作业帮大家帮我看看这篇短文有没有语法和用词错误I have lots of problems.I don't know how to deal with them,either.So l'm very worried and stressed from time to time.One main cause of stress is time.I haven't any time for my hobbies,such a
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大家帮我看看这篇短文有没有语法和用词错误I have lots of problems.I don't know how to deal with them,either.So l'm very worried and stressed from time to time.One main cause of stress is time.I haven't any time for my hobbies,such a
大家帮我看看这篇短文有没有语法和用词错误
I have lots of problems.I don't know how to deal with them,either.So l'm very worried and stressed from time to time.
One main cause of stress is time.I haven't any time for my hobbies,such as go on a trip and sleep.Now,I spend most of my time on study.Sometimes I don't get enough sleep,so I feel tired in class.In the last summer holiday,I planed to go Beijng,but then,I have to foget this plan because of time.I really feel bad about that.
I wish I could't study any more,but I think it isn't possible.Sometimes I feel bring and stressed.What should I do?Can you give me some advice?Thanks a lot.
大家帮我看看这篇短文有没有语法和用词错误I have lots of problems.I don't know how to deal with them,either.So l'm very worried and stressed from time to time.One main cause of stress is time.I haven't any time for my hobbies,such a
1.I haven't any time for my hobbies中haven't应该是don't have（现在时否定用助动词）
2.such as go on a trip and sleep.
such as后面用名词或句子,不该用go 和sleep,都要加ing
3.I planed to go Beijng：Beijing前面用定冠词“the”
4.I have to foget this plan ：have to有它的过去式,为had to
5.Sometimes I feel bring and stressed,这个你打错了吧,“bring”
.I haven't any time for my hobbies.中的haven't
such as go on a trip and sleep中的go
I have to foget this plan because of time中的have
Sometimes I feel bring and stressed中的bring
一共四处错误，想想错哪了，怎么改