改英语作文(IELTS)Child-hood DreamMost of Child-hood dreams are creative or crazy.I’d love to listen to everyone’s childhood dreams.Although lot of people never done their childhood dream,but chasing the dream is great propulsion to change th

改英语作文(IELTS)Child-hood DreamMost of Child-hood dreams are creative or crazy.I’d love to listen to everyone’s childhood dreams.Although lot of people never done their childhood dream,but chasing the dream is great propulsion to change th
改英语作文(IELTS)
Child-hood Dream
Most of Child-hood dreams are creative or crazy.I’d love to listen to everyone’s childhood dreams.Although lot of people never done their childhood dream,but chasing the dream is great propulsion to change their life,sometimes would be happen unexpected things.During my curiosity personality,I had heard a strong fireman who was wanted to be a Disneyland toy maker,and I would like to share my child-hood today.
My child-hood dream was created by my dad indirectly,and that is to build a school for some children whose would not pay their school fee in China.Certainly,my school also provides food,a place to live and high quality of education,meanwhile,it would be need a lot of money to build a school,but nothing could stop me from pursuing the goals.In the other hand,I unearth some way to run this school.For our student,I would require them to sign a contract,the terms of the agreement are:First,they need to contribute 5% of the salary for the school until they have helped three children like them in China.There are two advantages of this contract.It should be have a large income from them,thus,it would cover lot of expenditure.Second,the number of the beneficiary could have a rapidly increase.
Nevertheless,maybe I could not complete this dreams,I still would suggest my son to do it.I hope you would hear about The School of XXX in China.When you hear anything about this name of school,which means I have succeed.

改英语作文(IELTS)Child-hood DreamMost of Child-hood dreams are creative or crazy.I’d love to listen to everyone’s childhood dreams.Although lot of people never done their childhood dream,but chasing the dream is great propulsion to change th
Most of Child-hood dreams are creative or crazy.I’d love to listen to everyone’s childhood dreams.lots of people never done their childhood dreams,but chasing the dream is great propulsion to change their lives,sometimes,unexpected things would happen.During my curiosity personality,I heard a strong fireman who wanted to be a Disneyland toy maker,and I would like to share my child-hood today.
My child-hood dream was created by my dad indirectly,and that was to build a school for some children who could not pay their school fee in China.Certainly,my school also provides food,a place to live and education of high quality,it would need a lot of money to build a school,but nothing could stop me from pursuing the goals.On the other hand,I unearth some ways to run this school.For our students ,I would require them to sign a contract,the terms of the agreement are:Firstly,they needn’t to contribute 5% of the salary for the school until they have helped three children like them in China.There are two advantages of this contract.It would be a large income from them,thus,it would cover lots of expenditure.Secondly ,the number of the beneficiary could have a rapid increase.
Therefore ,maybe I can not complete this dream ,I would suggest my son to do it.I hope you would hear about The School of XXX in China.When you hear anything about this name of school,it means I have succeed.我能看到的,应该还有错啊

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