二年级作文培优

篇一：小学二年级阅读与写作培优训练题

阅读一 乌 鸦 兄 弟

乌鸦兄弟俩同住在一个窝里。

有一天，窝破了一个洞。

大乌鸦想：“老二会去修的。”

小乌鸦想：“老大会去修的。”

结果谁也没去修。后来洞越来越大了。

大乌鸦想：“这一下老二一定会去修了，难道窝这样破了，它还能住吗？”

小乌鸦想：“这一下老大一定会去修了，难道窝这样破了，它还能住吗？”

结果又是谁也没有去修。

一直到了寒冷的冬天，西北风呼呼地刮着，大雪纷纷地飘落。乌鸦兄弟俩都蜷缩在破窝里，哆嗦地叫着：“冷啊！冷啊！”

大乌鸦想：“这样冷的天气，老二一定耐不住，它会去修了。”

小乌鸦想：“这样冷的天气，老大还耐得住吗？它一定会去修了。”

可是谁也没有动手，只是把身子蜷缩得更紧些。

风越刮越凶，雪越下越大。

结果，窝被风吹到地上，两只乌鸦都冻僵了。

1．一开始，这个洞大吗？__________________ 为什么兄弟俩都不修补？ ______________

2．由于都不修补它们窝的破洞，最终兄弟俩怎样了？ ___________________________________

3．请找出文中描写寒冷冬天的句子：___________________________________________________

阅读二

小花猫看见人会出汗，觉得奇怪：“咦，我怎么没汗呢？”它去问老牛。老牛指着自己汗淋淋的鼻子说：“汗？在鼻子上。”小花猫摸摸鼻子，没汗！

小花猫再去问小马。小马在凉快的地方打滚。它指着自己的身体说：“汗？在身上。”小花猫甜甜全身，没汗！

小花猫又去问小狗。小狗正吐着舌头乘凉。它说：“汗？在舌头上。”小花猫看不清舌头。

小花猫去找小猪帮忙看舌头。小猪笑了：“你又不是狗，汗怎么会在舌头上？”小猪把脚掌翻开，又叫小花猫把脚掌翻开。哈！两个都笑了：“原来，我们的汗藏在这里！”

1．短文共有＿＿＿＿＿＿节。

2．读了短文，我知道老牛的汗在__________________，小马的汗在___________________，小狗的汗在____________________，小花猫和__________________的汗都在__________________。

3．在文中找出恰当的动词填在下面括号里

（ ）鼻子 （ ）脚掌 （ ）舌头 （）全身

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篇二：作文培优

☆--高考写作备考策略

把握标准，树立标靶（山东高考英语作文各档次评分标准）

26-29（优秀档）紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，显示较强的语言运用能力；语言小错不超过四个。

标准解读，有的放矢

1. “语法结构多样 ”

1）“长短句错落有致，句式丰富多样”给阅卷老师新鲜感。简单，并列，复合句交替使用。 e.g. I have to study harder, or I shall not catch up with my classmates.

The football match had to be delayed, for it was raining heavily. 2）巧用非谓语动词，简洁明快”名词性从句，定语从句状语从句转非谓语。 e.g. If we are united, we stand; if we are divided, we fail.

3) 主被动交替：

Today, we use computers not only in our work but also in our everyday life as well. 4) 肯否交替I will try my best not to let them down

5) 巧用插入语in my opinion; I think; in fact等：

e.g. Measures, therefore, should be taken to deal with the problem.

6) 陈述不如倒装妙，四种形式需记牢。

In no case/By no means/Under no circumstances will I give up learning. In the center of our school lies our library, which is between the garden and the teaching building.(倒装后主语还可续加从句，呈现更多亮点。)

Only in this way/by taking regular exercise can we keep healthy.

So interesting is the film that we wanted to see it a second time.

