关于修改一篇英语文章,包括语法,拼写,语句通顺与否,句子长短,就用改作文的态度改具体文章如下What does article tell you?I think it mainly tell me about African how to use the Shanghai Expo to express their country .

关于修改一篇英语文章,包括语法,拼写,语句通顺与否,句子长短,就用改作文的态度改具体文章如下What does article tell you?I think it mainly tell me about African how to use the Shanghai Expo to express their country .
关于修改一篇英语文章,包括语法,拼写,语句通顺与否,句子长短,就用改作文的态度改
具体文章如下
What does article tell you?
I think it mainly tell me about African how to use the Shanghai Expo to express their country .They told us the important role which Africa plays in environmental protection and coordination of world affairs,development of African countries,urban transformation,economic rise and cultural prosperity in Africa,the past and the future of Africa,impressed and inspired through display of all kinds of service programs,including transportation,buildings and facilities,schools,etc.
Who is the article for?
I think the article for those who want to know the general situation of African exhibition,including what they want to express and what they want to impact the audience.These people may be the tourist who interested; the researchers who want know more about Africa,the Government researchers who want to know more about the development of Africa,the designer who want to learn more about the style of African,etc.
How well does the writer understand his /her audience?
I think it belongs to an introducing essay.The length of an article is not long,but it put the main point what information are the audiences need .It used fewer words to let audiences know how is the Africa pavilion through the main design and interesting sight .In addition to this,writer also used the brief introduction the idea what Africa wants to express.As an introducing essay,it can let audience understand what you want to introduce quickly through a brief and distinct statements.I think it is successful.

关于修改一篇英语文章,包括语法,拼写,语句通顺与否,句子长短,就用改作文的态度改具体文章如下What does article tell you?I think it mainly tell me about African how to use the Shanghai Expo to express their country .
What does THE article tell you?
I think it mainly TELLS me about how THE AFRICANS use the Shanghai Expo to express their country .They told us the important role which Africa PLAYED in THE environmental protection and IN THE coordination of world affairs,THE development of African countries,urban transformation,economic rise and THE cultural prosperity in Africa,the past and the future of Africa,impressed and inspired through THE display of all kinds of service programs,including transportation,buildings and facilities,schools,etc.
Who is the article for?
I think the article IS for those who want to know the general situation of African exhibition,including what they want to express and what they want to impact the audience.These people may be the TOURISTS who ARE interested; the researchers who want TO know more about Africa,the Government researchers who want to know more about the development of Africa,the DESIGNERS who want to learn more about the style of African,etc.
How well does the writer understand his /her audience?
I think it IS an introducing essay.The length of THE article is not long,but it put the main point IN THE information WHICH the audiences need .It used fewer words to let audiences know how is the Africa pavilion through the main design and interesting sight .In addition to this,writer also used the brief introduction the idea what Africa wants to express.As an introducing essay,it can let audience understand what you want to introduce quickly through a brief and distinct statements.I think it is successful.

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对不起，米听懂。，，翻译给你吧（需要理解性的看）
、、给点分吧、求你了
具体文章如下
文章告诉你什么？
我认为这主要是告诉我关于非洲如何利用上海世博会，表达他们的国家。他们告诉我们，非洲的重要作用在环境保护和世界事务中的协调，非洲国家，城市转型，经济崛起和文化的繁荣发展起着在非洲，过去和非洲，留下深刻印象，并通过各种方案的所有服...

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对不起，米听懂。，，翻译给你吧（需要理解性的看）
、、给点分吧、求你了
具体文章如下
文章告诉你什么？
我认为这主要是告诉我关于非洲如何利用上海世博会，表达他们的国家。他们告诉我们，非洲的重要作用在环境保护和世界事务中的协调，非洲国家，城市转型，经济崛起和文化的繁荣发展起着在非洲，过去和非洲，留下深刻印象，并通过各种方案的所有服务，包括交通，建筑和设施，学校等，显示未来的启发
谁是文章？
我认为对于那些想知道谁是非洲展览的总体情况，包括他们想表达什么，以及他们想要影响观众的文章。这些人会是谁的旅游兴趣，研究人员谁想要了解更多有关非洲，政府的研究人员想知道谁在非洲，设计师谁想要了解非洲，风格等更多的发展更
作家得如何理解他/她的观众？
我认为它属于一个介绍文章。文章的长度不长，但它把主要的问题是什么样的信息受众的需求。它使用较少的话，让观众知道如何通过设计和有趣的景点主要非洲国家馆。除了这个，笔者还使用了简要介绍非洲的想法要表达什么。作为一个介绍文章，它可以让观众明白你想通过一个简短的介绍和不同的报表很快。我认为它是成功的。
、、希望对你有帮助噢、、

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What does the article talk about?
I think it mainly tell me about how to use the Shanghai Expo to express Africa .They told us the important role which Africa played in environmental protection an...

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What does the article talk about?
I think it mainly tell me about how to use the Shanghai Expo to express Africa .They told us the important role which Africa played in environmental protection and coordination of world affairs, development of African countries, urban transformation, economic rise and cultural prosperity in Africa, the past and the future of Africa, impressed and inspired through display of all kinds of service programs, including transportation, buildings and facilities, schools, etc.
Who is the article for?
I think the article for those who want to know the general situation of African exhibition, including what they want to express and what they want to impact the audience. These people may be the tourist who are interested in it,or the researchers who want to know more about Africa,or the internional researchers who want to know more about the development of Africa,or the designers who want to learn more about the style of Africa, etc.
How does the writer understand his /her audience very well?
I think it belongs to an introducing essay. The length of an article is not long, but it puts the main point that the audiences are needed in the information.It used fewer words to let audiences know how the Africa show by the main design and interesting sight . In addition to this, writer also used the brief introduction the idea what Africa wants to express. As an introducing essay, it can let audience understand what you want to introduce quickly through a brief and distinct statements. I think it is successful.
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