作业帮帮我修改一篇高中英语日志I come across with the god and I ask:It has been two years!Which time i can get my freedom and run away from your evil hands!The god:You are just my games,you can't get your freedom,forever!So you can kill me and o
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帮我修改一篇高中英语日志I come across with the god and I ask:It has been two years!Which time i can get my freedom and run away from your evil hands!The god:You are just my games,you can't get your freedom,forever!So you can kill me and o
帮我修改一篇高中英语日志
I come across with the god and I ask:
It has been two years!Which time i can get my freedom and run away
from your evil hands!
The god:You are just my games,you can't get your freedom,forever!
So you can kill me and over the game,or you will be punished.
No,I'm the god,no one can punish me,except me!
He is the god,I'm just the ordinary people,just the game for him!
It has been two years!Which day I can live like a healthy people and
do myself!
希望帮我改正一下上面的语法错误，顺便把一些句子弄得漂亮，
帮我修改一篇高中英语日志I come across with the god and I ask:It has been two years!Which time i can get my freedom and run away from your evil hands!The god:You are just my games,you can't get your freedom,forever!So you can kill me and o
I come across with the（去掉the） god and I(重复主语,I可以不要) ask:
It has been two years!Which time（which time 改成when） i can (I can 改成 can I )get my freedom(get my freedom有点像中式英语,改成be free) and run away
from your evil hands!
The god(God,不要the):You are just my games(这句不知道你要表达什么?),you can't get your freedom,forever!（这句可以改成:you can't get out of my control,forever!）
So(这不是顺接关系,so改成otherwise) you can kill me and over the game,or（if you can't） you will be punished.
No,I'm the god,no one can punish me,（不要逗号）except me（me改成myself）!
He is the（不要the） god,I'm just the ordinary people(ordinary people改成average person),just the game for him(这句不知道你要说什么!)!
It has been two years!Which day（When） I can (can I ) live like( live like中式英语,be) a healthy people(people是复数名词,你只能是person,不能是人民!) and do(be) myself!