赏析英语作文My Chinese TeacherOf all the subjects,I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years,I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she

赏析英语作文My Chinese TeacherOf all the subjects,I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years,I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she
赏析英语作文
My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects,I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years,I respect and love her very much.
My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.
Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.
Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we're getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.
Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

赏析英语作文My Chinese TeacherOf all the subjects,I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years,I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she
Of all the subjects the first the last one of the most 最高级
Though neither ……nor 关联词
lively and interesting kind and friendly形容词贴切符合教师身份
enjoy 含享受之意

My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much

总体还可以，就是不要分这么多段，英语作文一般要求内容分清楚言简意赅，就是第一段说什么，第二段说什么，第三段说什么，最后要有总结。比如第一段先大体说一下，第二段说他的性格特征，第三段说他怎样教我们 给我们带来了怎样的乐趣或者有什么生动的故事，最后在总结他在我心中的地位，和我对他的喜爱和尊敬。其实这是中国老师想要看到的 ，但是为了拿到高分 还是得按老师的意思办。如果要说这篇文章好在哪呢就是写出了真...

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总体还可以，就是不要分这么多段，英语作文一般要求内容分清楚言简意赅，就是第一段说什么，第二段说什么，第三段说什么，最后要有总结。比如第一段先大体说一下，第二段说他的性格特征，第三段说他怎样教我们 给我们带来了怎样的乐趣或者有什么生动的故事，最后在总结他在我心中的地位，和我对他的喜爱和尊敬。其实这是中国老师想要看到的 ，但是为了拿到高分 还是得按老师的意思办。

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