从你平时的作文里选择一篇进行修改,然后修改的情况分条记录在下面举个例子

从你平时的作文里选择一篇进行修改,然后修改的情况分条记录在下面举个例子
从你平时的作文里选择一篇进行修改,然后修改的情况分条记录在下面
举个例子

从你平时的作文里选择一篇进行修改,然后修改的情况分条记录在下面举个例子
你也初一的吧?我也刚写完这题.
你就写：“①错别字已改正②不通顺语句已调整 ③……”之类的应该可以吧.

很简单啊
例如：这次成绩考得很差—————这次的成绩让我痛苦，难以忘记

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