修改英语作文,看看我哪里错了,修改下My mother is an office worker.She gets up at 6 'o clock.She makes breakfast at 6:45 in the morning,and she goes to work at 7:30 at 6:00 in the afternoon she goes shopping after work.She makes dinner f

修改英语作文,看看我哪里错了,修改下My mother is an office worker.She gets up at 6 'o clock.She makes breakfast at 6:45 in the morning,and she goes to work at 7:30 at 6:00 in the afternoon she goes shopping after work.She makes dinner f
修改英语作文,看看我哪里错了,修改下
My mother is an office worker.She gets up at 6 'o clock.She makes breakfast at 6:45 in the morning,and she goes to work at 7:30 at 6:00 in the afternoon she goes shopping after work.She makes dinner for us at 7:15 in the evening.After dinner,she often washes clothes.I love my mother very much.

修改英语作文,看看我哪里错了,修改下My mother is an office worker.She gets up at 6 'o clock.She makes breakfast at 6:45 in the morning,and she goes to work at 7:30 at 6:00 in the afternoon she goes shopping after work.She makes dinner f
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基本上没什么错误,为你修改如下：
My mother is an office worker.She gets up at 6 'o clock.She makes breakfast at 6:45 in the morning and she goes to work at 7:30 . She goes shopping after work in the afternoon.She makes dinner for us at 7:15 in the evening.After that,she often washes clothes.I love my mother very much.
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My mother is an office worker.She gets up at 6 'o clock (in the morning).She makes breakfast at 6:45,and she goes to work at 7:30. (A)t 6:00 in the afternoon she goes shopping after work. She makes di...

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My mother is an office worker.She gets up at 6 'o clock (in the morning).She makes breakfast at 6:45,and she goes to work at 7:30. (A)t 6:00 in the afternoon she goes shopping after work. She makes dinner for us at 7:15 in the evening. After dinner,she often washes clothes. (Everyday she is very busy), I love my mother very much.
没有语法错误，写的很好

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makes breakfast 用 cooks breakfast
makes dinner 用 cooks dinner
写得挺好的，继续加油，祝开心！

1.office worker应该为white collar
2.6 o' clock
3.makes应该为cooks
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