帮我检查一下英语作文有没有语法错误(不算大小写）1.dear uncle wang,i am a student from xinhua middle school .we will hold a food festival to raise money for the poor students in a county school.i want to invite you to come at 11:

帮我检查一下英语作文有没有语法错误(不算大小写）1.dear uncle wang,i am a student from xinhua middle school .we will hold a food festival to raise money for the poor students in a county school.i want to invite you to come at 11:
帮我检查一下英语作文有没有语法错误(不算大小写）
1.dear uncle wang,
i am a student from xinhua middle school .we will hold a food festival to raise money for the poor students in a county school.i want to invite you to come at 11:00 a.m.next sunday.hope you can come.we will be really happy.
sincerly
kangkang
2.we all know that food is very important to our health.fruits and vegetables are good for our health.they are green food.if we always eat them,we will be healthy.however,if you eat to much junk food,you will never be healthy.most of the junk food are high salt and high sugar.you will be fat if you eat too much of them.but they are always cheap and delicious so a lot of teenagers and children like to eat them.so we should eat less junk food and more vegetables from now on.

帮我检查一下英语作文有没有语法错误(不算大小写）1.dear uncle wang,i am a student from xinhua middle school .we will hold a food festival to raise money for the poor students in a county school.i want to invite you to come at 11:
第二个,第二行food要复数,if的假设形式不能那样写,要这样（If we always ate them,we would be healthy),下一句一样,eat改成ate,will改成would ,you will be fat 那句也要改
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1.Dear uncle wang,
I am a student from Xinhua middle school .we will hold a food festival to raise money for the poor students in a county school.i want to invite you to come at 11:00 a.m. ne...

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1.Dear uncle wang,
I am a student from Xinhua middle school .we will hold a food festival to raise money for the poor students in a county school.i want to invite you to come at 11:00 a.m. next sunday. I hope you can come.we will be really happy.
2.we all know that food is very important to our health. Fruits and vegetables are good for our health.they are green food.if we always eat them,we will be healthy.however,if you eat too much junk food,you will never be healthy.most of the junk food is high salt and high sugar.you will be fat if you eat too much of them.but they are always cheap and delicious. So a lot of teenagers like to eat them.so we should eat less junk food and more vegetables from now on.

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个人认为第二段有点罗嗦,还有most of +不可数名词的系动词应该用第三人称单数吧

1.county（县）应改为country（乡村)
2.hope you can come.缺主语I
3.teenagers and children两词的外延有重叠部分，不可并列。
其他的句子语法上没问题，但文中句与句的连贯性欠缺。

1.hope you can come:we all hope you can come.
2.if you eat to much :to应该改成too
就这两个错误，其他都对了