请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下case study的写作.把明显的错误修改一下.Lask states that as part of a broad promotional mix,price occupies a big part in drive sales,while he concedes that Flanagan as service companies should put the

请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下case study的写作.把明显的错误修改一下.Lask states that as part of a broad promotional mix,price occupies a big part in drive sales,while he concedes that Flanagan as service companies should put the
请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下case study的写作.把明显的错误修改一下.
Lask states that as part of a broad promotional mix,price occupies a big part in drive sales,while he concedes that Flanagan as service companies should put the customer experience in the first place.He maintains that a discount through a social-media site is an effective method to help solve the cash problem,if it is used properly.In contrast,Bhakta states that substantial promotional discounts could cause a lot of negative effect,while he concedes that daily deals could be unwise for Flanagan’s business.He maintains that the customers who tend to use discount is impossibly to be a full-paying customers,that means they would hardly return if Flanagan stop offer discount.

请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下case study的写作.把明显的错误修改一下.Lask states that as part of a broad promotional mix,price occupies a big part in drive sales,while he concedes that Flanagan as service companies should put the
Lask states that as part of a broad promotional mix,price occupies a big part in making sales,while he concedes that Flanagan as service companies should put the customer experience first.He maintains his view of discounts through social-media sites is an effective method to help solve the cash problem,but only if it is used properly.In contrast,Bhakta states that substantial promotional discounts could cause a lot of negative effects,while he concedes that daily deals could be unwise for Flanagan’s business,he believes that the customers who tend to use discount is impossible to be a full-paying customer,this means that they would rarely return if Flanagan stop offer discount.
(you did a farly good job on grammar and your thoughts were complete,there were not much correction to be made)

Lask stated that as part of a broad promotion, while saling price occupied a big part in driving sales, Flanagan as a service-oriented company should put its top priorith on the customers' experiences...

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Lask stated that as part of a broad promotion, while saling price occupied a big part in driving sales, Flanagan as a service-oriented company should put its top priorith on the customers' experiences. He maintained that a discount notice or promotion event through the social-media, if used properly, is an effective method to help solve the cash problem,. In contrast, Bhakta stated that substantial promotional discounts could cause a lot of negative effect,in that daily deals could be unwise for Flanagan’s business. He maintained that the customers who tended to get used to discount would never become full-paying customers, that is, these customers would hardly return if Flanagan stopped offering discount.

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