写了一篇英语演讲稿子,限时60秒,所以可能还要再加一两句话,要是好的话还可以追加分.I am an ordinary girl,but also not a common girl.Although my grade is not good,but my interest in English can't decrease just because it

写了一篇英语演讲稿子,限时60秒,所以可能还要再加一两句话,要是好的话还可以追加分.I am an ordinary girl,but also not a common girl.Although my grade is not good,but my interest in English can't decrease just because it
写了一篇英语演讲稿子,限时60秒,所以可能还要再加一两句话,要是好的话还可以追加分.
I am an ordinary girl,but also not a common girl.Although my grade is not good,but my interest in English can't decrease just because it.In order to improve my spoken language,I asked my teacher,my mates and my parents.When I almost lost my heart,my mother encouraged me,she told me that participation is the most important thing,so I don't afraid anything,and try my best to practising.I feel honored to take part in the competition,and I believe that I am one of the best players,and nothing can change up my mind to win the match.Give me five!

写了一篇英语演讲稿子,限时60秒,所以可能还要再加一两句话,要是好的话还可以追加分.I am an ordinary girl,but also not a common girl.Although my grade is not good,but my interest in English can't decrease just because it
先改语法错误,然后减去部分繁杂的词,供参考.
I am a girl,one ordinary and also not.My grade is not impressing though,my interest in English never decreases just because I like it.In order to improve my spoken English,I talk with my teacher,my mates and my parents.When I almost lose faith,my mother encourages me to go on.She tells me that participation is the most important thing,so I'm not afraid any more,and try my best to practise.I feel glad to take part in the competition,and I believe that I am among the best.Nothing can change my mind to win the match.Give me five!
演讲的话在必要地方要把长句断成短句来增强语气和气势；用词也要再肯定点.另外就是,你这篇够讲1分钟吗?

I am a plain girl,but not submitted to be plain. Although my grade is not good enough, my interest in English never decreases. In order to improve my spoken English, I consulted my teachers, classmate...

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I am a plain girl,but not submitted to be plain. Although my grade is not good enough, my interest in English never decreases. In order to improve my spoken English, I consulted my teachers, classmates and parents. When I almost wanted to give up, they encouraged me, telling me that participation is the most significant. Thus I became brave enough to face any difficulty gradually, and tried my best to practice speaking. Eventually, I came here, willing to show the best of myself as well as my love of English to all of you. I feel pretty honored to take part in this competition, and believe that I am one of the best participants, and nothing can change my mind to win the match. Give me five and Believe me!

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