Much as he enjoys it, he doesn’t want to be addicted to it. ★温馨提示：阅卷老师最喜欢的高级语法有it句型，分词,倒装，从句，独立主格和强调等。

2. “词汇丰富 ”

1）词性多样性如： benefit sb a lot /be of great benefit /benefit a lot from/ be beneficial to

2) 高级词汇使用如： make sense ,cope with, make a difference, traditionally, individually ★温馨提示：准确使用高中阶段的词汇即可，生僻词、长词并非高级词汇，不会得高分。

3)同义词使用,避俗套。more and more people→an increasing number of people; attractive→appealing, inviting, fascinating

4）恰当利用短语代单词，显功力。

realize the importance of →be aware of the importance of English study美文加工厂

一审题很关键：审体裁和题材（综合类为趋势）；审写作要点：依据要点列提纲，确定人称时态，依据要点确定行文逻辑，关联词；审注意事项：开头结尾提示，提示生词词性词义，字数120-150区间内。

二成稿重头戏：打草必要；段落：3段原则：首段引入话题介绍相关信息，切中主题，增加吸引力；主体部分要层次分明合乎逻辑：主旨句-拓展句-结尾句；结尾段：总结全文，主题升华。

三修改尤重要：单词形式（拼写，单复数，冠词，时态语态，主谓一致，固定搭配之介词）；

句子是否完整通顺；过渡自然合理与否。四誊要完美：书写勿过重过淡，不利扫描，字号忌忽大忽小，字形占格子三分之二为佳；分段最好三段至少两段，首行缩进3个字符。 话题储备，诵读经典

话题一 事实现象

Recently, there is a fierece debate in our school on whether …

We cannot deny / There is no denying/ No one could have failed to notice the fact that more and more primary and middle school students are wearing glasses.

话题二 看法与态度

When it comes to this problem, different people hold /have different views on it.

It is universally acknowledged that hard work can lead to success while laziness often results in failure. I personally think we should pay more attention to the safety of school children.

话题三 烦恼与好恶

He seems not to be able to fit in well with others and often feels left out, which worries his parents a lot.

In order to make myself understood , I have made up my mind to study English hard.

She does very well in English, and is good at communicating with others.

Not only does she do well in English, but she is also good at communicating with others. Nothing can interest/delight him so much as travelling.

话题四 建议

You may/ might as well tell him the truth.

I don’t think it any good complaining about it.

It would be beneficial if you could read English evey day. It would be wise of you to have a face-to-face talk with him.

话题五 询问 请求 邀请 希望

I’m looking forward to your immediate response.

We would feel much honored if you could come.

We’d be much appreciate it if you could spare some time to look into it.

话题六 申请

I am writing to apply for the position mentioned in your advertisement/I’m writing in response to your advertisement for the position . And I feel that I’m qualified for the position you have advertised./ I think I’m just the right person for it.

I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and grant me a personal interview.

Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated. I’m looking forward to your early response.

话题七 原因

There are many factors contributing to /resulting in /leading to/accounting for the phenomenon mentioned above.

Obesity often results from lack of exercise and an unhealthy diet. The answer to the question lies in the fact that rivers are being seriously polluted.

话题八 好处 优点 坏处 缺点

It has more disadvantages than advantages.

Computer will bring you great benefit if you can use it to your advantage.

Bad websites with harmful information poison teenagers’s health mentally and physically.

It has a bad influence/effect/impact on the health of your people./It brings more harm than good to…

话题九 重要性 方便 可能性

It is convenient for students here to have access to computers.

In common with cell phones, computer is playing an increasingly important role in our life and work.

It is not other’s help but your actual hard work that counts./What really counts is your actual efforts, rather than other’s help.

First and foremost, it is essential that we should set a practical goal. It is a vital problem that should be properly dealt with as soon as possible.

话题十 变化

Great changes have taken place in our country in recent years.

In recent years people’s style of life has changed a lot.

Recent years have witnessed a great changes in people’s style of life.

The computer has brought about many changes in our work and life. I get my English dramatically improved, especailly my oral skills.

话题十一 数量话题

About fifty percent of parents take a contradictory attitude toward education for all-round development.

Two-thirds of the students approve of the new teaching method, thinking that it can really excite their interest in study. The number of students who have been admitted to university is twice as large as that of last year. 话题十二 对比 转折

The Internet does little harm to you if you use it to your advantage; on the contrary, it can bring you easy access to any information you need and broaden your horizons.

The majority of people prefer watching TV to going to the cenema.

Rather than go to the cinema, most people would watch TV./Most people would rather watch TV than go to the cinema.

While I admit that living in the school can bring about some problems, I personally think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Rome was not built in one day. Similarly, only with continuous hard work can you achieve success.

话题十三 假想 举例 引用

Supposing that there is no pure water, what shall we drink?

