麻烦帮审一篇英语演讲稿啊~4分钟的演讲.Good morning ladies and gentlemen .Thank you for coming ,it`s myhonor to stand here and give you a speech .My topic is learn from yesterday,seize the day and faith in the future.Since we were born

麻烦帮审一篇英语演讲稿啊~4分钟的演讲.Good morning ladies and gentlemen .Thank you for coming ,it`s myhonor to stand here and give you a speech .My topic is learn from yesterday,seize the day and faith in the future.Since we were born
麻烦帮审一篇英语演讲稿啊~4分钟的演讲.
Good morning ladies and gentlemen .Thank you for coming ,it`s myhonor to stand here and give you a speech .My topic is learn from yesterday,seize the day and faith in the future.
Since we were born ,we all stand on three points .They are yesterday,today and tomorrow .I learned a lot from yesterday ,I work hard today and Ihave hope in the future .
There is one day in every week about which we should not worried:yesterday with its mistakes and cares ,its faults and blunders ,its aches andpains .Yesterday is gone ,but it wouldn`t gone in vain .It gave us many sweetmemories .And something we can learn from .Yesterday holds many lessons for us,if we neglect to learn it ,we may unnecessarily repeat mistakes that we havealready made .Yesterday might be painful ,but without studying the lessons ofthe past ,how can we obtain a better future .
Yesterday has gone .we should think about today instead of beingobsessed in the past .Today is the very minute and second I have now .What eachof us is doing this minute may be the most important event in history for us.We have decided to invest our resources in this opportunity rather than anyother .It remind me a movie line in DEAD POETS SOCIETY :Carpe diem ,seize theday boys and make your lives extraordinary .Today is the bridge between todayand tomorrow ,don`t let yesterday use up too much of today ,seize the day isthe basis for success in tomorrow.
Yesterday and today will allgone with the wind .From those days ,I learn to believe in tomorrow .But as weall know ,an economic hurricane has swept the world ,creating so many crisisthat opportunity comes to be seen as a zero sum game ,in which your dream comeat my expanse .Many people feel their dreams slipping away and lose their faithin the future little by little .But should we succumb to a race to the bottomand self-abandonment that in the end helps no one No ,we should haveconfidence ,we must believe that we can seize the opportunities ahead and makethe future work for us .This is not blind optimism or synthetic confidence toconsole people .It`s the practical affirmation for our time and our faith inthe future .And it means ,also ,taking full responsibility for our own lives.We must know that we many face challenges and discrimination in our own live,we must always believe that we can write our own destiny .The Greek proverb,what dose it say Why dose anybody plant the seeds of a tree whose shade theywill never see The answer is because they look to the future .
Yesterday is history ,learn from it ;Today is a gift ,seize it;Tomorrow is a mystery ,fight for it .And I believe you ,the people,that havethe vision to work hard every day ,are also the people with the vision to seeka bright future .

麻烦帮审一篇英语演讲稿啊~4分钟的演讲.Good morning ladies and gentlemen .Thank you for coming ,it`s myhonor to stand here and give you a speech .My topic is learn from yesterday,seize the day and faith in the future.Since we were born
1.第四行：Since we were born ,we all stand on three points ,They are（改成that is）yesterday,today and tomorrow
that在文中通常指上文提到的事,这里用that is表示对上文three points 的解释
2.I（改成we） learned a lot from yesterday ,I（省略I）work hard today and I（省略I）have hope in the future .
因为这是一篇演讲稿,所以建议演讲者不要以第一人称单数做主语.通篇应当努力与观众产生共鸣.后面的主语可以省略,这样可以使你的演讲变得有气势
3.Today is the bridge between today（改成yesterday）and tomorrow
因为在今天,人们是在过去的基础上进一步学习努力成长,为了达成未来的目标.（个人建议哈）
其他的都还可以.
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不错，没什么要改尽的 翻译如下：
早上好女士们和先生们。谢谢你的光临,这是myhonor站在这里为你们演讲。我的话题是学习昨天,把握今天和对未来的信念。自从我们出生时,我们都站在三分。他们是昨天、今天和明天。昨天我从中学到了很多东西,我努力工作今天和我希望在未来。有一天,在每个星期,我们不应该担心:昨天的失误与忧虑、错误与过失、痛苦andpains。昨天已经过去,但是它也没有白费。它给了...

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不错，没什么要改尽的 翻译如下：
早上好女士们和先生们。谢谢你的光临,这是myhonor站在这里为你们演讲。我的话题是学习昨天,把握今天和对未来的信念。自从我们出生时,我们都站在三分。他们是昨天、今天和明天。昨天我从中学到了很多东西,我努力工作今天和我希望在未来。有一天,在每个星期,我们不应该担心:昨天的失误与忧虑、错误与过失、痛苦andpains。昨天已经过去,但是它也没有白费。它给了我们很多sweetmemories。和一些我们可以学习。昨天有许多教训我们,如果我们忽视学习它,我们可能会不必要地重复错误,我们已做出。昨天可能是痛苦的,但没有学习课程在过去,我们怎样才能获得一个更好的未来。昨天已逝。我们应该想想今天而不是beingobsessed过去。今天是非常分钟和第二我有现在。我们正在做这个什么每分钟可能是最重要的事件在历史上对我们。我们已经决定投资我们的资源在这个机会而不是其他。它提醒我一个电影线在《死亡诗社》:及时行乐,抓住这男孩和让你们的生活变得非凡起来。今天是明天todayand之间的桥梁,不要让昨天消耗太多今天,把握今天是明天成功的基础。昨天和今天将allgone随风。在那些日子里,我学会相信明天。但随着weall知道,经济飓风席卷世界,创造这么多机会来危机被视为零和游戏中,你的梦想comeat我宽阔。许多人觉得他们的梦想溜走,并且失去了他们的faithin未来一点点。但是我们应该屈服于竞争bottomand忘却自我,最终帮助没有人吗?不,我们应该haveconfidence,我们必须相信我们能抓住机遇走,令未来为我们工作。这不是盲目的乐观主义或合成的信心toconsole人。它的实际时间和肯定,为我们的信心在未来。这意味着,同时,充分负责我们自己的生活。我们必须知道我们许多面临挑战和歧视在我们自己的生活,我们必须始终相信我们可以写我们自己的命运。希腊谚语,什么剂量它说什么?为什么任何人的种子树的阴影会永远不会看到吗?答案是,因为他们放眼未来。昨天是历史,从中吸取教训,今天是一个礼物,抓住它,明天是一个谜,为它而奋斗。我相信你,人民,有愿景努力工作每一天,同时也是人与视觉seeka光明的未来。

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