检查英语文章语病 这是课堂小演讲请大神修改Today I’m glad to make aspeech here.Then I will tell a joke to you.A school teacher was telling her students theimportance of making others happy.Now,she asked all children,“Has anyone

检查英语文章语病 这是课堂小演讲请大神修改Today I’m glad to make aspeech here.Then I will tell a joke to you.A school teacher was telling her students theimportance of making others happy.Now,she asked all children,“Has anyone
检查英语文章语病 这是课堂小演讲请大神修改
Today I’m glad to make aspeech here.Then I will tell a joke to you.
A school teacher was telling her students theimportance of making others happy.Now,she asked all children,“Has anyone ofyou ever made someone else glad?”
A small boy reply immediately,“I've made someone glad yesterday.”
“Well done.Who was that?” the teacher washappy.
“My grandma.”
“Good boy.Now tell us how you made your grandmother glad.” The teacher said.
I went to see her yesterday,and stayed with her three hours.Then I said toher,‘Grandma,I'm going home,’ and she said,‘Well,I'm glad’!
My question is ,was thestudent’s grandma glad in fact?

检查英语文章语病 这是课堂小演讲请大神修改Today I’m glad to make aspeech here.Then I will tell a joke to you.A school teacher was telling her students theimportance of making others happy.Now,she asked all children,“Has anyone
Today I’m glad to make a speech here.Or I should say I will tell a joke to you.
A school teacher was telling her students about the importance of making others happy.And she asked all the children,“Has anyone of you ever made someone else glad?”
A small boy replied immediately,“I made someone glad yesterday.”
“Well done.Who was that person?” the teacher was happy.
“My grandma.”
“Good boy.Now tell us how you made your grandmother glad.” the teacher said.
I went to see her yesterday,and stayed with her for three hours.Then I said to her,‘Grandma,I'm going home,’ and she said,‘Well,I'm glad’!
My question is ,was the student’s grandma glad indeed?

太长了，问题具体点

这个笑话很完美，没有错，就是开头要适当修改一下。
Good morning, everyone. Today, I'm glad to stand here to make a speech. What I'm going to tell you is a joke. It goes like this: .....

时态有问题你讲的故事是过去的事情，所以要全部用过去时，直接引语不需要改变时态
从 now 开始，now代表现在时，所以删掉
第二 a small boy replied
"I made someone glad yesterday" 不用完成时，是说的昨天，用一般过去时
three hours 前边加个for
其他的还OK，没有什么语法问题。...

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时态有问题你讲的故事是过去的事情，所以要全部用过去时，直接引语不需要改变时态
从 now 开始，now代表现在时，所以删掉
第二 a small boy replied
"I made someone glad yesterday" 不用完成时，是说的昨天，用一般过去时
three hours 前边加个for
其他的还OK，没有什么语法问题。

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