Just as the saying goes, success favors the prepared mind./ As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”

Many great men have risen from poverty ---Lincoln, for example/instance. The world will be a more harmonious one if everyone cares more for others.

话题十四 措施

People should take effective measures/steps as soon as possible to make sure that such a thing will never happen again.

Effective measures should be taken as soon as possible to make sure that such a thing will never happen again.

Faced with such severe problems, we should make every possible effort to improve the present situation.

Facing such severe problems, it is urgent for(来自:WWw.zW2.CN 爱作文网) us to do what we can to improve the present situation.

话题十五 感谢

Thank you so much for your timely aid and support. I appreciate it more than I can say.

On behalf of all the students in this school, I’d like to express our sincere appreciation for so many books you’ve brought to us.

I am writing to express my thanks for your nice presents you sent us, as well as for what all you’ve done for the children in the quake-striken area.

话题十六 道歉 遗憾 同情

I am so sorry to have put you to so much trouble.

I’ve got to apologize for the trouble I’ve brought to you.

I regret that I shall not be able to go to your birthday party this evening.

I owe you an apology for leaving without saying goodbye to you that day.

It was a pity that you were not together with us celebrating our National day.

话题十七 祝愿 祝贺

Congratulations on your remarkable achievements!

May you have a nice trip/journey!/Wish you success in your career and joy in your life. I’m happy to learn that you won the first prize in the competition.

话题十八 鼓励 赞美 欣赏

Nothing is impossible if you set your mind on it. You can accomplish anything if you believe in it.

话题十九 结论

From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that attitude determines everything.

话题二十 学校生活

Nothing in the world can delight him so much as working out maths problems.

Don’t hesitate to turn to me if you have any difficulty with your studies.

I’m determined to gain more knowledge and broaden my horizons by reading widely so as to live up to the expectation of my parents.

话题二十一 天气与自然

Faced with the unexpected natural disaster, people were not defeated; instead, they were filled with courage and confidence, and showed great bravery.

Now that we are aware that natural disasters have a lot to do with humans’ activities, we should stop doing what is harmful to nature.

话题二十二 健康 运动 饮食

Bad habits such as smoking and drinking, which do great harm to your health, should be given up. Regular exercise can not only build your body but also help develop your character. Only by eating in a healthy way and exercising regularly can you keep healthy.

话题二十三 语言和文化

Some traditional cultures are in danger of being lost, which worries many people.

The Spring Festival is a traditional festival of China, during which time family members will get together happily and hold a variety of celebrations, enjoying the pleasure of reunion.

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篇三：三年级培优作文指导

三年级培优作文指导

结合“综合性学习”了解家乡的环境，写一写了解到的情况、感受或想法事先收集家乡环境的资料，选择感触最深的内容写具体。

教学目的：

1、引导学生发散思维，感悟生活，培养创新能力。

2、开放形式，让学生写自己的所想所悟，我手写我心，提高写作兴趣。

3、使学生懂得保护环境，爱护人类资源的积极性。

教学过程：

一、创设情境，激趣揭题地球是我们赖以生存的家园，是我们不可分割的一部分，人类在这个地球上快乐地生活了一代又一代，它为我们提供了丰富的资源。例如：我们每天不可缺少的淡水，新鲜的空气和优美的自然环境，而且还生活着我们人类共同的朋友——小鸟、老虎、熊猫……可是，随着科学技术的不断发展，环境造成了严重的灾害，大气和河流污染，文物古迹、基础生活设施遭到破坏，土地、森林、草原在战争中被摧毁，人们日常饮用的井水、河水受到了污染，变成血水、毒水。有些在长时间内无法排除，形成持久而可怕的环境隐患。近年来，全球气温变暖，最高气温达到40摄氏度左右，由于缺少干净的饮用水对农业生产造成极大的危害。全球变暖对自然地球生态系统影响十分明显，由此造成的社会经济后果将非常严重，特别是对与生态脆弱区。我们生存的地球已经千疮百孔。第一玩家

二．情感激发1.提问：除了刚才老师介绍的内容之外，同学们还了解到什么关于环境受到破坏的事例吗？它给我们带来了什么伤害？如果你是科学家，或者保护环境的绿色使者，你将任何去做？（让学生各抒己见）2.激发学生的感情，让他们有创作文章的欲望，呼吁人们来保护自然环境。熊猫游河

