英语作文---“保护环境,爱我家园” 大家看看有什么语法错误?演讲稿有什么英语演讲时应该注意的问题Protect the environment love my homeAs we all know,environment problem is more and more important in China even the

英语作文---“保护环境,爱我家园” 大家看看有什么语法错误?演讲稿有什么英语演讲时应该注意的问题Protect the environment love my homeAs we all know,environment problem is more and more important in China even the
英语作文---“保护环境,爱我家园” 大家看看有什么语法错误?演讲稿有什么英语演讲时应该注意的问题
Protect the environment love my home
As we all know,environment problem is more and more important in China even the whole world.We should make concerted efforts to meet the challenge confront all kinds of pollution problems.
Let me introduce you to a variety of pollution problems.
Air pollution
Beijing Olympic Games has been hold.But do you know?Before beginning,Beijing launched a single-double number measures that one car can only drive three times a week.This initiative madethe blue sky and we could smell pure air.
Water pollution
L can tell you a truth:Factor of safety of drinking water in China are not high.At present,the major cities in our country only 23% of the residents of drinking water meet the health standards.
To protect environment has no time to delay.Let'go!
我是初二的,请大家看一下有哪些语法上的错误?
对于主题“保护环境,爱我家园”有什么应该添加的内容?
结尾比较仓促,有什么更好的意见和建议?
因为这是我的演讲稿,有哪位好人可以告诉我一些演讲时应该注意的事项,

英语作文---“保护环境,爱我家园” 大家看看有什么语法错误?演讲稿有什么英语演讲时应该注意的问题Protect the environment love my homeAs we all know,environment problem is more and more important in China even the
你的英语属于chin-English,很多语句是按照中文的说法写的.比如：
Let me introduce you to a variety of pollution problems.你可以改为：There are variety of pollution problems as we know,the one I reffers is air pollution,………… the second is …… the last one is
结尾部分作为演讲来说过于突兀,但pollution这个问题过大,试试用问题结尾.

Protect the environment ，love our home
being well known, the environment problem is more and more important in the Chinese even world. We should arranged to accept diligently together facing va...

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Protect the environment ，love our home
being well known, the environment problem is more and more important in the Chinese even world. We should arranged to accept diligently together facing various challenge of pollution problems.
let t me introduce you to various pollution problems.
air pollution
the Beijing Olympics games is past. But you whether to know? Before starting, Beijing has launched the only dual digital measure which a automobile possible each Wednesday time only to drive. This initiative madethe blue sky and we can smell the pure air.
water pollution
i possibly tell you the truth: The factor of safety tap water is not high in China. Presently, chief city in ours tap water assembly resident's national only 23% health standards. To does not protect the environment to have the time delay. Let'go!

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Protect the environment love my home
As we all know,environment problem is more and more important in China even the whole world. We should make concerted efforts to meet the challenge confront a...

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Protect the environment love my home
As we all know,environment problem is more and more important in China even the whole world. We should make concerted efforts to meet the challenge confront all kinds of pollution problems.
Let me introduce you to a variety of pollution problems.
Air pollution
Beijing Olympic Games has been hold.But do you know? Before beginning, Beijing launched a single-double number measures that one car can only drive three times a week. This initiative madethe blue sky and we could smell pure air.
Water pollution
L can tell you a truth: Factor of safety of drinking water in China are not high. At present, the major cities in our country only 23% of the residents of drinking water meet the health standards.
To protect environment has no time to delay.Let'go!

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Beijing Olympic Games has been hold.But do you know? Before beginning
has 改 have 应该Before the beginning
To protect environment has no time to delay.Let'go!
总觉得别扭，可能有问题，不确定

possibly tell you the truth: The factor of safety tap water is not high in China. Presently, chief city in ours tap water assembly resident's national only 23% health standards. To does not protect the environment to have the time delay. Let'go!

还不错啊
演讲时要大胆，大方。