这段英语短文有十处错误,分别在哪里?3Q~~~How time flies! two years passed since Mrs.Brown came to our school to teach our English in Sepetember 2008. Now she has completed her work successfully and will leave for England tomorrow. Mrs.B

这段英语短文有十处错误,分别在哪里?3Q~~~How time flies! two years passed since Mrs.Brown came to our school to teach our English in Sepetember 2008. Now she has completed her work successfully and will leave for England tomorrow. Mrs.B
这段英语短文有十处错误,分别在哪里?3Q~~~
How time flies! two years passed since Mrs.Brown came to our school to teach our English in Sepetember 2008. Now she has completed her work successfully and will leave for England tomorrow. Mrs.Brown is very much strict with us student. She is very patient and never feel tired of helping us with our studies. Her teaching is such lively and ingteresting that we can easily remember that she teaches us. In fact,we all likely to attend her lectures.Now I will,representing all the student, express our thanks to her for excellent. We wish her a pleasant journey and good healthy.

这段英语短文有十处错误,分别在哪里?3Q~~~How time flies! two years passed since Mrs.Brown came to our school to teach our English in Sepetember 2008. Now she has completed her work successfully and will leave for England tomorrow. Mrs.B
Mrs.Brown is very much strict with us student. 改为Mrs.Brown is very much strict with us students.
we all likely to attend her lectures`````````we all like to attend her lectures
Her teaching is such lively```````` Her teaching is so lovely`
and ingteresting that we can easily remember``````` and interesting that we can easily remember
麻烦采纳,打字好痛苦啊

good healthy->good health
all the student->all the students

(1)two years (have) passed,
(2)to teach (us) English,
(3)(on) September 2008,
(4)with us (students),
(5)her teaching is (so) lively,
(6)easily remember (what) she teaches us.
(7)we all (like) to attend,
(8)all the (students),
(9)excellence,
(10)health.

1. two years {} passed since...
这里应该用现在完成时，即two years has passed since...
2. to teach {our} English
our改为us
3. 4.Mrs.Brown is very {much} strict with us {student}.
去掉much, student加...

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1. two years {} passed since...
这里应该用现在完成时，即two years has passed since...
2. to teach {our} English
our改为us
3. 4.Mrs.Brown is very {much} strict with us {student}.
去掉much, student加s
5. never {feel} tired of helping us with our studies.
主语是第三人称单数，动词应该加s
6.7. Her teaching is {such} lively and [ingteresting] that we can easily remember {that} she teaches us.
such改为so, that 改为what, interesting拼写错误，不知道是题目中本来就这样还是楼主手误。
8. representing all the {student},
student需要加s
9. express our thanks to her {for excellent}.
建议改为for her excellent job.
10. and good {healthy}
改为 health
另：we all {likely} to attend her lectures
likely应改为like（刚才没看到，看了20080914324的答案才注意到）
再： in Sepetember 2008是正确说法，月份应该用in，具体到几月几号或星期几才用on。

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