请帮我修改一下,语法错误（英语）CleanNowadays,clean is coming up in conversation.Because clean is very important word in our life.Actually because of clean we can have a feeling of satisfiction.Furthermore we can breathe in fresh air to

请帮我修改一下,语法错误（英语）CleanNowadays,clean is coming up in conversation.Because clean is very important word in our life.Actually because of clean we can have a feeling of satisfiction.Furthermore we can breathe in fresh air to
请帮我修改一下,语法错误（英语）
Clean
Nowadays,clean is coming up in conversation.Because clean is very important word in our life.Actually because of clean we can have a feeling of satisfiction.Furthermore we can breathe in fresh air too.Many scientist say that clean is very important in our life because it can make us healthy.In my opinion,clean means hard-working,because hardworking people are very clean in our life.So if you want hard working you have to clean yourself.And through clean,clean weather can lasts for a long time.So that I am in favor of clean for the simple reason that it can make me happy and healthy.

请帮我修改一下,语法错误（英语）CleanNowadays,clean is coming up in conversation.Because clean is very important word in our life.Actually because of clean we can have a feeling of satisfiction.Furthermore we can breathe in fresh air to
Cleanness
Nowadays,cleanness is often heard in conversation.Cleanness is very important word in our daily life.Actually because of cleanness we can have a feeling of satisfiction.Besides,we can have fresh air when we breathe.Many scientist say that cleanness is very important in our life because it can make us healthy and strong.In my opinion,cleanness means hard work,because hardworking people are very clean in our life.So if you want to be hard working you have to make yourself clean .And through working hard we can help make it cleaner and clean weather can last for a longer time.So I am in favor of cleanness for the simple reason that it can make me happier and healthier.

because of----------because many scientist ----------many scientists healthy-----keep health

what？ why？ where？ 这是什么呢？？？

because of cleaning