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以my hobby 为题写篇文章 写playing basketball 的写打篮球 开始时间 好处 和 做练习 什么的 60词左右
以my hobby 为题写篇文章 写playing basketball 的
写打篮球 开始时间 好处 和 做练习 什么的 60词左右
以my hobby 为题写篇文章 写playing basketball 的写打篮球 开始时间 好处 和 做练习 什么的 60词左右
My hobby is playing basketball.I have played basketball since I was in primary school.I play basketball every day after school with my friends.Playing basketball is good for my health.It's great fun,too.I have made many friends when I'm playing basketball.Now basketball is becoming more and more important in my life.（56字）
ps.邀影同学回答的那篇作文有很多语法错误..
1.favorite本身就有“最”的意思,前面不能加most
2.After that I had more and more interests in the basketball.一句中,basketball前面不应加the,这是初中学生常犯的错误.
3.personally是“就我个人而言”的意思,放在句中似乎意思有点奇怪.
4.continue this exercises中,exercise不应加s
5.I grew taller more and more fast and had a healthy body.这一句有几处错误.
首先,前面应为What really surprised me was that,不然就没有主语了,而且surprise是及物动词,不需要加to,surprise应该用过去式,因为后面有grew这些动词都是用过去式的,这是主从句时态一致的原则.
还有,more and more fast明显不对,应为faster and faster.
还有一些拼写错误就不写了..可能是打太快打错..
My Hobby
At present my most favorite hobby is playying basketball.I got to it about five years ago ,in those days my father often took me to the basketball court and taught me how to play baske...
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My Hobby
At present my most favorite hobby is playying basketball.I got to it about five years ago ,in those days my father often took me to the basketball court and taught me how to play basketball well.After that I had more and more interests in the basketball.Sometimes I immediately run to the basketball court personally after school. My father was so happy and encourageed me to continue this exercises.And really surprise to me was that I grew taller more and more fast and had a healthy body.
希望能帮到你,我以前读初中时,一般都会这样写.呵呵...
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