Today is my lovers birthday!I hope he's happy everday and more than love me before!这句话有严重的语病吧请帮我改下

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Today is my lovers birthday!I hope he's happy everday and more than love me before!这句话有严重的语病吧请帮我改下
Today is my lovers birthday!I hope he's happy everday and more than love me before!
这句话有严重的语病吧
请帮我改下

Today is my lovers birthday!I hope he's happy everday and more than love me before!这句话有严重的语病吧请帮我改下
Today is my lover's birthday!I hope he'll be happy everyday and love me more than before.
因为是所有格,所以主语后面要加's,后面则严重错误.
句子 意思就是今天是我爱人的生日,我希望他每天都快乐并且比以前更爱我.

Today is my lover's birthday. I wish him happy every day and hope he will love me more than before.

Today is my lover's birthday!I hope he'll happy everyday and give more love to me than before!

Today is my lover's birthday(my loved one's birthday, my sweetheart's birthday)! I wish him happiness everyday and he will love me more and more.
I wish him happiness and he will love me more than yesterday and less than tomorrow.

Today is my beloved's birthday! I hope he's happy everyday and that he will love me more than before.