三．出示习作要求

【习作要求】

1、作文紧紧围绕保护环境这一话题展开

2、对当前环境面临的严峻形势进行介绍

3、对环境污染的根源进行分析

4、对家乡未来的环境变化进行一个大致的构想

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【本单元作文参考题目】家乡环境的变化

（一）、1.题目自拟2.文体不限3.有真情实感

（二）、让学生独立思考或找人合作，选择诗歌、童话、剧本、记叙文、书信、倡议书等文体，确定题目和文体。

（三）、学生自主选择自己的文本开始写作，教师进行指导。

（四）、交流评价

1.四人小组互赏，推荐一篇佳作。（点评者要做到：你最欣赏哪一点给他提一个意见。）

2.佳作评赏：推荐好的文章，师生共同赏析探讨。

【引路】同学们你们知道什么叫环境污染吗？家乡小河里的水还清澈吗？家乡的天空有没有烟雾弥漫？仔细观察生活，找找家乡存在的环境污染现象，想想环境污染给人们的生活带来哪些危害？保护环境从我做起，考虑自己应该怎样才能做一个环保小卫士，你践踏过路边的花草吗？你把手中的垃圾及时地扔到垃圾箱里了吗？整理好以上内容写一篇环保作文。

家乡的小河

从前，我的家乡有一条清澈明净的小河，河里的小鱼在追逐戏嬉戏,吸引来许多人看热闹.小河两岸种着许多菜,大家都用小河的水浇菜,浇了河里的水,蔬菜长得非常好，尤其是那绿绿的“卷心菜”，鲜嫩得像个胖娃娃似的。

可是，日复一日，年复一年，许多人贪图方便，随手把垃圾扔进小河里。小河两岸的工厂，也把生产过程中的废水排到小河里。从此，小河岸变成一条黑乎乎的脏河，河里再也看不到活泼可爱的小鱼了。而那些死老鼠、枯枝败叶却随处可见。人们都不敢用小河里的水浇菜了，听说，用小河水浇的菜，生长速度特别慢，种出来的菜也是又黄又苦涩，很难吃。

每当我走近小河，仿佛听见小河在哭诉：“乡亲们啊，我曾经全心全意地为大家服务：衣服脏了，来我这儿洗；水牛渴了，到我这解渴：田地缺水了，来我着引水；小孩热了，到我这洗个痛快……可是，乡亲们，你们怎么就不替我着想，你们为了自己一时省事，总把脏东西往我这扔、把废水向我身上倒呢？呜呜”

小河，小河，你别哭了，我一定会把你的话转告乡亲们。让他们都来关心你，爱护你，不再乱扔垃圾，不再把你弄得很脏，让他们记住一句话：善待环境，就是善待自己和子孙。

十年后家乡的环境

现在的家乡环境就已经非常美丽 ，十年后的家乡将是更加的美丽。

十年后，将村村通公路，平整的柏油路将告别尘土飞扬的日子，公路两旁都是绿树成阴，汽车都是靠太阳能提供动力，没有空气污染，速度极快。主城区公路上空架设的人行天桥，减少了堵车现象，人们漫步在天桥上，一边走一边欣赏风景。

十年后的广场到处是挺拔的大树，鲜花盆摆在人们最能观赏的位置，不管是春夏秋冬，严寒酷暑，它们都能昂首挺立，生机盎然地站在那里，因为科学家研究出了一种可以让万物长生不老的药物，使它们新鲜如故，群芳吐艳，人们闲坐在木椅上呼吸着新鲜空气，消除一天的疲劳。要是你乱扔垃圾，垃圾桶就会自动飞过来接住垃圾，使广场始终保持卫生。

十年后的高楼大厦至少都有100层楼，四周全是由花木组成的小区，地坪花园、阳台花园、楼顶花园，到处开满了五颜六色的菊花、杜鹃花、玫瑰花、月季花、兰花……形成了一块块五彩缤纷的大地毯。在大楼中间的空间，还架设着一座座各种形状的天桥，方便了小区人们的来往交流。在天桥上还有一座座天桥，那上面摆放着各种各样的花，形成了一道道五光十色的彩虹…… 十年后的家乡环境美吧！真希望十年后早点到来。