谁能帮我改一下这个英语作文.We went to Chongqing Garden Expo Park yesterday.many of us brings some food and drinks.Some people brought camera.It took us about one hour to get there by bus.There were many visitors.They looked excited."What
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谁能帮我改一下这个英语作文.We went to Chongqing Garden Expo Park yesterday.many of us brings some food and drinks.Some people brought camera.It took us about one hour to get there by bus.There were many visitors.They looked excited."What
谁能帮我改一下这个英语作文.
We went to Chongqing Garden Expo Park yesterday.many of us brings some food and drinks.Some people brought camera.It took us about one hour to get there by bus.There were many visitors.They looked excited."What a beautifu place!"I said.Then we visited the different kinds of Chinese traditional garden and took some photos.We also learned a lot of knowledge.
When we have fun exploring,I noticed Li Lei was lost.We really worried about him and asked a guard for help.Thanks goodness!We found him at last.Then we enjoyed ourselves.
What a special day!
谁能帮我改一下这个英语作文.We went to Chongqing Garden Expo Park yesterday.many of us brings some food and drinks.Some people brought camera.It took us about one hour to get there by bus.There were many visitors.They looked excited."What
brings---brought(昨天的事,应用过去时)
garden---gardens(复数)
have---had(时态)
Then we enjoyed ourselves.可改成:Then we came back home.(玩得差不多了,就可以回家了)
我们昨天去了重庆花园博览会公园。我们中的许多人带来了一些食物和饮料。有些人带了相机。我们花了大约一个小时坐公共汽车去那儿。有许多游客。他们一脸的兴奋。“什么一个美丽地方!”我说。然后我们参观了不同种类的中国传统园林和拍了一些照片。我们也学到了很多的知识。当我们玩得愉快,我注意到李雷迷路了。我们真的担心他,问一个卫兵寻求帮助。谢谢善良!我们发现他在最后一届那个,是改错句-不是翻译- -We went...
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我们昨天去了重庆花园博览会公园。我们中的许多人带来了一些食物和饮料。有些人带了相机。我们花了大约一个小时坐公共汽车去那儿。有许多游客。他们一脸的兴奋。“什么一个美丽地方!”我说。然后我们参观了不同种类的中国传统园林和拍了一些照片。我们也学到了很多的知识。当我们玩得愉快,我注意到李雷迷路了。我们真的担心他,问一个卫兵寻求帮助。谢谢善良!我们发现他在最后一届
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what a special day!