请看此英语语法有没有错误My mother is a nice person.she always make me feel happiness.I have two mother.One mother she lives in Los Angeles.she is my stepmother.she always make me feel bad.I have not liked her since I met her.Right now I l

请看此英语语法有没有错误My mother is a nice person.she always make me feel happiness.I have two mother.One mother she lives in Los Angeles.she is my stepmother.she always make me feel bad.I have not liked her since I met her.Right now I l
请看此英语语法有没有错误
My mother is a nice person.she always make me feel happiness.I have two mother.One mother she lives in Los Angeles.she is my stepmother.she always make me feel bad.I have not liked her since I met her.Right now I live with her.Another mother she live in China now.I bore in Guangdong of China.From I was a child I lived with her.Each time I wacth my mother and I in the picture I cry,because my mother make me alot of recollection.When I was a child my mother taught me much thing and cared me a lot.I will always remember my mother

请看此英语语法有没有错误My mother is a nice person.she always make me feel happiness.I have two mother.One mother she lives in Los Angeles.she is my stepmother.she always make me feel bad.I have not liked her since I met her.Right now I l
My mother is a nice person.she always make me feel （happiness……happy.hapiness是名词,feel后应该接形容词）. I have two （mother加S因为是复数）. One mother （she删掉） lives in Los Angeles. she is my stepmother. she always （make……making) me feel bad. I (have……did) not liked her since I met her. (Right 去掉吧）now I live with her. Another mother (she删掉）（ live加S） in China now. I （bore……wan born in Guangdong of China.（from……when) I was a child I lived with her. (Each……every） time（when) I wacth my mother and I in the picture I cry, because my mother (make ……gave)me a lot of recollection. When I was a child my mother taught me (much thing……many things) and (cared me a lot……took care of me carefully). I will always remember my mother
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小朋友，错误挺多的。
she always makes me feel happy
I have two mothers
One mother lives in Los Angeles
she always makes me feel bad
I have not liked her since I met her-----I don't her from ...

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小朋友，错误挺多的。
she always makes me feel happy
I have two mothers
One mother lives in Los Angeles
she always makes me feel bad
I have not liked her since I met her-----I don't her from the first sight
Another mother she live in China now.---The other mother lives in Chian now
I wan born in Guangdong, China
I lived with her when I was a child
Each time I wacth my mother and I in the picture I cry, because my mother make me alot of recollection----every time I look at the picture of my mother and I, I cry. Because gave me a lot of good memory.
When I was a child, my mother taught me many things and took care me a lot.
I will always remember my mother in China

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she always make出现在1、2行应该第三人称单数在make后加s成为makes,类似的还有第四行的she lives,倒数第三行的makes
倒数第二行的much thing改为lots of things，因为thing可数
第一行feel happy就可以
其他错误我也有点拿不准，就先挑这几个吧