告诉我这篇英语短文有什么错误?Sports is very important.Sports is very important to young people.It is good to play sports three or four times a week.But some people are busy with their work,they don’t have time playing sports.So they o

告诉我这篇英语短文有什么错误?Sports is very important.Sports is very important to young people.It is good to play sports three or four times a week.But some people are busy with their work,they don’t have time playing sports.So they o
告诉我这篇英语短文有什么错误?
Sports is very important.
Sports is very important to young people.It is good to play sports three or four times a week.But some people are busy with their work,they don’t have time playing sports.So they often feel tired and weak.So they get ill easily.For example,someone who doesn’t like sports catches a cold easily.So you are never too busy to play sports.
Sports are very important to us.But playing too much sports is not good,because you will feel exhausted.When you are tired,you should stop playing sports and drink some water.It’s said taking about thirty minutes’ sports every day is enough.And you should get some rest after doing sports.At the same time,you should also have a balanced diet and enough sleep.
So you see “life is movement”
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告诉我这篇英语短文有什么错误?Sports is very important.Sports is very important to young people.It is good to play sports three or four times a week.But some people are busy with their work,they don’t have time playing sports.So they o
It’s said （要+that） taking about thirty minutes’ sports every day is enough.
l am sure that “life is movement” !
此文语法基本没错,不过有点罗嗦的是so太多了,相同的单词（enough等等）也太多了,应付初中还行
第二段开头重复了
Although doing sports is a part of the life,doing too much sports is also bad for our health.

don’t have time playing 改成to play
It’s said taking about 改成to take about,It's said todo 表示“据说....”

我觉得语法太单一。对我们很重要，不一定经用important。可以说It is essential for us to do some proper sports. 最后可以说：In a word ,your life will be full of colour because of sports. 你可以中间插一些表达运动对人来说有啥好处。

整体来说 问题不大，就是一些小细节修改一下，建议逻辑关系方面多注意，这样文章结构紧密而且连贯，读起来就有赏心悦目的感觉。Sports are (sports 是复数，动词要用复数形式) very important to young people. It is good to play sports three or four times a week. But some people are s...

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整体来说 问题不大，就是一些小细节修改一下，建议逻辑关系方面多注意，这样文章结构紧密而且连贯，读起来就有赏心悦目的感觉。Sports are (sports 是复数，动词要用复数形式) very important to young people. It is good to play sports three or four times a week. But some people are so busy with their work that they do not have time playing sports. So they often feel tired and weak. So they feel ill (ill 是形容词，可以说get illness 或者是fell ill) easily. For example, someone who doesn't like sports catches cold easily. So you are never too busy to play sports.(感觉这句话有点怪怪的，你应该是想表达锻炼的必要性以及紧迫性建议改为， it is never too late to take exercise.)
和第一段尽量有一个衔接，而且在句首的话结构会更紧密一点，如果你坚持用but的话，前后两句也可以变为一句，不赞成有太多散句。建议用一个although. Although sports are very important to us, playing too much sports is not good. 可能你会觉得but 放后面的话加上原因才是一整句，但是原因的话才是你像说的重点，单独成句的话，才有强调的作用。 Because you will feel exhausted. When you are tired, you should stop playing sports and drink some water. It is said that taking about 30 minutes' sports every day is enough.( 这句有点中式英语建议改为，it is said that it is enough spending 30 minutes in sports.) And you should get some rest after doing sports. At the same time, you should also have a balanced diet and enough sleep. As a saying goes, "life is movement."

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