take exercise for lack of nutrition. Now I refuse to take exercise because I cannot afford the time to take a bath after taking exercise.

范文解析:

范文首段开门见山,开篇几即给出主题句 “Sports are conductive to health”,紧接着从三方面说明了参加运动的益处:预防疾病、促进消化、使人精力充沛。根据作者所使用的过渡词语 “first” “besides” “most important of all” 我们可以看出这三大益处在文中并不是处于并列地位的,而是有主次之分的。 考生应该熟记 “most important (worst) of all” 这种表递进的过渡短语,因为在写作中常常会用到它。其中 “blood circulation” “digestion” “dyspepsia” 等与身体健康相关的专业词汇的使用,足可见作者的写作功底。另外,作者还引用了中国的一句成语“流水不腐,户枢不蠹“不,这不仅给文章增色不少,而且也给文章提高了评分档次。

文章第二段用转折过渡词 “however” 承上启下,使本段自然转入中心议题—— 运动的消极因素,紧接着用举例的方法具体说明参加运动可能产生的不良后果。本段同样使用了过渡词语 “first” ?besides” “?worst of all” 与第一段遥相呼应,文章的结构一目了然。其中time-consuming, at regular intervals和malnutrition等词语和非限定性定语从句的运用显示出作者的写作的功底,必然帮助考生获取高分。

最后一段作者得出结论:参加运动对健康有益,但突然笔锋一转叙述了他很少参加运动的原因,这多少给读者耳目一新的感觉。在叙述其中的原因时,作者用了两种不同的句式::“…for lack of…” 和 “…because…”。在这里值得一提的是表达原因的句式有很多种,为了让你的作文语言富于变化,考生在平时的学习中就最好注意积累。

范文 (二) (CET4/6 1996.1)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic

Two-Day Weekend You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition

on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 双休日给我们大学生带来的好处

2. 双休日可能产生给大学生带来的问题

3. 我应当怎样过好双休日

Generally speaking, two-day weekends are not only a time for us college students to relax ourselves, but also a time to improve ourselves. To have a good rest after a week?s hard work, we have plenty of recreation opportunities. We can read to our hearts? content, go sightseeing, and play games with our friends. Some students find part-time jobs on weekends so that they can ease their families? financial burdens and know more about the society.

However, some students are just wasting their time on weekends. Some spend their time playing cards overnight, playing PC games, even drinking a lot with their friends. Some spend the whole weekend going traveling and feel tired when they return so that their studies will be greatly affected.

As a student, I think the first thing we should do is study. Spending two or three hours in going over lessons every weekend will give me great rewards. After finishing my homework, I can do many other things, such as mountain climbing, watching films and skating. Of course, I?ll also have a good rest to refresh myself and get well prepared for next week?s study. In short, by planning well we can achieve a lot on weekends. Otherwise, we?ll get nowhere.

范文解析:

范文首段开门见山,概括了双休日给大学生带来的好处:给他们提供了休息的时间和提高自己的机会。紧接着,作者 通过举例进一步说明了大学生在双休日可以做的有意义的事情。本段的闪光点在于 “recreation” “ease financial burdens” “to our heart?s content” 等词语的运用,因为双休日这个话题太普通就更需要考生用一些在大学里掌握的一些新的词汇来发表自己的看法,这样才能使文章显得与众不同。另外,本段表达的内容虽然都很简单,但作者使用的句式却富于变化,既有简单的并列句,又有 so that引导的结果状语从句,还有不定式做状语的复合句。

第二段中转折过渡词 however 承上启下,使本段自然转入本段的主题 ——双休日可能带来的问题。这里值得考生学习的是作者没有直接将提纲翻译成英语作为该段的主题句,而是自己重新拟订了一个主题句。本段主要从浪费时间这个角度来阐述双休日的负作用,论证方式主要是举例说明,所引用的事例非常真实、典型且具代表性,因此也相当具有说服力。

第三段as a student 承上启下,转入从作者本人的角度表达自己合理利用双休日的打算。其中, “the first thing ” “after” ??of course,…also…” 等过渡词语比 “first” “second” “finally” 更具有鲜明的特点,表明考生的语言灵活而不落俗套。最后作者成功收尾,得出结论:只要计划的好,我们的双休日就可以过得非常有意义。

总而言之,本文紧扣主题,结构严谨,说理透彻,逻辑性强。

? 说明事物优点的常用句式

1. There are several advantages in / of … The first / biggest advantage is that…

??有几方面的优点,第一个/最大的优点是

2. Nothing / Few things can equal / match with/ be compared with …in terms of…

在??方面,(几乎)没有什么东西可以和??相媲美。

3. For all / in spite of / Despite the disadvantages / side effects, it has its compensating

advantages / beneficial effects

尽管存在一些缺点 / 负面影响,但它并非一无是处。

4. … has a positive impact/ influence/ effect on people?s lives.

??对人们的生活起到一种积极的作用。

5. …. is playing an increasingly important role in people?s lives.

