谁能帮我改一下英语作文这里是一篇英语作文,麻烦帮我更正一下文法错误 和用词错误I has always been keen on listening to Classic Music.My favourite singer is Adrea Bocelli which is an italian blind singer.His special ki

谁能帮我改一下英语作文这里是一篇英语作文,麻烦帮我更正一下文法错误 和用词错误I has always been keen on listening to Classic Music.My favourite singer is Adrea Bocelli which is an italian blind singer.His special ki
谁能帮我改一下英语作文
这里是一篇英语作文,麻烦帮我更正一下文法错误 和用词错误
I has always been keen on listening to Classic Music.My favourite singer is Adrea Bocelli which is an italian blind singer.His special kind of tenor voice had always been a infatuation to me.
Bocelli was born in Lajatico,Italy in 1958.At the age of six,he started to play musics such as piano,flute ,saxophone,trumpet and guitar.When he was 12,he completely lost his sight after an acciedent of a soccer game.Yet it didint discourage him a bit,because of the inspiring words that come out of his father's mouth"Hey little boy,dont be sad!This world belongs to everyone,instead of not seeing the world in front of you,what you can do is,let this world shine on you!"
He went on to study and graduated from the University of Pisa.In 1994,his first album came out called“Il calmo della sera",which mean the peace evening sea in english,entered the Italian Top Ten.My favourite song from that album are "Il mare calmo della sera" and "sogno".
He is great!Every time I listen to his voice,it just gives me a sense of peacefullness.I can feel the joy and happiness throughout the song.His attitude toward life is what I like the best --- optimistic.I'm sure that his song will stay with me for my entire life.
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还有这是我自己写的 哪里可以提高请尽管点出来

谁能帮我改一下英语作文这里是一篇英语作文,麻烦帮我更正一下文法错误 和用词错误I has always been keen on listening to Classic Music.My favourite singer is Adrea Bocelli which is an italian blind singer.His special ki
I HAVE always been keen on listening to Classic Music.My favourite singer is Adrea Bocelli WHO is an italian blind singer.His special kind of tenor voice HAS always been a infatuation to me.
Bocelli was born in Lajatico,Italy in 1958.At the age of six,he started to play MUSIC INSTRUMENTS such as piano,flute ,saxophone,trumpet and guitar.When he was 12,he completely lost his sight after an acciedent of a soccer game.Yet it didint discourage him a bit,because of the inspiring words that CAME out of his father's mouth"Hey little boy,dont be sad!This world belongs to everyone,instead of not seeing the world in front of you,what you can do is,let this world shine on you!"
He went on to study and graduated from the University of Pisa.In 1994,his first album came out called“Il calmo della sera",which MEANS the peace evening sea in English,ENTERING the Italian Top Ten.My favourite SONGS from that album are "Il mare calmo della sera" and "sogno".
He is great!Every time I listen to his voice,it just gives me a sense of peacefullness.I can feel the joy and happiness throughout the song.His attitude toward life is what I like best --- optimistic.I'm sure that his SONGS will stay with me for my entire life.