托福作文求评分!有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或他人的帮助解决Important problems ,因此人们不需要政府的帮助.Nowadays,many people have their own circle in which they think they can always find help,so they don't need the

托福作文求评分!有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或他人的帮助解决Important problems ,因此人们不需要政府的帮助.Nowadays,many people have their own circle in which they think they can always find help,so they don't need the
托福作文求评分!
有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或他人的帮助解决Important problems ,因此人们不需要政府的帮助.
Nowadays,many people have their own circle in which they think they can always find help,so they don't need the government's help at all.However,given the value of government's help,we notice a picture of difference.Most of the time,people need to resort to their government because the government does can provide some advantages for solving their important problems.
First of all,the government can bring a higher feasibility of settling a matter.In other words,because the government has a broader connection with others and a stronger power,it is possible for the government to figure out some really tough problems that a person cannot settle by his limited ability.For example,the founder of one local company -the Kang's once encountered an annoying problem solved by the local government at last.At that time,there was still a great gap between his goal and the reality,for he was lack of capital in a fair amount.After resorting to his friends and all the people he knew,he had only one hope left-asking the government for help.Immediately,the government published his needs to other provinces and acted as a medium.Finally some investments were brought in and the Kang's was born.Now,the Kang's is one of the most influential companies in China,penetrating its products throughout the market.However,if the founder just stopped planning because of the dilemma he met,there would never be such a success.
Secondly,some tough problems can only be solved by the government; some problems are too hard to settle by your own struggle.For example,if you live by a river,and the river is dirty and stinking all the day,you will go to ask the government for help.Because you know by your and your family members’ endeavor,the big problem cannot be settled.On the other hand,looking the government for help is the only choice left for you.Only the government can stop companies polluting the water.Indeed,you have to resort to government.
Admittedly,I concede that not all the problems can be solved by the government,such as some personal problems.If your friend betrays you or if you are hurt by your lover,and these problems are seem important to you,but you will not inform the government.Moreover,the government will probably not help you.In your opinion,asking your family members is the most reliable way,because they know your conditions well,so they can propose the appropriate suggestions for you.However,besides these troubles,you still need government's help in your life.
To sum up,it is rather superficial to simply say that we do not need government at all.

托福作文求评分!有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或他人的帮助解决Important problems ,因此人们不需要政府的帮助.Nowadays,many people have their own circle in which they think they can always find help,so they don't need the
评分比较长,你给高分我多说点,你等下好吧,不能我写着你采纳了

不知道你是几年级，我觉得文章不错，顺序很明了！肯定不低于及格分

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