英语好的好心人进来看看,我需要帮助……我需要快一点的,今天中午之前哦.帮我看看下文哪里需要改,哪里有错?I want to say thank you to our school.Before we leave,I was afraid of my English pronounce.When we arriv

英语好的好心人进来看看,我需要帮助……我需要快一点的,今天中午之前哦.帮我看看下文哪里需要改,哪里有错?I want to say thank you to our school.Before we leave,I was afraid of my English pronounce.When we arriv
英语好的好心人进来看看,我需要帮助……我需要快一点的,今天中午之前哦.
帮我看看下文哪里需要改,哪里有错?
I want to say thank you to our school.
Before we leave,I was afraid of my English pronounce.When we arrived the Sun Francisco Airport,I was very surprise.Here have fresh air,green grass,and the blue sky.The people are very warm and charming.
My American family’s name is Mattus.There are 9 people in this family.My parents,my grandma,2 sisters,2 brothers,Luna and me.Luna is my Chinese friend.
My mum is Mexican,her name is Olivia.
My dad is American,he is David.
My little sister’s name is Krysta,and the other one is Korah.I like Korah very much,she is beautiful and smart.And we were very lucky,we met her birthday.There is one thing you cannot believe,that is she have got a boyfriend.But,she is only 16 years old.
My brothers are Kyle and Francisco.Kyle is younger than me.Francisco is older than me,and he is Spanish,he isn’t my mum’s child.
My grandma is Spanish.She is very kindly.
We have good time.They are very cute and humorous.I spent so many unforgettable days with that I was loath to part with them.I will go to American another time,and I will looking for them.

英语好的好心人进来看看,我需要帮助……我需要快一点的,今天中午之前哦.帮我看看下文哪里需要改,哪里有错?I want to say thank you to our school.Before we leave,I was afraid of my English pronounce.When we arriv
I want to say thank you to our school.
Before we LEFT, I was afraid of my English PRONUNCINATION. When we arrived AT the Sun Francisco Airport, I was very surpriseD. THEY have fresh air, green grass, and blue sky. The people are very warm and charming.
My family name is Mattus. There are 9 people in this family. My parents, my grandma, 2 sisters, 2 brothers, Luna and me. Luna is my Chinese friend.
My mum is Mexican, her name is Olivia.
My dad is American, hIS NAME is David.
My little sister’s name is Krysta, and the other one is Korah. I like Korah very much, she is beautiful and smart. And we were very lucky, we WERE IN TIME FOR her birthday. There is one thing you cannot believe,WHICH is she haS got a boyfriend. But, she is only 16 years old.
My brothers are Kyle and Francisco. Kyle is younger than me. Francisco is older than me, and he is Spanish, he isn’t my mum’s child.
My grandma is Spanish. She is very kind.
We have A good time. They are very cute and humorous. I spent so many unforgettable days with THEM that I was loath to part with them. I will go to American SOON, and I will MEET them ONCE MORE.