懂英文的人来帮我修改一下我的英文求职信.Dear Sir/Madam,APPLICATION FOR ACCOUNT ASSISTANT POSITIONI would like to express my interest in a position asAccounting Assistant or Bookkeeper for your company.I have a LCCI diploma in accoun

懂英文的人来帮我修改一下我的英文求职信.Dear Sir/Madam,APPLICATION FOR ACCOUNT ASSISTANT POSITIONI would like to express my interest in a position asAccounting Assistant or Bookkeeper for your company.I have a LCCI diploma in accoun
懂英文的人来帮我修改一下我的英文求职信.
Dear Sir/Madam,
APPLICATION FOR ACCOUNT ASSISTANT POSITION
I would like to express my interest in a position asAccounting Assistant or Bookkeeper for your company.
I have a LCCI diploma in accounting so I am adept atworking as an Accounting Assistant or Bookkeeper.
I have attached my resume with the cover letter so thatyou can go through my credentials for yourself.You can contact me on xxxxxxxxxxxxxx for further questions.Thank you so much for your consideration and time.
Sincerely,
xxxxxxxxxxxx
Enclosure:resume.
我总觉得读起来怪怪的,那家公司没有刊登广告要聘请员工,只是我想自己投求职信,这个第一段开头要怎么写.还有我是刚毕业的,没有工作经验,希望有人可以帮我修改我的求职信,不必太复杂,简短就好,

懂英文的人来帮我修改一下我的英文求职信.Dear Sir/Madam,APPLICATION FOR ACCOUNT ASSISTANT POSITIONI would like to express my interest in a position asAccounting Assistant or Bookkeeper for your company.I have a LCCI diploma in accoun
你这是email格式吧?
ACCOUNT ASSISTANT POSITION INTERESTED LCCI diploma （主题栏要有关键信息才会引起HR的注意）
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is xxx, I am writing to express my interest in a position of Accounting Assistant or Bookkeeper in your company. （第一段自报家门和事由）

I have a LCCI diploma in accounting so I am looking forward to working as an Accounting Assistant or Bookkeeper. I learnt your company from xxxxxx, I admire your company's xxxxxx. Therefore I believe working with you will xxxxxx. （第二段先介绍自己的专业情况,一定要简单扼要,把简历中最精华的用最简短的语言放上,因为人家没时间看.然后说怎么知道他们公司的,为什么要投这个公司,记住专业情况和公司情况一定要结合起来,要不别人怎么会要你.不用主动说没有工作经验,一说人家就不费事去打开简历了）

You can find more information about me and my credential in the attached resume. I am looking forward to hearing from you concerning my application. You can contact me on xxxxxxxxxxxxxx. Thank you so much for your consideration and time. （最后一段要恳切些,得加一句很渴望与对方联系上的话,少用带祈使意味的词语.）

Sincerely,
xxxxxxxxxxxx
Enclosure: resume.
给你贴一个我之前用过的cover letter,有一些词组我觉得还是不错的：
XXX Position Interested - 4 yrs exp in xxx （标题栏就写关键信息）
Dear Mr. xxx

My name is xxx. I am a （自我介绍）. I am writing you to express my interest in your firm’s (position). I am confident that my ability and experience in xxx would be an asset to your practice and would greatly appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss possible employment opportunities.

In terms of immediate professional background, I possess a bachelor from xxx, as well as a master from xxx. In addition, I am fluent in Mandarin, Cantonese, and English. I believe my language skills, in particular, would be ideal for facilitating work with Chinese-speaking clients.

I am particularly proud of my work experience to date. I have worked on a wide array of complex issues in the areas of xxx. This includes xxx (简要列举了简历中的闪光点)

Attached please find my resume for your review. Thank you very much for your kind attention. I look forward to hearing from you. You can contact me by email at xxxxxx or by phone at xxxxxx.
Best wishes
Sincerely yours
xxx