看看这篇英语作文有什么错误,请改出来,（是过去式）My vacationMy vacation was great.I with my family went toa beautiful beah.There were many people here.On vacation,most of the weather was sunny and hot.In the morning.Wehad great

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看看这篇英语作文有什么错误,请改出来,（是过去式）My vacationMy vacation was great.I with my family went toa beautiful beah.There were many people here.On vacation,most of the weather was sunny and hot.In the morning.Wehad great
看看这篇英语作文有什么错误,请改出来,（是过去式）
My vacation
My vacation was great.I with my family went toa beautiful beah.There were many people here.On vacation,most of the weather was sunny and hot.In the morning.We
had great fun playing in the water.And for lunch,we had a delicious seafood at a resaurant.In the afternoon.We went swimming and played beach volleyball.It was really
fun.In the evening,we watched talk shows on TV at hotel.I really enjoyed myself very
much.

看看这篇英语作文有什么错误,请改出来,（是过去式）My vacationMy vacation was great.I with my family went toa beautiful beah.There were many people here.On vacation,most of the weather was sunny and hot.In the morning.Wehad great
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My vacation
My vacation was great.I as well as my family went to a beautiful beach.There were already many people on vacation there ,most of the time the weather was sunny and hot.In the morning.we had great fun playing in the water.And for lunch,we had delicious seafood at a resaurant not far from the beach.In the afternoon,we went swimming and played beach volleyball.It was really great fun.In the evening,we watched talk shows on TV at the hotel.I really enjoyed myself very much.

“I with my family went toa beautiful beah.”最好改成“I went to a beautiful beach with my family."

I with my family went to a beautiful beach.改成I went to a beautiful beach with my family
here改为there
on the vacation而不是on vacation.
most of the weather改为most of the days of the weather.
a delicious seafood 改为some delicious··
at a hotel
删去 very much.

I with my family改成my family with I 语序问题 beah是什么啊 没有这个词 啊
把therewere many people here中的here去掉
on the vacation
we had some delicious seafood
at the hotel

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