英语短文改错,十处错误,麻烦朋友们了,When people are asked about precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and I have something very preciously in my room.It is not a CD player or a cell phone.It is the v

英语短文改错,十处错误,麻烦朋友们了,When people are asked about precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and I have something very preciously in my room.It is not a CD player or a cell phone.It is the v
英语短文改错,十处错误,麻烦朋友们了,
When people are asked about precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and I have something very preciously in my room.It is not a CD player or a cell phone.It is the view outside my window.I am lucky live near a park.My window faces with the tops of the trees in the park.Below the trees I can see child on the playground,young couples walked quietly,mothers playing with children,and old people sitting on the benches.The all world seems to be before their eyes.My classmates like to surf the Internet or listen to music,but when I have a free time,I just sit in my room and enjoyed the most precious thing alone:the view.

英语短文改错,十处错误,麻烦朋友们了,When people are asked about precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and I have something very preciously in my room.It is not a CD player or a cell phone.It is the v
and改为but
preciously改为precious
第三行I am lucky 后加to
faces with 去掉with
tops改为top
child改为childern
walked改为walking
The all world 改为The whole world
a free time 去掉a
enjoyed改为enjoy

神马都是浮云。

When people are asked about precious things
应该是: When people are ask about THEIR precious things,
I am not very rich,and I have something very preciously in my room.
应该是: I am not very ri...

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When people are asked about precious things
应该是: When people are ask about THEIR precious things,
I am not very rich,and I have something very preciously in my room.
应该是: I am not very rich, BUT I have something very PRECIOUS in my room.
I am lucky live near a park.
应该是: I am lucky TO live near a park.
My window faces with the tops of the trees in the park
应该是: My window faces THE top of the trees in the park.
Below the trees I can see child on the playground
应该是: BEYOND the trees I can see children on the playground.
young couples walked quietly
应该是: young couples WALKING quietly
The all world seems to be before their eyes
应该是: The WHOLE world seems to be before their eyes
My classmates like to surf the Internet or listen to music
应该是: WHILE my classmates like to surf the internet or listen to music,
I just sit in my room and enjoyed the most precious thing alone:the view.
应该是: I just LIKE to sit in my room and ENJOY the most precious thing alone: the view.

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When people are asked about (the) precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and (改为but) I have something very preciously (precious) in my room.It is not a CD player or ...

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When people are asked about (the) precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and (改为but) I have something very preciously (precious) in my room.It is not a CD player or a cell phone.It is the view outside (of) my window.I am lucky (to) live near a park.My window faces with (删除with) the tops of the trees in the park.Below the trees I can see child (改为children) on the playground,young couples walked (walking) quietly,mothers playing with children,and old people sitting on the benches.The all (改为whole) world seems to be before their (改为my) eyes.My classmates like to surf the Internet or listen to music,but when I have a free time,I just sit in my room and enjoyed the most precious thing alone:the view.
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