请帮忙改篇英语作文My FamilyHi!My name is Chen Yuetong.My favourite colour is yellow and pink.My favourite fruit is oranges.I like to play in the computer.We like ice cream and apples.Would you like some?My mother is Liu Jing.She likes milk f

请帮忙改篇英语作文My FamilyHi!My name is Chen Yuetong.My favourite colour is yellow and pink.My favourite fruit is oranges.I like to play in the computer.We like ice cream and apples.Would you like some?My mother is Liu Jing.She likes milk f
请帮忙改篇英语作文
My Family
Hi!My name is Chen Yuetong.My favourite colour is yellow and pink.My favourite fruit is oranges.I like to play in the computer.
We like ice cream and apples.Would you like some?
My mother is Liu Jing.She likes milk for breakfast,rice for lunch,soup for supper.Her favourite vegetable is tomatoes.She likes to dance.
My father is Chen Jian.He likes to read books.He likes to wear shorts.He likes to play ping-pong.His favourite colour is black and blue.
We all like to sing songs and play on the computer.
We are a happy family.

请帮忙改篇英语作文My FamilyHi!My name is Chen Yuetong.My favourite colour is yellow and pink.My favourite fruit is oranges.I like to play in the computer.We like ice cream and apples.Would you like some?My mother is Liu Jing.She likes milk f
My favourite colour are yellow and pink
is orange.
i like playing computer
is tomato
she likes dancing
he likes reading books
he likes wearing shorts
he likes playing ping-pong
His favourite colour are black and blue
we like singing songs and playing computer
like doing是喜欢做
like to do 表示的是偶尔一次的动作

are yellow and pink
is orange
I like to play with the computer
rice for lunch and soup for supper
is tomato
wear shirts
are black and blue
We all like to sing songs and ...

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are yellow and pink
is orange
I like to play with the computer
rice for lunch and soup for supper
is tomato
wear shirts
are black and blue
We all like to sing songs and play with the computer
like的用法是like doing是喜欢做，表示经常性的，
like to do 表示的是偶尔一两次的动作 ，语法上不存在错误。

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有些流水帐的感觉，这是修改的原文的语法，另外我改
了一个更好的，有的换掉了。
Hi! My name is Chen Yuetong. My
favourite colours are yellow and pink.
My favourite fruit is orange. I like to
play on the computer.
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有些流水帐的感觉，这是修改的原文的语法，另外我改
了一个更好的，有的换掉了。
Hi! My name is Chen Yuetong. My
favourite colours are yellow and pink.
My favourite fruit is orange. I like to
play on the computer.
We like ice cream and apples. Would you
like some?
My mother is Liu Jing. She likes milk
for breakfast, rice for lunch, soup for
supper. Her favourite food is tomato.
She likes dancing.
My father is Chen Jian. He likes
reading books. He likes to wear shorts.
He likes to play ping-pong. His
favourite colours are black and blue.
We all like to sing songs and play on
the computer.
We are a happy family.
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Hi! My name is Chen Yuetong. Myfavourite colours are yellow and pink. And I like eating orange.In my free time I often play on the computer.
(We like ice cream and apples. Would you like some? )在作文中很少出现此类问句，不知道你想表达什么
My mother is Liu Jing. （She likes milk for breakfast, rice for lunch, soup for supper）这句话很好.But tomato is her favourite. (转化下语序，是不是看起来更好了呢)She danced pretty well.
My father is Chen Jian. He likes roaming in books. In summer he wears shorts for cool. He likes to play ping-pong. His favourite colours are black and blue. All of us like to sing songs and play on the computer. We lead a happy life.

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