作业帮求改作文大神 能否帮我指出一下错误 From now on,I will start a discussion about saving.No sooner do we hear this title about saving about which we have been talking for a long time than all oi us will never feel tired to convey an uncea
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求改作文大神 能否帮我指出一下错误 From now on,I will start a discussion about saving.No sooner do we hear this title about saving about which we have been talking for a long time than all oi us will never feel tired to convey an uncea
求改作文大神 能否帮我指出一下错误
From now on,I will start a discussion about saving.No sooner do we hear this title about saving about which we have been talking for a long time than all oi us will never feel tired to convey an unceasing flow of words.And now,I also want to spray some speeches towards it.
Given the scale of our country as large as the multitude of ants around sugar,the sense of saving resources can not be strongly too emphasized,though most of us regard our motherland as a fertile land with countless and inexhaustible natural resources.As a matter of fact,the materials property must be run out one day in the coming future
求改作文大神 能否帮我指出一下错误 From now on,I will start a discussion about saving.No sooner do we hear this title about saving about which we have been talking for a long time than all oi us will never feel tired to convey an uncea
1 From now on 一般用于从现在到久远的未来要一直做的事,这用now就可以了
2 你这个spray 太中国话了,spray 的英文注释翻译过来是向脸上,或人身上或田野里喷洒某种小东西,你这类似于中国的喷粪意义不能这样用滴
3 speech太官方,一般很正式,对于你想表达的有意见可以说have some comments 或者简单的opinions就可以了
4 be strongly too emphasized?应该是be emphasized strongly………
5 material property 是个什么鬼,这两个连起来表示材料属性………资源就用resources 就好了
6 about saving about which is 这个saving 跟about 之间该有个and,还有你不觉得这个no sooner than 给你套的太冗长了吗,实话说我是看了好几遍才看懂你的句子
就这么多了,好孩子加油吧,学习英语的路还长呐,我们一起走吧