帮忙看看这句话有没有语病...Hello,everybody.I'm Chinese.My name is Fucan.My English is very poor.so I want to study English at pains.I'll improve this present status.

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帮忙看看这句话有没有语病...Hello,everybody.I'm Chinese.My name is Fucan.My English is very poor.so I want to study English at pains.I'll improve this present status.
帮忙看看这句话有没有语病...
Hello,everybody.
I'm Chinese.My name is Fucan.
My English is very poor.so I want to study English at pains.I'll improve this present status.

帮忙看看这句话有没有语病...Hello,everybody.I'm Chinese.My name is Fucan.My English is very poor.so I want to study English at pains.I'll improve this present status.
My English is very poor so I want to study English. I'll improve .
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