改改这篇文章I am a Harry Potter fans,my idol is JK Rowling,Rowling wrote the "Harry Potter."Harry's story began in the summer of 1990,Rowling sitting train from Manchester to London.When she saw a thin,wearing small glasses of black hair Wizard

改改这篇文章I am a Harry Potter fans,my idol is JK Rowling,Rowling wrote the "Harry Potter."Harry's story began in the summer of 1990,Rowling sitting train from Manchester to London.When she saw a thin,wearing small glasses of black hair Wizard
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I am a Harry Potter fans,my idol is JK Rowling,Rowling wrote the "Harry Potter."
Harry's story began in the summer of 1990,Rowling sitting train from Manchester to London.When she saw a thin,wearing small glasses of black hair Wizards have been in car windows in front of her smile.In this way Rowling this little boy was deeply attracted.Thus,Harry Potter was born - a 10-year-old boy,small size,black Luanpeng Peng's hair,bright green eyes,wearing round glasses,his forehead with a slender,lightning-shaped scar…… Harry -- Porter became popular around the world lovely characters.As a single mother,has just begun when the creative Harry Series.Rowling's life extremely difficult.Her first book,"Harry - Potter and the Philosopher's Stone" wrote a total of around five years,Rowling's house because of their small cold,often in a cafe near the home,According to Rowling said she likes the atmosphere in cafes.She will be on the table baby daughter on board,in her daughter's loud voice in writing the Harry - Porter wrote the story in a small paper on.Upon completion of the story,Rowling repeatedly sent the manuscript have been rejected.However,her efforts finally paid off.In a small printers Bloomsbury took power after the printing,it became the focus of attention of a publication,praised Ruchao,including the British National Book Award for children's fiction,books and Sima Di Gold Medal Award,her life and earth-shaking changes ,She has become Britain's third richest woman.
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改改这篇文章I am a Harry Potter fans,my idol is JK Rowling,Rowling wrote the "Harry Potter."Harry's story began in the summer of 1990,Rowling sitting train from Manchester to London.When she saw a thin,wearing small glasses of black hair Wizard
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I am a Harry Potter fan, my idol is JK Rowling, Rowling is the author of "Harry Potter."
Harry's story began in the summer of 1990, while Rowling was sitting on the train from Manchester to London. When in front of her she saw a smiling, thin, black-haired boy wearing small glasses mirrored in the coach window. Rowling felt instant attraction for the boy. IThis is how Harry Potter was born - a small 10-year-old boy, with black hair and bright green eyes, wearing round glasses, a light scar on his forehead…… Harry -- Porter soon became a world wide fad. .As a single mother, she has just begun creating the Harry Series. Rowling's life was extremely difficult. She spent five years writing her first book, "Harry - Potter and the Philosopher's Stone" . Because Rowling's house was always cold she used to sit in a cafe nearby .Rowling said she likes the atmosphere in cafes. With her baby daughter by her sided, she wrote Harry - Porter stories on a small piece of paper. Having finished the story she sent the manuscripts several in succession and all have been rejected.. However, her efforts finally paid off. Bloomsbury, a small prining house finally accepted her work. It soon became the main focus in the publishing circles, and was praised including the British National Book Award for children's fiction. It won the Gold Medal Award, and Rowling's life changed completely. She is now Britain's third richest woman.
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