纠错,英语作文纠错.我今年初三,帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有什么错误,Dear JohnThank you so much for your email.I’m very happy to answer your questions.I often start my summer vacation in July and I usually spend 2 months relax

纠错,英语作文纠错.我今年初三,帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有什么错误,Dear JohnThank you so much for your email.I’m very happy to answer your questions.I often start my summer vacation in July and I usually spend 2 months relax
纠错,英语作文纠错.我今年初三,帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有什么错误,
Dear John
Thank you so much for your email.I’m very happy to answer your questions.
I often start my summer vacation in July and I usually spend 2 months relaxing myself.I usually watch TV in summer .Because I think it cannot only help us learn what is happening throughout the world,but also help us learn more knowledge.
I won’t go to a summer school,because I think summer vacation is used to relax myself and is used to help our brain rest so that we can focus on our lessons when we go to school.I want to go swimming most.Summer is hot and we can felel comfortable when we are simming..Swimming can build up our strength and reduce the chance of illness .And I think it is a waste of time to go to a summer school .
How about your summer vacation Is it interesting I hope that your survey will be a success .
I wish to visit you in Canada one day.
Yours,
Su Hua
是feel ,不是felel

纠错,英语作文纠错.我今年初三,帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有什么错误,Dear JohnThank you so much for your email.I’m very happy to answer your questions.I often start my summer vacation in July and I usually spend 2 months relax
1.Because I think it cannot only help us learn what is happening throughout the world,but also help us learn more knowledge.[can not分开来写]
2.Summer is hot and we can felel comfortable when we are simming.[feel 拼写错误]
3.And I think it is a waste of time to go to a summer school .[这句话换个位置,放在这段最后很奇怪,跟前面一句话连接不起来]
4.你think重复使用太多次了,可以用 I consider / I believe/in my opinion 等
5.注意连词的使用 可以用 In addition / Moreover 不要总用And

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