??在人们的生活中扮演一个越来越重要的作用。

? 说明事物缺点的常用句式

1. However, …, just like anything else, has its negative side as well.

但是,和其他事物一样,??也有其不好的一面。

2. Of course, the disadvantages can not be ignored.

当然,缺点也是不能忽视的。

3. However, it still has some drawbacks.

但是它还是有一些缺陷。

4. However, just as everything has two sides ,…also has many disadvantages.

但是,正如每个个事物都有两面性一样,?? 也有很多缺点。

5. However, …may also cause/ bring about/ lead to/ result in/ contribute to some problems.

但是, ?? 也可能诱发一些问题。

6. However, it?s often blamed for its obvious defects.

但是,它经常因一些明显的缺陷而受到指责。

7. Everything has two sides. … is no exception.

每个事物都有两面性,?? 也不例外。

8. As the proverb goes, every coin has its two sides/ no garden without its weeds/ every

medal has its reverse. …is no exception.

正如有句言语所说的那样,每件事物都有利有弊。??也好不例外。

9. However, the negative aspects are also apparent/ obvious/ evident. To begin with,…. To

make matters worse,…. Worst of all,…

不足之处也是显而易见的.首先, ??;更糟的是, ??;最后??。

10. The side effects … has exerted on human beings can be boiled down to several major

ones as follows. First,… Second,… In addition,….

??对人类产生的副作用归纳起来有以下几个方面。其一,??;其二,??;此外??。

? 表明事物利大于弊的常用句式

1. As to me, I think the advantages outweigh/ carry more weight than the disadvantages.

就我而言,我认为利大于弊。

2. Anyway, I still believe … has more advantages than disadvantages.

不管怎样,我仍然相信?? 的利大于弊。

3. But for me, I think what is more important is its positive side.

但就我而言,我认为它积极的一面更加重要。

4. The advantages of / derived from … far outweigh / are much greater than the

disadvantages / problems …entails.

??的优点远远多于它引发的问题。

模板(一)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic

Keeping a Pet. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on

the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 养宠物有很多优点。

2. 宠物也会引发一些问题。

3. 我的态度

Nowadays it is common to see ①______________________________________ ① 描述养宠___________________________________________________________________ 物的现状 _________________________________________________.

There are many advantages of keeping a pet. For one thing, ②② 优点之一

_____________

___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________.

For another, ③______________________________________________________ ③ 优点之二 ___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________.

However, keeping a pet, just like anything else, has its negative side as well.

It

may also give rise to some problems. For example, ④④ 举例说明________________________ 缺点之一 ___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________.

Worst of all, ⑤______________________________________________________

______________________________________ for the reason that ⑥___________ ⑤ ⑥ 指出缺___________________________________________________________________ 点之二

________________________________. 说明其中原因 To sum up, there are more advantages than disadvantages to keeping a pet,

⑦__________________________________________________________________ ⑦强调养宠物___________________________________________________________________. 的重要性

模板(二)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Working

at Home. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 居家办公有很多优点,如:节约上班往返时间等。

2. 居家办公也有很多弊端,如:孤独感、混淆生活与工作等。

3. 我的看法

Nowadays,with the development of science and technology, particularly

computer and telephone technology, it has been made a reality that ①① 说明现状 ____________

____________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________.

篇二:英语作文 英语利与弊 模版

英语作文 英语利与弊 模版

对比观点题型 (1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1. 有一些人认为。。。

2. 另一些人认为。。。

3. 我的看法。。。

The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.

Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that

⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

(2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

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阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.

1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.

2. 分析并举例使其更充实.

The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.

First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明).

Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).

In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.

解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, ------(转 载 于:wWW.zw2.Cn 爱作文网)--------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状

In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the

say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.

解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法

篇三:英语作文的对比题型、原因题型、利弊型模板

对比型 (对于微博、 电脑等大家有不一致的看法)

When it comes to……,different people have different opinions. Many people hold the view that……,For one thing…..(或On the one hand…),for the other thing….(on the other hand…)

However,some people have a different attitude ,They regard (believe)that…..,In their views….,Furthermore…..

As far as I am concerned, I stand on the side of…..

原因型(如环境污染的原因 我们要锻炼身体的原因等) Nowadays, ----- has become a serious problem in our daily life,which has aroused(唤醒)wide concern in the public.

What cause it on earth(究竟)?Some reasons lie in the following aspects(以?a href="http://www.zw2.cn/zhuanti/guanyuluzuowen/" target="_blank" class="keylink">路矫?:

First of all(首先)….In the second place(其次)…..Last but not least(最后)…..

In my opinion(In my viewpont)就我的观点来看,I think…..

利弊题型模版(电脑微博电视的利弊)

Nowadays, ------ is playing an important role in our daily life.

Generally, the advantages of------ can be list as follows: First, …...Besides, …..Most important of all, ….

But every coin has two sides.(每个硬币都有正反两面 表示每件事都有正反两面) The negative aspects are also apparent.(消极方面也是明显的) To begin with, …. To make matter worse, ….

Therefore, we should take it seriously .(我们应该要认真对待它) Making full use of(充分利用)------ and reducing affected by the unhealthy aspects.

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