英语改错.im writing to thank you for youe timely help giving to my mother when she was introuble .my mother told me that when she was riding in the stree on last monday ,the car cut in suddenly.that made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg ser

英语改错.im writing to thank you for youe timely help giving to my mother when she was introuble .my mother told me that when she was riding in the stree on last monday ,the car cut in suddenly.that made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg ser
英语改错.im writing to thank you for youe timely help giving to my mother when she was in
trouble .my mother told me that when she was riding in the stree on last monday ,the car cut in suddenly.that made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg serious,but the driver didn't stop.when you saw what had happeded ,you came to give him a hand at once.you helped my mother to get a taxi and take her to the nearest hospital.when the doctor said my mother 's leg broken,you phoned my father.therefore ,berofe my father got to the hospital ,you had left.my mother is now a good condition and she may come home next week.thanks so much for your helps.大写字母就不要在意了,看看哪里有错误的.

英语改错.im writing to thank you for youe timely help giving to my mother when she was introuble .my mother told me that when she was riding in the stree on last monday ,the car cut in suddenly.that made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg ser
1、第一句的giving应该改成given,因为help是give的宾语,所以动词应该变成被动形式
2.the car cut in suddenly.that made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg serious
这里不能用that,应该用which,因为这里是一个非限制性定语从句,which引导的是前面的the car cut in suddenly这一个句子,that没有这种用法.另外serious应该改成副词seriously,因为这里seriously修饰的是hurt这个动词,修饰动词只能用副词.
3.when you saw what had happeded ,you came to give him a hand at once
give him改成give her,太粗心了,妈妈怎么能用him来指代.
4.when the doctor said my mother 's leg broken
said后面是一个完整的句子,主谓宾都不能缺,你把系动词给丢了,这里应该补上,my mother's leg was broken
5.my mother is now a good condition
不能这么写,要说你妈妈现在身体状况很好,应该用in a good condition,介词in不能省略,否则前后搭配不当
6.最后的help用单数就行了,我见过的所有感谢信都不用复数的.

in the stree on last monday 把on去掉

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I'm writing to thank you for your timely help (giving改成given) to my mother when she was in trouble. My mother told me that when she was riding in the stree (去掉on) last Monday, (the改成a) car cut in suddenly, (that改成which) made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg (serious改成seriously), but the driver didn't stop. When you saw what had happened, you came to give (him改成her) a hand at once. You helped my mother to get a taxi and take her to the nearest hospital. When the doctor said my mother 's leg (加入was) broken, you phoned my father. (Therefore改成However), before my father got to the hospital, you had left. My mother is now (加入in) a good condition and she may come home next week. Thanks so much for your (helps改成help).

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