朋友的英语日记求帮修改My child will be born in two months' time,I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day.It is not easy to creat a good name for baby,especially in our country.I have t

朋友的英语日记求帮修改My child will be born in two months' time,I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day.It is not easy to creat a good name for baby,especially in our country.I have t
朋友的英语日记求帮修改
My child will be born in two months' time,I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day.It is not easy to creat a good name for baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it souds good,maybe the most important thing about the name is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been borned yet!

朋友的英语日记求帮修改My child will be born in two months' time,I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day.It is not easy to creat a good name for baby,especially in our country.I have t
My child will be born in two months' time（去掉‘time）,I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day（days）.It is not easy to creat（create,但我觉得用make就可以了） a good name for（加上a） baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it souds(sounds) good,maybe the most important thing （去掉thing）about the name is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been borned (born)yet!
所以改后应该是（注意标点符合）
My child will be born in two months.I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these days.It is not easy to make a good name for a baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it sounds good.Maybe the most important is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been born yet!

My child will be born in the next two months,I am perparing to give the baby a good name,but I am busy these day.It is not easy to get a good name for a baby,especially in our country.I have to thi...

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My child will be born in the next two months,I am perparing to give the baby a good name,but I am busy these day.It is not easy to get a good name for a baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it souds good,maybe the most important thing about the name is if the name is lucky.I also shold think of when the baby will be born although there is still about two months yet!
感觉这样要合适点

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My child will be born in two months.I have been thinking about what name should I giving for the baby,but I always busy these days.It is not easy to give a good name for a baby,especially in our count...

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My child will be born in two months.I have been thinking about what name should I giving for the baby,but I always busy these days.It is not easy to give a good name for a baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as the meaning of the name.If it souds good,maybe the most important thing is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been borned yet!

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没有大问题，很好啊
只是一般说取名字都说name the baby就好了，没有说creating a good name ，可是可以这么说，但不地道。