帮忙修改语法拼写错误请不要批评文章不好..只是作业 修改语法和拼写错误就可以了 谢谢There is a world call Ice-sweet, and connect the world we live by tunnel. But people never found that before, until a brothers los

帮忙修改语法拼写错误请不要批评文章不好..只是作业 修改语法和拼写错误就可以了 谢谢There is a world call Ice-sweet, and connect the world we live by tunnel. But people never found that before, until a brothers los
帮忙修改语法拼写错误
请不要批评文章不好..只是作业 修改语法和拼写错误就可以了 谢谢
There is a world call Ice-sweet, and connect the world we live by tunnel. But people never found that before, until a brothers lost in the forest and they went into the tunnel.
One day morning, Jerney.Z and Vibram. Z were hunting inside the forest, but toward evening, they found that they lost and cannot find the way to go out from the forest. Later they followed the brook and found a tunnel beside a lot of trees, they went inside and felt there was cooler and dark inside, but they didn't care that much and just kept walking. After ten minutes, the bright light shine on them and they were standing on the soft white stuff just like cloud. Jerney got some and smell it, but he could smell anything, so he tasted it, unbelievable, it tasted like marshmallow! And there was snowing, but the snow would touch the "ground", it disappeared on the height of their shoulder, Vibram was so curious, so he tasted the snow, it tasted like sprit!
At that time, a fairy flies to them and tells them her name is Rosy, this is a world called ice-sweet, everything is made by sweet snakes and here is always snowing then everything will not melt. And she has magic so she could do a lot of things. The fairy was wearing pink dress, she is pretty. Rosy put white and silver long jacket on Jerney, and put white and light blue long jacket on vibram. And Vibram had a wing! Rosy said:"Try your power." And then Jerney had a sward that can change the length, and he could shut water from his hands. Vibram also had a sward and can shut out ice from it, that was a sharp sward can cut anything. And Rosy told them, there is some people is coming to destroy their world soon, so they have to be ready to fight with them.
Jerney and Vibram looked at each other, and said :"This is so excited, we will win!" And then, Jerney and Vibram began to practice using the sward, and they found that they have special power: Jerney could fly with his wings, and he had a strong hand, and Vibram could also fly, and he could be invisible. They also met X, he is a duck, but he is huge, ha can talk, and he can change the size of his body. They began to plan how to win the war together.
About two weeks later, that is a quiet night, suddenly, everybody wakes up because of a strong shaking. Jerney and Vibram rushed out the cake house that they live with sward in their hand, they saw X and Rosy are also there, obviously, everybody is ready.

帮忙修改语法拼写错误请不要批评文章不好..只是作业 修改语法和拼写错误就可以了 谢谢There is a world call Ice-sweet, and connect the world we live by tunnel. But people never found that before, until a brothers los
,I think not only need teach but also talents want to be a good sports person or musician .那位好心人修改一下英语作文,写的不错啊

第2行：“a brothers”是错误的 brothers 是复数 应该是 “a brother”。 将 they 改成 he
第4行：they found out that they are lost 才是正确的
倒数第5行：你将 "he" 拼成 “ha”
除了这些其他都没有什么大问题。

It would take eons.