帮忙改下我的英语演讲稿My strength is making photographs,can put fatty thinner,Can put small eyes become big eyes,I also like the women's self-defense,I think women have to learn some defense to protect themselves,I also like the supplied p

帮忙改下我的英语演讲稿My strength is making photographs,can put fatty thinner,Can put small eyes become big eyes,I also like the women's self-defense,I think women have to learn some defense to protect themselves,I also like the supplied p
帮忙改下我的英语演讲稿
My strength is making photographs,can put fatty thinner,Can put small eyes become big eyes,I also like the women's self-defense,I think women have to learn some defense to protect themselves,I also like the supplied pan-head,I can also design many different styles,Our bedroom many people like to let me give their comb,
I am an introverted person,I like quiet
I have many dreams of being a teacher or businessman,
Because my parents are in business,I've been under their influence
I could go first business selling clothes!
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帮忙改下我的英语演讲稿My strength is making photographs,can put fatty thinner,Can put small eyes become big eyes,I also like the women's self-defense,I think women have to learn some defense to protect themselves,I also like the supplied p
I am good at making photographs. I can make people look thinner and make eyes big and beautiful.
I like the women's self-defense,because I think women have to learn something to protect themselves.
I also like making hairstyles and I can design many different styles to put up hair. Therefore I often help my roommates make hairstyles and they all enjoy it.
I am an introverted person. I like to be quiet.and I have many dreams.
I want to a teacher or a businessman,because my parents are in business. Under their influence,I can do business first and sell clothes!

I don't think you are an introverted guy, if you are what kind like you said, you won't find help on the internet. But anyway ,your paper is great.i like it, and good luck.