作业帮求改英语自我介绍 急Good morning ,ladies and gentmen.My name is Civean.Xie .I'm from Shuguang senior high school.I'm an ordinary student who is interested in English.In order to be braver and improve my spoken English,I take part in the activ
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求改英语自我介绍 急Good morning ,ladies and gentmen.My name is Civean.Xie .I'm from Shuguang senior high school.I'm an ordinary student who is interested in English.In order to be braver and improve my spoken English,I take part in the activ
求改英语自我介绍 急
Good morning ,ladies and gentmen.My name is Civean.Xie .I'm from Shuguang senior high school.I'm an ordinary student who is interested in English.In order to be braver and improve my spoken English,I take part in the activity .Maybe I'm not the winner ,but I have already found what I want from the time I stand in front of you.Today I bring a poem for you ,it called THE FURTHEST DISTANCE IN THE WORLD.Then it's my show time.
求改英语自我介绍 急Good morning ,ladies and gentmen.My name is Civean.Xie .I'm from Shuguang senior high school.I'm an ordinary student who is interested in English.In order to be braver and improve my spoken English,I take part in the activ
Good morning ,ladies and gentmen.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for the show.（加个客套语,显得有礼貌些）My name is Civean.Xie .and i'm from Shuguang senior high school.Though (加个连词更有逻辑,表达虽然你很普通,但是也积极参加）I'm an ordinary student who just is interested in English,In order to be braver and braver and improve my spoken English,I signed up for(报名参加,比take part in要好些,更强调积极性主动性些,） the activity .The result of the activity doesn't counts(把你说或许你不能获奖给删除了,因为这会显得你没有足够信心,比赛切记不要说这个,改成了这句结果不重要,counts).what is important is that I enjoy this moment when I stand in front of you.(这句改的高级很多了,既有主语从句又有表语与状语从句）the following poem is for you.(下面这首诗献给你们,比你说给大家带来一首诗说得地道很多）it called THE FURTHEST DISTANCE IN THE WORLD.Then it's my show time.
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