English英语,请懂英语的朋友帮我指正一下,some unfair thingsI have a 4 years old son,He is a very bright boy.as he gets older he becomes more acting upas you know,most of children like playing games on ipad,and watch cortoon and so on,but

English英语,请懂英语的朋友帮我指正一下,some unfair thingsI have a 4 years old son,He is a very bright boy.as he gets older he becomes more acting upas you know,most of children like playing games on ipad,and watch cortoon and so on,but
English英语,请懂英语的朋友帮我指正一下,
some unfair things
I have a 4 years old son,
He is a very bright boy.
as he gets older he becomes more acting up
as you know,most of children like playing games on ipad,and watch cortoon and so on,but it will strain the eyes if spend too much time on this.
sometimes,he makes the room at sixes and sevens,and has the toys everywhere...
so i have to teach him don't do this,don't do that and tell him to keep out of mischief!
I usually say:If you're still naughty I'll smack your Bottom .
I don't remember how many times i had said
One day,i said the same words to my 4 years old son when he was acting up
my son shouted at me:"It's unfair!"
at that time,I'm at a loss for words!

English英语,请懂英语的朋友帮我指正一下,some unfair thingsI have a 4 years old son,He is a very bright boy.as he gets older he becomes more acting upas you know,most of children like playing games on ipad,and watch cortoon and so on,but
小改一下,有一些不是英语的习惯,我就 按行来说吧.
1,2行没问题,
3,As he grows up,he becomes naughtier.
4,wactching cartoon,it will strain their eyes if they spend too much time on it.
5,makes the toys everywhere
6 teach him not to do this and that.
7 I often
8 I donot remember how many times I have said it.
9 One day,I said it again when he was acting up
10,But I didnot expect that he should shout at me that "It is unfair"
11,I was too speechless to say a word.
最后说一句,不知道为什么,亲的英文读起来不顺.建议多读点英文读物

some unfair things
i have a 4 years old son,
He is a very clever boy.
He becomes more and more piquant as growing up.
as you know,most of children like playing by ipad,such as watching...

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some unfair things
i have a 4 years old son,
He is a very clever boy.
He becomes more and more piquant as growing up.
as you know,most of children like playing by ipad,such as watching cortoom,playing games.but if they spend too much time on playing,their sight will be gradully influenced.
sometimes his room is in a state of chaos because of his mischief.
i usually say,if you are still naughty i will smack your hips.
i can not remember the times i had already said.



time is not enough,sorry.

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and watch cortoon 可改为 watching cartoon
if spend too much time on this 可改为 if he spends too much time on those
i have to teach him don't do this,don't do that 可改为 I have to teach him not to do ...

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and watch cortoon 可改为 watching cartoon
if spend too much time on this 可改为 if he spends too much time on those
i have to teach him don't do this,don't do that 可改为 I have to teach him not to do this or that
how many times i had said 可改为how many times I have told him
4 years old son 可改为 4-year-old son
I'm at a loss 可改为 I was at a loss
希望对您有所帮助，谢谢！

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