检查一篇英语文章我刚写的文章,有100悬赏分,还有追加的,所以请大家把所有的错误都找出来,或者帮我的文章做一下修改It says that Every heart has its own sorrow.for sure,when we was worn in the world ,so many f

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It says that Every heart has its own sorrow.for sure,when we was worn in the world ,so many frustrations and difficults had already got ready to test us out ,It is the unforeseen that always happens.traffic accident.Floodwater.Illness ,there are so many unforeseen things in our lives ,we always don’t know what will happen to us in the future ,even the next second..when we caught difficults wo yearn for others’ helps,others’ helps are so important to us that I can’t imagine life without them.
We also need others’ help in everyday life ,the other day ,I had a stomachache,I feel so suffering,my best friend give me a cup of hot water ,told me to have the medicine ,she also cleaned the classroom instead of me (that day ,I was on duty) I couldn’t be thankful enough to her for her help.
All of above tells us one truth——people need other’ helps ,do you know volunteers,they are one of this kind of people who always do things for others ,but never asks for any reward,They does their work zealously and earnestly,They devote their whole life to people who are in trouble..they are ordinary people,but Their spirit makes them a hero in everyone’s harts,it influences everyone ,and reminds me to help others If someone asks me a question -----who is the greatest person in the world ,I will answer him without a scruple----volunteers,of course!

检查一篇英语文章我刚写的文章,有100悬赏分,还有追加的,所以请大家把所有的错误都找出来,或者帮我的文章做一下修改It says that Every heart has its own sorrow.for sure,when we was worn in the world ,so many f
It is said that every heart has its own sorrow..yes,living in the world,we must experience lots of frustrations and difficulties,which are unforeseen,traffic accident,floodwater,illness,etc.we can’t predict that when they will happen...when we have difficulties,we can turn to others,others' help are so important to us that I can’t imagine how the life will be without it.
Help is needed in everyone’s daily life.One day,I had a stomachache,I felt terrible.my best friend looked after me carefully.No words can express my thankfulness to her for the help .He offered me a cup of hot water,and told me to have the medicine.In addition,she also cleaned the classroom instead of me (that day,I was on duty).
All of above tell us a truth——everyone needs help .Do you know volunteers,they are a group of people who always help others without expecting any rewards.They devote their whole life to people who need help.They are heroes who are ordinary people but have noble-minded spirits ,such as the volunteers of the 2008 Olympic Games.They give helps to the 2008 Olympic Games,but ask nothing they only want to make a contribution to China.they set examples for us to help others.If someone asks me this question -----who is the greatest person in the world ,I will replied him without hesitation ----volunteers!
My friend’s help makes me moved and let me get out of trouble,and I think your help will make more and more people feel warm,everyone needs help,why don’t us be a warmhearted person,Give a helping hand as a volunteers and make a contribution to others .let’s create a better and nicer tomorrow together.

错误太多了 文章太长了 另外文章太罗嗦了 没有耐性 不好意思

Volunteers make a harmonic society
Just as the saying goes: each heart has its own sorrow. As a matter of fact, we were born and we keep living in the world, so much frustration and difficulties...

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Volunteers make a harmonic society
Just as the saying goes: each heart has its own sorrow. As a matter of fact, we were born and we keep living in the world, so much frustration and difficulties have got ready to test us out. It is unforeseen that disasters always happen such as the traffic accident, the floodwater and the illness etc. There are so many unforeseen things in our lives, we fail to know what would happen to us in the future ,even in the next second. When we meet difficulties we yearn for others’ help, the help is so important to us that I can’t imagine what the life would be without it.
We need others’ help in everyday life. The other day , I had a stomachache, I felt so painful, my best friend gave me a cup of hot water, and told me to take the medicine. She also cleaned up the classroom instead of me (the day when I was on duty). I couldn’t show my gratitude in my words for her helping.
All of the above stories tells us one truth——people need other’ help. Do you know volunteers? They are a group of people who always do things for others , but never ask for any reward. They do their work zealously and earnestly. They devote their whole life to people who are in trouble. They are ordinary people, but their spirit makes them heroes in everyone’s hearts. The spirit influences everyone ,and reminds me to help others if someone asks me a question -----who is the greatest person in the world? I will tell him loudly without hesitation----It’s volunteers, of course!
文章的主题不错，也很有激情，我帮你加了个标题，你看如何？但语法的错误是在太多了，包括如何断句，标点符号，前后语法一致等等，但很有潜力，保证是原创作品！这不要紧，逐步完善！希望在此看到你的文章！

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It says that every heart has its own sorrow. For sure, when we (was worn in) were born into the world , so （many）much frustrations and (difficults) difficulties (had) were (already) (got) ready to tes...

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It says that every heart has its own sorrow. For sure, when we (was worn in) were born into the world , so （many）much frustrations and (difficults) difficulties (had) were (already) (got) ready to test us out. It is the unforeseen that always happens, traffic accidents, (Floodwater) floods, illnesses, there are so many unforeseen things in our lives; we always don’t know what will happen to us in the future, even the next second. When we (caught difficults) are in difficulties, we will yearn for others’ helps, others’ helps are so important to us that I can’t imagine life without them.
We also need others’ help in everyday life; the other day , I had a stomachache, I (feel) felt so (suffering) suffered , my best friend (give) gave me a cup of hot water ,told me to (have the) take medicine, she also cleaned the classroom (instead of) for me [that day ,I was on duty], I couldn’t be thankful enough (to her) for her help.
All (of) the above tells us one truth——people need (other’) others’ helps. Do you know volunteers? They are one of (this kind) these kinds of people who always do things for others, but never (asks) ask for any reward. They (does) do their work zealously and earnestly, they devote their whole (life) lives to people who are in trouble. They are ordinary people, but their (spirit makes) spirits make them (a hero) heroes in everyone’s (harts) hearts, (it influences) influence everyone, and (reminds) remind me to help others. If someone asks me a question: Who is the greatest person in the world? I will answer (him) without (a) scruple, volunteers, of course!
我没有修改您的措辞，因为Maxitang 已帮你了，我只针对语法、错字和标点符号。

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worn应为born,错挺多,很多地方时态也不对。