雅思口语part2Right then,I'd like to get carcking by pointing on the matter of who she is,and I think I would have to choose my mother for the reason that she not only has a sense of humor,but also is able to cook delicious food. Now with regard

雅思口语part2Right then,I'd like to get carcking by pointing on the matter of who she is,and I think I would have to choose my mother for the reason that she not only has a sense of humor,but also is able to cook delicious food. Now with regard
雅思口语part2
Right then,I'd like to get carcking by pointing on the matter of who she is,and I think I would have to choose my mother for the reason that she not only has a sense of humor,but also is able to cook delicious food.
Now with regard to the next question of what personality she has,and the thing that needs to be highlighted here is that she is warm-hearted woman as well as being ready to help others,especially to animals.
Moving onto the business of what we do together,I suppose I should underline the fact that it would probably be quite common in most families,then again we often watch different kinds of films together,although it might be tough to watch the one I am not intersted in,which my mother likes.
As a final point,if time permits,I'd like to bring in the point of why I like spending most time with her,and as I've already mentioned that she is good at cooking,so I can learn how to cook from my mother.In addition,I guess that through our communication,we won't have generation gap between us forever.(发音还好 语音语调不怎么样 说的流利的话 我能拿几分?详细的建议和错误纠正 好的话有加分) 还有 说一个擅长烧饭的人 我不一直说她烧饭好...大部分说说她性格 爱好 小部分说烧菜可以吗?

雅思口语part2Right then,I'd like to get carcking by pointing on the matter of who she is,and I think I would have to choose my mother for the reason that she not only has a sense of humor,but also is able to cook delicious food. Now with regard
我高三在读,高二时考了两次雅思,第一次考了6.5（口语7）,第二次7.0（口语6.5）,口语不算高,所以说的不一定对……你权当参考啦.
恩,你第一段说到了not only...but also,也就是说你后面应该稍微提一下她的humor,但重点真的应该放在how she could cook delicious food.而且这也是你的话题,你应该重点说这个的（最好是两段的长度）.
第二段是过渡段,你说“she is warm-hearted,ready to help”还有“especially to animals”,但这些你都是泛泛而谈,后面完全没提到.我感觉最起码应该把那个especially发展一下.这段,和cooking无关.
第三段你有些跑题,而且基本没提到话题要你说的重点——cook.我觉得可能挺危险……不过如果你的话题卡上面有这一条,你说说也行.但我觉得这个非重点你说的有些过多了.
最后一段,这个"if time permits"实在是,咳,有些怪怪的.一般交流时候不会这么说……而且在说完时应该点一下题.比如你可以说,all in all,she is very amiable and kind,she always smiles to me when placing tasty food on the table which gives me deep impression.I hope that she could teach me more about her fantastic cooking skill and let me cook a good meal for her someday.
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恩,我感觉我说的内容特别口语化,没有你这么多复杂的段首句型.不过我上课时听老师说过考官对大学生句型语法用词的要求很高,所以如果你是大学生,那这些应该不错.
主要问题就像你担心的,有些偏题.不过如果都是按照话题卡上的三个小提示说的话那也不会差太多.口语很主观很主观,希望你的分达到你的要求~
（为9.12的托福攒人品ING~）
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啊,你和我一样大~
恩,如果话题是“想要花时间一起度过的家庭成员”,那你的这篇挺不错~
刚就想说是不是模版……没敢说（笑）.
我只记得我考的两次都是不停地说,7分那次我被考官打断了十来次（没办法我话多- -）……希望你考的高高的~